Horse Eden : Critique Me Please!

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Leafpool

09:53:24 Leaf

-HEE Click- After I show you this guy.

Leafpool

09:51:44 Leaf

Im gonna poof now bye.

Imperial Warmbloods

09:51:42 Imp/Impie/Impy

I am very happy, lol
-HEE Click-

Leafpool

09:51:01 Leaf

Thats nice art.

Motonemi

09:49:37 AL, mum to Nemi

Oh Tosky, well deserved for a pretty girl

Heart O' Love Horses

09:49:08 Lovey

@tosk
oooh I like that art, thats a good one

@sweet
2 w's is fun, one more close to 3!

Equile

09:48:03 Tosk's RID

Someone got artsies today
-HEE Click-

Dalas Estate

09:47:24 Detroit

Breadcrumbs
Same

Sweet Valley

09:46:55 Anna/Jewel

Im totally pumped

Sweet Valley

09:46:43 Anna/Jewel

My WWP boy. I didnt think it was gonna work, I guess dam and stud matched better than I thought! Anyways, something more than a WEE today!

Heart O' Love Horses

09:45:49 Lovey

That's another thing I'm loving. the new lighter and darker shades, it makes it so much more fun!
-HEE Click-
So I haven't played in years, any thoughts on his week 3

Shamrock Equines

09:45:06 Crowley

-HEE Click-

Breadcrumbs

09:44:03

stalking this one
-HEE Click-

Heart O' Love Horses

09:43:36 Lovey

That's pretty cool, wish i had one ;)

Breadcrumbs

09:43:35

8 EWW, 16 WWE , 1 WEW

A while back they didn't get above EEE - WEE combos

Breadcrumbs

09:42:27

there are like 22 apricot www in game right now

Heart O' Love Horses

09:41:14 Lovey

I just remember when they first came out however long agao and they were everywhere and then they kinda just dropped off for a while. I like seeing them again, that's only from my perspective though, maybe I'm wrong! XD

Breadcrumbs

09:40:30

And across all breeds too

Breadcrumbs

09:39:53

there have been more apricots than ever to be fair

Heart O' Love Horses

09:38:16 Lovey

I love the talk of more apricots, I feel like I never see them anymore. Would love some more buttermilk and black chestnut too lol

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Leafpool

09:53:24 Leaf

-HEE Click- After I show you this guy.

Leafpool

09:51:44 Leaf

Im gonna poof now bye.

Imperial Warmbloods

09:51:42 Imp/Impie/Impy

I am very happy, lol
-HEE Click-

Leafpool

09:51:01 Leaf

Thats nice art.

Motonemi

09:49:37 AL, mum to Nemi

Oh Tosky, well deserved for a pretty girl

Heart O' Love Horses

09:49:08 Lovey

@tosk
oooh I like that art, thats a good one

@sweet
2 w's is fun, one more close to 3!

Equile

09:48:03 Tosk's RID

Someone got artsies today
-HEE Click-

Dalas Estate

09:47:24 Detroit

Breadcrumbs
Same

Sweet Valley

09:46:55 Anna/Jewel

Im totally pumped

Sweet Valley

09:46:43 Anna/Jewel

My WWP boy. I didnt think it was gonna work, I guess dam and stud matched better than I thought! Anyways, something more than a WEE today!

Heart O' Love Horses

09:45:49 Lovey

That's another thing I'm loving. the new lighter and darker shades, it makes it so much more fun!
-HEE Click-
So I haven't played in years, any thoughts on his week 3

Shamrock Equines

09:45:06 Crowley

-HEE Click-

Breadcrumbs

09:44:03

stalking this one
-HEE Click-

Heart O' Love Horses

09:43:36 Lovey

That's pretty cool, wish i had one ;)

Breadcrumbs

09:43:35

8 EWW, 16 WWE , 1 WEW

A while back they didn't get above EEE - WEE combos

Breadcrumbs

09:42:27

there are like 22 apricot www in game right now

Heart O' Love Horses

09:41:14 Lovey

Breadcrumbs

09:40:30

And across all breeds too

Breadcrumbs

09:39:53

there have been more apricots than ever to be fair

Heart O' Love Horses

09:38:16 Lovey

I love the talk of more apricots, I feel like I never see them anymore. Would love some more buttermilk and black chestnut too lol

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Critique Me Please!

October 9, 2019 02:27 PM

Bridle Rock

Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!

Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty

Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour

A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:56 PM

Sagebrush

Posts: 4637
#463399
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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