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11:38:29 Void Malign

no, the wind advisory doesn't expire for another hour and a half. It's only slightly better than it was earlier

Nightingales Ridge

11:37:26 𔓘 Issy

Glacier, for me they have to be either reaallyyy pretty or brave

Nightingales Ridge

11:36:21 𔓘 Issy

Lol gren your 1 little SD jumper rider

11:36:05

Hasn't changed in six hours?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:32:28 Glacier Kittens

Hope you are staying safe, Void

11:31:35 Void Malign

it still fuckin' wimdy

Greenheart Stables

11:18:37 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

The amount of riders im about to fire is insane just from the yearlings

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:46 Glacier Kittens

Are triple superb horses worth keeping

Hayes Family Ranch

11:14:24 Fallon

Ty Gladius

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:12:56 Gladius

Fallon -if you click one of the gray ovals below the rating placard it has a list of achievements

River

11:12:45 ♡ River

While attempting to spell horse, my sleep deprived brain somehow spelled every curse word starting with h

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:09:29 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih

bd?

Hayes Family Ranch

11:07:51 Fallon

Is there a way to display show titles that your horses have won? I just got some and never have before.

11:06:04 Bluey

Fern?

-Starlight Haven-

11:05:40 Shark/Kai/Moon

Fawn
Stunning!

11:04:33 Fawn

I've been so good about not keeping PPP mares. Guess I have an exception to that rule.
-HEE Click-

-Starlight Haven-

10:57:13 Shark/Kai/Moon

for a brindle pattern, at least

-Starlight Haven-

10:56:50 Shark/Kai/Moon

Interesting. Used an Image reroll on a brindle. I didn't even know there were different brindles lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:11 Glacier Kittens

Total agreement about auto correct

10:55:33 Fawn

Glacier autocorrect sucks xD

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11:38:29 Void Malign

no, the wind advisory doesn't expire for another hour and a half. It's only slightly better than it was earlier

Nightingales Ridge

11:37:26 𔓘 Issy

Glacier, for me they have to be either reaallyyy pretty or brave

Nightingales Ridge

11:36:21 𔓘 Issy

Lol gren your 1 little SD jumper rider

11:36:05

Hasn't changed in six hours?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:32:28 Glacier Kittens

Hope you are staying safe, Void

11:31:35 Void Malign

it still fuckin' wimdy

Greenheart Stables

11:18:37 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

The amount of riders im about to fire is insane just from the yearlings

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:46 Glacier Kittens

Are triple superb horses worth keeping

Hayes Family Ranch

11:14:24 Fallon

Ty Gladius

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:12:56 Gladius

Fallon -if you click one of the gray ovals below the rating placard it has a list of achievements

River

11:12:45 ♡ River

While attempting to spell horse, my sleep deprived brain somehow spelled every curse word starting with h

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:09:29 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih

bd?

Hayes Family Ranch

11:07:51 Fallon

Is there a way to display show titles that your horses have won? I just got some and never have before.

11:06:04 Bluey

Fern?

-Starlight Haven-

11:05:40 Shark/Kai/Moon

Fawn
Stunning!

11:04:33 Fawn

I've been so good about not keeping PPP mares. Guess I have an exception to that rule.
-HEE Click-

-Starlight Haven-

10:57:13 Shark/Kai/Moon

for a brindle pattern, at least

-Starlight Haven-

10:56:50 Shark/Kai/Moon

Interesting. Used an Image reroll on a brindle. I didn't even know there were different brindles lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:11 Glacier Kittens

Total agreement about auto correct

10:55:33 Fawn

Glacier autocorrect sucks xD

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March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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