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WWE wild RID mare for sale! +15 map used.
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Wild W bravery mares, 15k and under. Some unbred this year.
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Wild EEE elite bravery pony mare 75k obo
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Port Royal Equines
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Rawhide ranch
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All of them are really cheap
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MakeEm Fancy
01:36:06 Ally 💜
WWE wild RID mare for sale! +15 map used.
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Asfamoth
01:28:55 Asfa
-HEE Click-
Wild W bravery mares, 15k and under. Some unbred this year.
The Lazy Ninja
11:59:48 Jessie
Wild EEE elite bravery pony mare 75k obo
-HEE Click-
Komorebi
11:50:01 Jazz
-HEE Click- WWW PON straw available #4 best freshman eventing sire
The Unknown
11:32:33 Unknown | Dark
-HEE Click-
Help me price this mare!
Port Royal Equines
11:26:14 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
New art at auction!

-HEE Click-
EEE broods for 3k!
Eagles Peak
11:25:42 
ABLB Studs Have LC Left (watch to win free straws): -HEE Click-

SH Broods (EEE,WEE): -HEE Click-

NEW Sport Horse Club, Contest happening right now!: -HEE Click-

Dressage & Jumping Shows (2900ebs entry): -HEE Click-
Dandelion
11:19:45 
Baby sales barn: Huge variety of elites and rare colour ranges up for sale. Nothing over 600ebs. Cheap selling due to needing space. Need all gone.

-HEE Click-
Midnight Manor
10:51:38 Bunny ♡
-HEE Click-
Rawhide ranch
10:39:57 Come and Buy
Clear out
Need them gone
All of them are really cheap
I mean really cheap
Come buy them please in need money I have very little ebs
-HEE Click-
Horses for sale in both barns

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Critique Please? :) November 28, 2018 09:51 PM

Former Stable
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/bvGNkzpZ/Fall-Horse-Pic.png
I'm thinking about auctioning this off, but I want to get a gauge on what I can improve on first.

Things I'm Not Happy With:
- The front hoof. It looks huge. I tried painting onto the other hooves and cutting part of the big one off, but I'm still unhappy with it.
- The tail, forelock, and mane. I'm just bad at them...
- My highlighting skills. Mostly of the muscles.

What do you think I could improve on?
What do you think a good buy now for this would be?

Also, My DA
https://www.deviantart.com/beetlebug16

Edited at November 28, 2018 10:11 PM by PurpleFox
Critique Please? :) November 28, 2018 11:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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Hi there. I really like this piece and i think the mane/tail look fine.

I do not think the front hoof looks large, it is just a full hoof while the rest are (from the stock image) presumably in sand.
You can better improve this imag by grounding your hooves using some slight highlighting in the dirt to make it look pushed up.

Your over all tones and lighting is really spot on.
As far as highlighting of the muscles, i think your current way of doing so is pretty spot on for the piece.

Really the only thing with this particular piece that draws my eye, is how defined and highlighted the nose portion of the face is vs. the rest of the horse. Not quite sure how you would fix this if it was natural. (Arabs tend to have their noses oiled).
If it was man made, i would suggest toning it down ever slightly to match your muscle highlighting.

I would love to commission you for a piece if you were ever so willing. :)
Critique Please? :) November 28, 2018 11:10 PM

Former Stable
 
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Thanks for the tips. I knew the grounding didn't look right but didn't even think about adding highlights to the leaves D:

I'm nervous about doing commissions xD I work best when I can just go with what speaks to me. And I'm not very solid with color changes yet. I've only ever done maybe two D:



Edited at November 29, 2018 12:11 AM by PurpleFox
Critique Please? :) December 2, 2018 08:26 PM


Weeping Willow Acres
 
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Nice. Everything looks in perfect together. I would buy for, like, 30k. Too bad I am broke though.

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