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Wolf Dancer

01:04:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Yea that is nice I'll have to look into that once I get a phone since that would be nice to not have to worry about

Irish Fields

01:03:11 Fawn

It's a really nice feature because even if someone steals your card they can't use it

Wolf Dancer

01:02:21 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Ohh interesting! I don't have a phone currently but if I get one I'll do that, I didn't realize that was a option!

Wolfs Ire

01:01:25 Fawn

Download your banks app on your phone. You can then log into your account and lock/unlock your card at anytime. It swaps in less than 30 seconds

Wolf Dancer

01:00:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn how do you lock the card? Does it take a while to unlock? Also my card was a debit card they used so there's that as well

All Breeds

12:59:30 Fawn

I have a habit of locking my card 24/7 unless I'm actively about to use it. I've had my money stolen to many times

Wolf Dancer

12:57:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Ooof that's rough >.>

Wolf Dancer

12:57:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Somehow they didn't take the actual pair of spikes I had in the back though so I'm confused >.> They also left a trail of my items down my road and then we found the CD case they took from my parents cars at a random mailbox on the other side of town since someone in Facebook posted finding the CD binder >.> then they made it two small towns later to fill up their tank with gas >.>

All Breeds

12:57:19 Fawn

Oof I'm sorry it happened though. My aunt left her work laptop in her car one time and someone broke n and stole it x.x She almost got fired but thankfully there wasn't anything of value on it

Wolf Dancer

12:55:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
It was the one night I didn't bring everything in since I got home late from a track meet 😭

All Breeds

12:55:21 Fawn

I leave nothing in my car except an empty water bottle xD

Wolf Dancer

12:52:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)

They took my autographed track bag a pair of shoes my necklace (the first time I took it off to put in that bag as well) and some other odds and ends >.>

Wolf Dancer

12:50:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Night nope got about $250 worth of stuff then another $80 on my debit card/wallet it was right in front of my house and we have the videos too, but it's crazy that it happened since we live in the country and lot's of people have guns >.>

Judgement Hall

12:49:46 Night

Good grief, it seems we're all in the trenches tonight. Sorry to hear about that, Wolf. I hope whoever did it left with nothing and it was a wasted effort breaking into your car

Wolf Dancer

12:48:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)

My car got broken into >.>

Port Royal Equines

12:47:44 Elfie

The wind is blowing our shingles off. And sheets of metal off the shed roof.

Judgement Hall

12:44:23 Night

My cat managed to wake my brother up by being annoying, haha

Gene Anderson Farms

12:27:29

supposed to be a storm here soon but I feel like its not gonna be as bad as they make it seem

Castle Creek Stable

12:26:32 CC

we're getting potential tornadoes, or at the very least wind gusts up to 80 mph and hail here tomorrow. it was 90 degrees last wednesday and then two inches of snow the next day lol

Faithful Stables

12:26:21 Faith

Ugh its supposed to be bad here tomorrow and I am not looking forward to it

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Wolf Dancer

01:04:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Yea that is nice I'll have to look into that once I get a phone since that would be nice to not have to worry about

Irish Fields

01:03:11 Fawn

It's a really nice feature because even if someone steals your card they can't use it

Wolf Dancer

01:02:21 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Ohh interesting! I don't have a phone currently but if I get one I'll do that, I didn't realize that was a option!

Wolfs Ire

01:01:25 Fawn

Download your banks app on your phone. You can then log into your account and lock/unlock your card at anytime. It swaps in less than 30 seconds

Wolf Dancer

01:00:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn how do you lock the card? Does it take a while to unlock? Also my card was a debit card they used so there's that as well

All Breeds

12:59:30 Fawn

I have a habit of locking my card 24/7 unless I'm actively about to use it. I've had my money stolen to many times

Wolf Dancer

12:57:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
Ooof that's rough >.>

Wolf Dancer

12:57:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)

All Breeds

12:57:19 Fawn

Oof I'm sorry it happened though. My aunt left her work laptop in her car one time and someone broke n and stole it x.x She almost got fired but thankfully there wasn't anything of value on it

Wolf Dancer

12:55:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Fawn
It was the one night I didn't bring everything in since I got home late from a track meet 😭

All Breeds

12:55:21 Fawn

I leave nothing in my car except an empty water bottle xD

Wolf Dancer

12:52:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)

They took my autographed track bag a pair of shoes my necklace (the first time I took it off to put in that bag as well) and some other odds and ends >.>

Wolf Dancer

12:50:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Judgement Hall

12:49:46 Night

Good grief, it seems we're all in the trenches tonight. Sorry to hear about that, Wolf. I hope whoever did it left with nothing and it was a wasted effort breaking into your car

Wolf Dancer

12:48:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)

My car got broken into >.>

Port Royal Equines

12:47:44 Elfie

The wind is blowing our shingles off. And sheets of metal off the shed roof.

Judgement Hall

12:44:23 Night

My cat managed to wake my brother up by being annoying, haha

Gene Anderson Farms

12:27:29

supposed to be a storm here soon but I feel like its not gonna be as bad as they make it seem

Castle Creek Stable

12:26:32 CC

we're getting potential tornadoes, or at the very least wind gusts up to 80 mph and hail here tomorrow. it was 90 degrees last wednesday and then two inches of snow the next day lol

Faithful Stables

12:26:21 Faith

Ugh its supposed to be bad here tomorrow and I am not looking forward to it

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April 20, 2019 05:04 AM

Former Stable

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https://i.postimg.cc/dt9x46tr/Untitled48-1.png

So this is the black horse piece I have done, and I don't know what it isays but it's not quite right ,so anything you can spot PLEASE for the love of God point it out XD also does anyone know how you make things look softer on ibispaint?

Edited at April 20, 2019 05:08 AM by Raven Hollow Elite

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April 20, 2019 04:48 PM

Emerald Eventing

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I think you have a good start.
Personally, I think you should play around with the lighting a bit as the background and horse lighting does not match.

Also, the horses feet aren’t blended into the snow very well.
One last thing. The tail and feathers look a little messy. There are some great hair tutorials out there that I recommend you check out.
This is pretty much my hair painting technique:
https://www.deviantart.com/ehrendi/art/Mane-and-tail-tutorial-189546528

Nice job overall :)

Keep practicing!!!

Edited at April 20, 2019 04:48 PM by Emerald Eventing

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April 20, 2019 10:30 PM

Former Stable

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I'm seconding everything Emerald said. Also, the lines on the horse's shadow are very sharp, when in that lighting they'd be rather soft. I would recommend blurring the background a bit, too; it's very busy and draws attention away from the horse.

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May 8, 2019 10:16 PM

Former Stable

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Pretty much what Emerald said. Go around with the eraser tool one more time since I saw some green stuff (grass) around the hair. And maybe change the eye color and/or make it brighter. Outlining would be great. The hair needs some softening and less smudging. And maybe make the shadow a bit more faint as its on snow, so it should be a bit more faint! :)

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May 9, 2019 01:35 PM

Golden Hall Stables

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You have a really good start. In addition with what has been said I think if you can try blurring the background a little it may help the horse pop. You could also experiment with lighting to bring attention to certain areas.

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