quick note -->

instead of making a few different forum topics theres an official critique forum you can use that is pinned to the 'art help' forum

i'd suggest doing that next time :)

now onto the critique

the whole piece looksvery nice, your improving quickly. the hair patterns and eye also look amazing

the contrast of the horse and bg however dont match, try playing around with the backgrounds 'brightness and contrast'

for this piece however you need to work on lighting

since the light source is mainly behind the horse, the right of the horse and eveeything that the light doesn hit would be darker. hiwever where the light does hit, on the back, face and left legs youll need to add a rim off light around those areas.

a shadow would also be needed, facing away frim the light

Sunset Grove Farm said:

quick note -->

instead of making a few different forum topics theres an official critique forum you can use that is pinned to the 'art help' forum

i'd suggest doing that next time :)

now onto the critique

the whole piece looksvery nice, your improving quickly. the hair patterns and eye also look amazing

the contrast of the horse and bg however dont match, try playing around with the backgrounds 'brightness and contrast'

for this piece however you need to work on lighting

since the light source is mainly behind the horse, the right of the horse and eveeything that the light doesn hit would be darker. hiwever where the light does hit, on the back, face and left legs youll need to add a rim off light around those areas.

a shadow would also be needed, facing away frim the light