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Minerva

03:13:04 Min

Little shits

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:12:35 RRR (Jo)

I kept using SH studs for a while and that's how I ended up with tall mares... Now I'm doing PON x PON and getting 14.3 WWE+ colts lol

Minerva

03:10:03 Min

Lol that's progress at least!! I keep sabotaging myself to be fair as I keep using tall boys, so there's not much hope for me lol. At least capture days have been helping to boost my PON mare population

Tenebris Hollow

03:09:23 Aris/Maki

Chance
No

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:07:27 RRR (Jo)

Yeah it's hit and miss for me lately xD I've got the mares down to mostly PON, I just need to get a handle on the boys lol

Chance Stable

03:06:33 Chance

Is the groom a premium feature? I haven’t been on in a long while

Minerva

03:06:25 Min

Oooft that's the worst xD I'm attempting to bring my heights down and stick to PONs but it's really not going well so far lol

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:06:00 RRR (Jo)

Although this guy is kinda pretty lol
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7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:05:30 RRR (Jo)

Fair. Although I'm getting tired of WWW stallions that are 14.3h SH when I breed for PONs xD

Minerva

03:04:12 Min

Better than drowning in studs though I suppose!

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:03:27 RRR (Jo)

I'm hoping that some of these EEE fillies I got this RO disqualify themselves from being broodmares tomorrow. I have a ridiculous number of mares right now x)

Minerva

02:49:07 Min

-HEE Click-

Not sure this guy can decide what he's doing xD

Distorted Humor

02:45:44 Distorted/Lyssa

I like that bravery
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Gem

02:42:29 Gem

Fuckim winnndyyy 🦊

The Old Gods

02:39:16 Void Malign

it's still fuckin wimdy

Old Time Ranch

02:33:56 Gramps

Thanks for the advice. Thank you! I might give him a shot next RO anyhow

Alpine Acres

02:33:48 Lily

ohh Myth sending so many hugs your way <3

Executive Stables

02:33:45 Exec/Lyssa

I would not mind if she had a good week 4
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Executive Stables

02:32:28 Exec/Lyssa

So sorry for your loss Myth<3

Minerva

02:31:30 Min

Yeah Gramps unfortunately the only info you have from her really is that her scope isn't great. I'd just lob her at WWWs with a week 7 in scope and repeat any matches she seems to like

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Minerva

03:13:04 Min

Little shits

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:12:35 RRR (Jo)

I kept using SH studs for a while and that's how I ended up with tall mares... Now I'm doing PON x PON and getting 14.3 WWE+ colts lol

Minerva

03:10:03 Min

Tenebris Hollow

03:09:23 Aris/Maki

Chance
No

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:07:27 RRR (Jo)

Yeah it's hit and miss for me lately xD I've got the mares down to mostly PON, I just need to get a handle on the boys lol

Chance Stable

03:06:33 Chance

Is the groom a premium feature? I haven’t been on in a long while

Minerva

03:06:25 Min

Oooft that's the worst xD I'm attempting to bring my heights down and stick to PONs but it's really not going well so far lol

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:06:00 RRR (Jo)

Although this guy is kinda pretty lol
-HEE Click-

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:05:30 RRR (Jo)

Fair. Although I'm getting tired of WWW stallions that are 14.3h SH when I breed for PONs xD

Minerva

03:04:12 Min

Better than drowning in studs though I suppose!

7 Bar 6 Ranch

03:03:27 RRR (Jo)

I'm hoping that some of these EEE fillies I got this RO disqualify themselves from being broodmares tomorrow. I have a ridiculous number of mares right now x)

Minerva

02:49:07 Min

-HEE Click-

Not sure this guy can decide what he's doing xD

Distorted Humor

02:45:44 Distorted/Lyssa

I like that bravery
-HEE Click-

Gem

02:42:29 Gem

Fuckim winnndyyy 🦊

The Old Gods

02:39:16 Void Malign

it's still fuckin wimdy

Old Time Ranch

02:33:56 Gramps

Thanks for the advice. Thank you! I might give him a shot next RO anyhow

Alpine Acres

02:33:48 Lily

ohh Myth sending so many hugs your way <3

Executive Stables

02:33:45 Exec/Lyssa

I would not mind if she had a good week 4
-HEE Click-

Executive Stables

02:32:28 Exec/Lyssa

So sorry for your loss Myth<3

Minerva

02:31:30 Min

Yeah Gramps unfortunately the only info you have from her really is that her scope isn't great. I'd just lob her at WWWs with a week 7 in scope and repeat any matches she seems to like

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critique please

September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

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September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

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September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

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September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

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September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

critique please

September 23, 2018 02:34 PM

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