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Silver Melody Acres
08:25:38 Solar - KNNs
Oh, nice
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Angels angels
08:25:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivory
It really just depends if they are a paint horse as in the breed or if they are a quarter horse lol just like if a dog is one breed or a different breed. There are different types of breeds pointers but they are all pointers
Gemstone Stable
08:24:59 Snow❆Gem
Ever seen men try a period cramp simulator? ;P

-YT Click-
Gemstone Stable
08:24:01 Snow❆Gem
@ally

Lightning bolt or spruce tree. :D
Fallow Stables
08:22:48 Propulsion♡
Star,
Ahh alr
Lucky Ranch
08:22:31 luhckeigh
and tb's are their older sister who they hate now but she raised them both
CrimsonValleyEstate
08:22:21 Crimson
yeah that would make more sense
Lucky Ranch
08:22:13 luhckeigh
crimson yes
Dawnmist Stables
08:21:55 
iirc it's more like a registry than a breed
Fallow Stables
08:21:54 Propulsion♡
Shark,
Ah maybe, assumed barn since they said pasture art?
CrimsonValleyEstate
08:21:41 Crimson
ah okay, so they overlap in a way? can a horse qualify for both?
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:38 Ally 💜
This is the only picture I have of Phantoms
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Gemstone Stable
08:21:29 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Neat! Moms cat is solid white a small white chest spot and a bit of white on her belly. Very similar. :D
Stargazer
08:21:19 Star - RID|KNN
Fallow, they are, guilty keeper
Lucky Ranch
08:20:38 luhckeigh
aqha and apha are like twins who wanna act like theyre unique but they really arent
-Starlight Haven-
08:20:32 Shark/Kai/Moon
Fallow
Pretty sure they meant they wanted to make art for the horse, aka adding onto the cue maybe..?
IvorySummitEstate
08:19:37 Ivory
So there’s also a paint breed? but other breeds can be paint as well? what makes a horse to be qualified as part of the paint breed and not just a quarter horse that’s a pain?
Fallow Stables
08:19:33 Propulsion♡
Star,
That's a horse xD
Angels angels
08:18:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
One of the older mares at the barn is that way lol she has about a 4 inch wide white spot up under her belly you can only see if she lays down
Stargazer
08:17:38 Star - RID|KNN
Just adding to pasture art at this point when I really need barns...
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Silver Melody Acres
08:25:38 Solar - KNNs
Oh, nice
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:25:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivory
It really just depends if they are a paint horse as in the breed or if they are a quarter horse lol just like if a dog is one breed or a different breed. There are different types of breeds pointers but they are all pointers
Gemstone Stable
08:24:59 Snow❆Gem
Ever seen men try a period cramp simulator? ;P

-YT Click-
Gemstone Stable
08:24:01 Snow❆Gem
@ally

Lightning bolt or spruce tree. :D
Fallow Stables
08:22:48 Propulsion♡
Star,
Ahh alr
Lucky Ranch
08:22:31 luhckeigh
and tb's are their older sister who they hate now but she raised them both
CrimsonValleyEstate
08:22:21 Crimson
yeah that would make more sense
Lucky Ranch
08:22:13 luhckeigh
crimson yes
Dawnmist Stables
08:21:55 
iirc it's more like a registry than a breed
Fallow Stables
08:21:54 Propulsion♡
Shark,
Ah maybe, assumed barn since they said pasture art?
CrimsonValleyEstate
08:21:41 Crimson
ah okay, so they overlap in a way? can a horse qualify for both?
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:38 Ally 💜
This is the only picture I have of Phantoms
-Click-
Gemstone Stable
08:21:29 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Neat! Moms cat is solid white a small white chest spot and a bit of white on her belly. Very similar. :D
Stargazer
08:21:19 Star - RID|KNN
Fallow, they are, guilty keeper
Lucky Ranch
08:20:38 luhckeigh
aqha and apha are like twins who wanna act like theyre unique but they really arent
-Starlight Haven-
08:20:32 Shark/Kai/Moon
Fallow
Pretty sure they meant they wanted to make art for the horse, aka adding onto the cue maybe..?
IvorySummitEstate
08:19:37 Ivory
So there’s also a paint breed? but other breeds can be paint as well? what makes a horse to be qualified as part of the paint breed and not just a quarter horse that’s a pain?
Fallow Stables
08:19:33 Propulsion♡
Star,
That's a horse xD
Angels angels
08:18:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
One of the older mares at the barn is that way lol she has about a 4 inch wide white spot up under her belly you can only see if she lays down
Stargazer
08:17:38 Star - RID|KNN
Just adding to pasture art at this point when I really need barns...
-HEE Click-

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:26 PM

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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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