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Zephyr

08:07:48 Marley

congrats snow!

Snow Stable

08:04:58 Snow❆Gem

2012 Days

You have logged in 2012 days in a row.
You earned: 1100 Eden Bucks

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Oakmoss Stud

08:04:06 Oak

It's working for me?

I think I've grabbed one that I like, just needs to be something that doesn't look awkward floating in space, so nothing stood still

Fallow Stables

08:02:02 Propulsion♡

Broken link Oak

Calela Eventing

08:02:00 Cali

What I like doing is cross-referencing images, if that’s what you call it. Pop it into some sort of site and select DA, should grab some that are similar to your photo and then you just check each one if they’re stock

Oakmoss Stud

08:00:54 Oak

Pain, Jeri. At least you can keep the prepped cut outs for other pieces?

Oakmoss Stud

08:00:19 Oak

Like, what do I even search on DA to find horse stock with *this* vibe? xD

-Click-

Jericho Stables

07:59:48

I'm working on a piece for WhizBar. I have the background done, it's perfect, I love it. I've completely cut out no less than five horses and then decided I hate them and they don't fit the background :D

Calela Eventing

07:59:34 Cali

Mine was also a draft >.>

Oakmoss Stud

07:59:09 Oak

I need a really awkward pose and I just can't find something that hits right. I think I've settled on one, just need to get home from work so I can actually work on it xD

Artemis Ridge

07:58:55 Howl

Oak
I understand so much. I just prepped a draft for about an hour and now I don't even want to go back to try and fix it :,)

Calela Eventing

07:57:36 Cali

Oak
Oof, I feel that. I spent somewhat of an hour body prepping a piece only to decide I hated it

Oakmoss Stud

07:55:49 Oak

Fully bodyprepped, stared at the stock too long and now I don't like it >.> pain

Calela Eventing

07:55:49 Cali

It’s an essay about how perspective changes what is written in the news about the same events. Pretty fun actually

Artemis Ridge

07:54:47 Howl

I also have an essay, Cali lol
And hopefully it clears up for you soon!
(My essay is about Gulliver's Travels)

Enchanted Nights

07:53:45 Skvll_

Yeah the flu has been going around, my bf has a bad case of it currently!!
If you don't mind me asking, whats the essay about??
I love writing essays lmfao

Calela Eventing

07:52:46 Cali

Sorry I’m back, trying to finish this darn essay
I’m pretty good, got the flu but it’s starting to clear up I think

Enchanted Nights

07:52:24 Skvll_

Of course, Howl!!

Artemis Ridge

07:51:57 Howl

I've heard the same thing, so I'm not as worried. Thank you Skvll X)

Enchanted Nights

07:51:16 Skvll_

I think the temporary ones are more painful thank the permanent! That could just be me but I hope it hurts less this time around <3

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Zephyr

08:07:48 Marley

congrats snow!

Snow Stable

08:04:58 Snow❆Gem

2012 Days

You have logged in 2012 days in a row.
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Oakmoss Stud

08:04:06 Oak

It's working for me?

I think I've grabbed one that I like, just needs to be something that doesn't look awkward floating in space, so nothing stood still

Fallow Stables

08:02:02 Propulsion♡

Broken link Oak

Calela Eventing

08:02:00 Cali

Oakmoss Stud

08:00:54 Oak

Pain, Jeri. At least you can keep the prepped cut outs for other pieces?

Oakmoss Stud

08:00:19 Oak

Like, what do I even search on DA to find horse stock with *this* vibe? xD

-Click-

Jericho Stables

07:59:48

Calela Eventing

07:59:34 Cali

Mine was also a draft >.>

Oakmoss Stud

07:59:09 Oak

I need a really awkward pose and I just can't find something that hits right. I think I've settled on one, just need to get home from work so I can actually work on it xD

Artemis Ridge

07:58:55 Howl

Oak
I understand so much. I just prepped a draft for about an hour and now I don't even want to go back to try and fix it :,)

Calela Eventing

07:57:36 Cali

Oak
Oof, I feel that. I spent somewhat of an hour body prepping a piece only to decide I hated it

Oakmoss Stud

07:55:49 Oak

Fully bodyprepped, stared at the stock too long and now I don't like it >.> pain

Calela Eventing

07:55:49 Cali

It’s an essay about how perspective changes what is written in the news about the same events. Pretty fun actually

Artemis Ridge

07:54:47 Howl

I also have an essay, Cali lol
And hopefully it clears up for you soon!
(My essay is about Gulliver's Travels)

Enchanted Nights

07:53:45 Skvll_

Yeah the flu has been going around, my bf has a bad case of it currently!!
If you don't mind me asking, whats the essay about??
I love writing essays lmfao

Calela Eventing

07:52:46 Cali

Sorry I’m back, trying to finish this darn essay
I’m pretty good, got the flu but it’s starting to clear up I think

Enchanted Nights

07:52:24 Skvll_

Of course, Howl!!

Artemis Ridge

07:51:57 Howl

I've heard the same thing, so I'm not as worried. Thank you Skvll X)

Enchanted Nights

07:51:16 Skvll_

I think the temporary ones are more painful thank the permanent! That could just be me but I hope it hurts less this time around <3

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April 28, 2020 07:22 PM

Daisy Feilds

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I'm playing around with a few styles, but I think I am happy with the most recent pieces I have been putting out! This is my most recent:

I am looking for critique on this piece specifically. Honestly write every and any details you would want to see improved, however small or large they may be! Also what do you think a fair SB and AB for this image would be if I was to post it up for auction? I generally post my images AB's at 100-150k, but I want to see what some of you think it is worth being it literally took me 12 hours xD thank for the help!

Edited at April 28, 2020 07:23 PM by Daisy Feilds

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April 28, 2020 07:29 PM

Former Stable

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I honestly love the background and the rainbow, you have such a unique style. They have a colored pencil look while the horse and the mane still have a lot of depth. The tail does look slightly flat to me though.

I would set the SB at 50k and the AB at 250k :)

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April 28, 2020 08:45 PM

Wings Of Glory

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i say just practice every day i would work on not smudging the horses as harshly because it can make it look streaky and giving a pink tint to the nose where theres a marking at

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April 28, 2020 09:39 PM

Daisy Feilds

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White Hills said:

I honestly love the background and the rainbow, you have such a unique style. They have a colored pencil look while the horse and the mane still have a lot of depth. The tail does look slightly flat to me though.

I would set the SB at 50k and the AB at 250k :)

Okay thank you! I'll go back in and add some shadows to the tail to make it look a bit more voluminous ;)

Wings Of Glory said:

i say just practice every day i would work on not smudging the horses as harshly because it can make it look streaky and giving a pink tint to the nose where theres a marking at

Yep! Definitely working on finding a nice balance between the smudging I'm doing for the prep work, and I'll go back in and add that pink, I totally forgot that marking was there xD

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April 28, 2020 09:43 PM

Former Stable

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Honestly, it's your art piece, you are the artist. I think this looks gorgeous the way it is, everyone has a different style, and I adore your style.

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April 28, 2020 10:24 PM

Creekside Eventing

Posts: 949
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I adore this piece!

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