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Horizons stable
12:54:53 
Fern, Can you show me an answer you gave? I can take a look and maybe give you an answer
Alpine Acres
12:54:18 Lily
At least we will have RO trivia :D
Alpine Acres
12:53:50 Lily
I feel the exact same way Glacier, I only realised it was so soon today xD
Angels angels
12:53:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fern
Pm me a copy and paste of what you put in
Axon Acres
12:53:40 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I apparently need to throw an item at her, after she yeeted this girly out
-HEE Click-
Fernweh QH
12:53:18 Fern | Kinz
Does anyone play the Genetics Practice game? I know I'm entering correct combos, but it keeps telling me I had no right answers. I'm following the format on the bottom with the no spaces with commas in the exact order
Glacier Bay Cove
12:52:41 Glacier Kittens
Oh gosh darn it, RO is two days away and I am not ready for it, at all
Alpine Acres
12:51:31 Lily
lol
Angels angels
12:50:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
True Lily
Alpine Acres
12:49:59 Lily
It feels like it should be Friday
Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
-HEE Click-
I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD

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Horizons stable
12:54:53 
Fern, Can you show me an answer you gave? I can take a look and maybe give you an answer
Alpine Acres
12:54:18 Lily
At least we will have RO trivia :D
Alpine Acres
12:53:50 Lily
I feel the exact same way Glacier, I only realised it was so soon today xD
Angels angels
12:53:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fern
Pm me a copy and paste of what you put in
Axon Acres
12:53:40 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I apparently need to throw an item at her, after she yeeted this girly out
-HEE Click-
Fernweh QH
12:53:18 Fern | Kinz
Does anyone play the Genetics Practice game? I know I'm entering correct combos, but it keeps telling me I had no right answers. I'm following the format on the bottom with the no spaces with commas in the exact order
Glacier Bay Cove
12:52:41 Glacier Kittens
Oh gosh darn it, RO is two days away and I am not ready for it, at all
Alpine Acres
12:51:31 Lily
lol
Angels angels
12:50:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
True Lily
Alpine Acres
12:49:59 Lily
It feels like it should be Friday
Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
-HEE Click-
I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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