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All Breeds

07:14:14 Fawn

Ah Dimmy he's ee though Dx

Dimmed

07:13:57 Dimmy

Oh nice Solar!

Oakmoss Stud

07:13:46 Oak

She went to him last year and threw me an EEE colt >.< but with grey! So he's going to hang around as a base for my grey show gelding army lol

Silver Melody Acres

07:13:16 Solar - KNNs

Alright, nice!
-HEE Click-

Dimmed

07:13:14 Dimmy

-HEE Click-
Off with hims balls

Dimmed

07:12:16 Dimmy

Oooh Tosk you rerolled Gracie

Dimmed

07:11:33 Dimmy

-HEE Click-
Disappointed

Dimmed

07:11:16 Dimmy

x.x

Shamrock Equines

07:10:50 Crowley

Why am I shaking?

Pon Brats

07:10:23

Glad he liked you, he hasn't been getting much love recently although all of the top boys track back to him :D

Irish Fields

07:09:56 Fawn

My main All Breeds

Pon Brats

07:09:02

In that case. Where do you breed shinies with ratings again?

Oakmoss Stud

07:08:45 Oak

Thank you! I saw he had straws in the shop so I yolo'd and grabbed one for my girl's second embryo

Irish Fields

07:08:05 Fawn

Congrats Oak!

Tamarack Mountain

07:07:57 Opal

congrats Oak

Pon Brats

07:07:46

Congrats Oak! Out of Frapo too!

Irish Fields

07:07:44 Fawn

You know copper is my weakness xD

Pon Brats

07:07:08

That's another one you could try and make behave, but I got more hope for the pon

-HEE Click-

Oakmoss Stud

07:06:54 Oak

-HEE Click- !! my first homebred WWW 🥹

Pon Brats

07:06:28

Ouh, that's gonna be interesting.

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All Breeds

07:14:14 Fawn

Ah Dimmy he's ee though Dx

Dimmed

07:13:57 Dimmy

Oh nice Solar!

Oakmoss Stud

07:13:46 Oak

She went to him last year and threw me an EEE colt >.< but with grey! So he's going to hang around as a base for my grey show gelding army lol

Silver Melody Acres

07:13:16 Solar - KNNs

Alright, nice!
-HEE Click-

Dimmed

07:13:14 Dimmy

-HEE Click-
Off with hims balls

Dimmed

07:12:16 Dimmy

Oooh Tosk you rerolled Gracie

Dimmed

07:11:33 Dimmy

-HEE Click-
Disappointed

Dimmed

07:11:16 Dimmy

x.x

Shamrock Equines

07:10:50 Crowley

Why am I shaking?

Pon Brats

07:10:23

Glad he liked you, he hasn't been getting much love recently although all of the top boys track back to him :D

Irish Fields

07:09:56 Fawn

My main All Breeds

Pon Brats

07:09:02

In that case. Where do you breed shinies with ratings again?

Oakmoss Stud

07:08:45 Oak

Thank you! I saw he had straws in the shop so I yolo'd and grabbed one for my girl's second embryo

Irish Fields

07:08:05 Fawn

Congrats Oak!

Tamarack Mountain

07:07:57 Opal

congrats Oak

Pon Brats

07:07:46

Congrats Oak! Out of Frapo too!

Irish Fields

07:07:44 Fawn

You know copper is my weakness xD

Pon Brats

07:07:08

That's another one you could try and make behave, but I got more hope for the pon

-HEE Click-

Oakmoss Stud

07:06:54 Oak

-HEE Click- !! my first homebred WWW 🥹

Pon Brats

07:06:28

Ouh, that's gonna be interesting.

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Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

Former Stable

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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