Horse Eden : Critique and Tips Wanted!

02:24:19 Exec/Lyssa

Thanks twin

Legacy Leagues

02:23:13 Alyssa ♡

Not to much to me.

02:21:22 Exec/Lyssa

Also is a J Med too much for the second match?

02:20:46 Exec/Lyssa

I’m scared of this match
-HEE Click-

02:19:56 Exec/Lyssa

02:19:11 Exec/Lyssa

Legacy Leagues

02:19:10 Alyssa ♡

I sprinkle good luck dust on you. Ive used svens only twice and never will again. They hate me lol

Ravenwood Farm

02:16:12 Raven

Thank you Min! I'm so frikin nervous for them lol. It's my first time using svens, and they are my two first WWW girls

02:15:36 Exec/Lyssa

Consult appointment done my surgery is for last week of February

Minerva

02:14:49 Min

Oooh those look fantastic Raven!

Ravenwood Farm

02:14:17 Raven

Thank you <3

Legacy Leagues

02:13:47 Alyssa ♡

I hope you get the thunder straw. They fit like a glove

Ravenwood Farm

02:13:06 Raven

With svens

Ravenwood Farm

02:11:31 Raven

I got these hopefully (not sure if I get the Thunderstruck straw or not yet)
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
And if I don't get the straw, I'll do this
-HEE Click-

Minerva

02:11:24 Min

That's all I've taken today as I've been somewhat preoccupied with mother lol but doubtless there will be many pony pics to come!

Legacy Leagues

02:07:05 Alyssa ♡

Can I see RO matches from people? Im bored

SwankPony

02:06:39 Swanky

Min do you have any more pics?!

Ravenwood Farm

02:05:03 Raven

That's good to hear! Congrats on finally getting her home🥳

Minerva

02:00:41 Min

Oak- she's just gorgeous :DD Very skittish and nervous at the moment but she absolutely marched out to the paddock this afternoon, had some mega zoomies and then kept creeping over to see if we had treats xD She's been largely ignoring the hay so far, but there's a little bit of grass in there and she's very keen on her bucket feeds and handheld treats. Big fan of the horslyx as well apparently xD

Ironworks Equestria

01:43:02 Seven | Harlan

Elfie,

Cute and wonderful!

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02:24:19 Exec/Lyssa

Thanks twin

Legacy Leagues

02:23:13 Alyssa ♡

Not to much to me.

02:21:22 Exec/Lyssa

Also is a J Med too much for the second match?

02:20:46 Exec/Lyssa

I’m scared of this match
-HEE Click-

02:19:56 Exec/Lyssa

02:19:11 Exec/Lyssa

Legacy Leagues

02:19:10 Alyssa ♡

I sprinkle good luck dust on you. Ive used svens only twice and never will again. They hate me lol

Ravenwood Farm

02:16:12 Raven

Thank you Min! I'm so frikin nervous for them lol. It's my first time using svens, and they are my two first WWW girls

02:15:36 Exec/Lyssa

Consult appointment done my surgery is for last week of February

Minerva

02:14:49 Min

Oooh those look fantastic Raven!

Ravenwood Farm

02:14:17 Raven

Thank you <3

Legacy Leagues

02:13:47 Alyssa ♡

I hope you get the thunder straw. They fit like a glove

Ravenwood Farm

02:13:06 Raven

With svens

Ravenwood Farm

02:11:31 Raven

I got these hopefully (not sure if I get the Thunderstruck straw or not yet)
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
And if I don't get the straw, I'll do this
-HEE Click-

Minerva

02:11:24 Min

That's all I've taken today as I've been somewhat preoccupied with mother lol but doubtless there will be many pony pics to come!

Legacy Leagues

02:07:05 Alyssa ♡

Can I see RO matches from people? Im bored

SwankPony

02:06:39 Swanky

Min do you have any more pics?!

Ravenwood Farm

02:05:03 Raven

That's good to hear! Congrats on finally getting her home🥳

Minerva

02:00:41 Min

Ironworks Equestria

01:43:02 Seven | Harlan

Elfie,

Cute and wonderful!

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June 12, 2017 09:14 PM

Zephyr Elites

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I would love some critique for this piece! Please give honest opinions don't be afraid to tell me exactly what you think.

http://oi63.tinypic.com/21j26h3.jpg

Edited at June 12, 2017 09:14 PM by Freedom Ranch

June 13, 2017 05:04 AM

Moonlight Stud

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Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

June 13, 2017 10:58 AM

Zephyr Elites

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Moonlight stud said:
Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

Thanks, I will try a lower opacity next time.

June 13, 2017 06:13 PM

Andraste Equine

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Yeah, it's blended a bit too much and the horse is too bright for the backround. I suggest looking for horse stock that matches the brightness.