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Minerva
03:10:03 Min
Lol that's progress at least!! I keep sabotaging myself to be fair as I keep using tall boys, so there's not much hope for me lol. At least capture days have been helping to boost my PON mare population
Tenebris Hollow
03:09:23 Aris/Maki
Chance
No
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:07:27 RRR (Jo)
Yeah it's hit and miss for me lately xD I've got the mares down to mostly PON, I just need to get a handle on the boys lol
Chance Stable
03:06:33 Chance
Is the groom a premium feature? I haven’t been on in a long while
Minerva
03:06:25 Min
Oooft that's the worst xD I'm attempting to bring my heights down and stick to PONs but it's really not going well so far lol
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:06:00 RRR (Jo)
Although this guy is kinda pretty lol
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7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:05:30 RRR (Jo)
Fair. Although I'm getting tired of WWW stallions that are 14.3h SH when I breed for PONs xD
Minerva
03:04:12 Min
Better than drowning in studs though I suppose!
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:03:27 RRR (Jo)
I'm hoping that some of these EEE fillies I got this RO disqualify themselves from being broodmares tomorrow. I have a ridiculous number of mares right now x)
Minerva
02:49:07 Min
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Not sure this guy can decide what he's doing xD
Distorted Humor
02:45:44 Distorted/Lyssa
I like that bravery
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Gem
02:42:29 Gem
Fuckim winnndyyy 🦊
The Old Gods
02:39:16 Void Malign
it's still fuckin wimdy
Old Time Ranch
02:33:56 Gramps
Thanks for the advice. Thank you! I might give him a shot next RO anyhow
Alpine Acres
02:33:48 Lily
ohh Myth sending so many hugs your way <3
Executive Stables
02:33:45 Exec/Lyssa
I would not mind if she had a good week 4
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Executive Stables
02:32:28 Exec/Lyssa
So sorry for your loss Myth<3
Minerva
02:31:30 Min
Yeah Gramps unfortunately the only info you have from her really is that her scope isn't great. I'd just lob her at WWWs with a week 7 in scope and repeat any matches she seems to like
Alpine Acres
02:30:59 Lily
lol xD
Old Time Ranch
02:30:36 Gramps
I didn't even see that *face palms* I'll get there one day

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Minerva
03:10:03 Min
Lol that's progress at least!! I keep sabotaging myself to be fair as I keep using tall boys, so there's not much hope for me lol. At least capture days have been helping to boost my PON mare population
Tenebris Hollow
03:09:23 Aris/Maki
Chance
No
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:07:27 RRR (Jo)
Yeah it's hit and miss for me lately xD I've got the mares down to mostly PON, I just need to get a handle on the boys lol
Chance Stable
03:06:33 Chance
Is the groom a premium feature? I haven’t been on in a long while
Minerva
03:06:25 Min
Oooft that's the worst xD I'm attempting to bring my heights down and stick to PONs but it's really not going well so far lol
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:06:00 RRR (Jo)
Although this guy is kinda pretty lol
-HEE Click-
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:05:30 RRR (Jo)
Fair. Although I'm getting tired of WWW stallions that are 14.3h SH when I breed for PONs xD
Minerva
03:04:12 Min
Better than drowning in studs though I suppose!
7 Bar 6 Ranch
03:03:27 RRR (Jo)
I'm hoping that some of these EEE fillies I got this RO disqualify themselves from being broodmares tomorrow. I have a ridiculous number of mares right now x)
Minerva
02:49:07 Min
-HEE Click-

Not sure this guy can decide what he's doing xD
Distorted Humor
02:45:44 Distorted/Lyssa
I like that bravery
-HEE Click-
Gem
02:42:29 Gem
Fuckim winnndyyy 🦊
The Old Gods
02:39:16 Void Malign
it's still fuckin wimdy
Old Time Ranch
02:33:56 Gramps
Thanks for the advice. Thank you! I might give him a shot next RO anyhow
Alpine Acres
02:33:48 Lily
ohh Myth sending so many hugs your way <3
Executive Stables
02:33:45 Exec/Lyssa
I would not mind if she had a good week 4
-HEE Click-
Executive Stables
02:32:28 Exec/Lyssa
So sorry for your loss Myth<3
Minerva
02:31:30 Min
Yeah Gramps unfortunately the only info you have from her really is that her scope isn't great. I'd just lob her at WWWs with a week 7 in scope and repeat any matches she seems to like
Alpine Acres
02:30:59 Lily
lol xD
Old Time Ranch
02:30:36 Gramps
I didn't even see that *face palms* I'll get there one day

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I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 10:50 PM

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https://s22.postimg.cc/4413ye2c1/Black_White_Chestnut_Horse_Stable_Avi-_HEE.png
Anything i can add to make it pop at all? Suggest anything you think would be Cute/Awesome/Amazing!

Edited at August 18, 2018 10:51 PM by ~Running Free~
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:26 PM

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The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:29 PM

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RavenHale said:
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.

It is, sorta. Like separate horses kinda
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:43 PM

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The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:44 PM

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RavenHale said:
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.

It is higher up,and the back legs are stretched out but i am sleepy, i could be seeing thing as well *Yawns*
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:46 PM


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Are you looking for constructive critiques?
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:54 PM

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Just anything that could really help future pieces, stuff i did wrong, etc.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 12:37 AM


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This is a cute idea! Although there are a few things I noticed. The edges of the horses are rough, the horses are out of proportion, the horses could be matched to the BG a bit more, and the credits could be smaller but less fuzzy. If you'd like tips on how to fix these issue just message me :)
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 08:36 AM


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Hi Running!

This piece is quite cute! I really like the concept and I love the contrasting colors of the horses' stock. It definitely makes each one stand out from the background.
Although, I do have a few critiques that I feel could help your art a lot.

First of all, it appears that you simply cut the horses out and pasted them onto a background. I would recommend looking up some horse prep tutorials on DeviantArt or see if there are any available on here in the forums. I feel that horse prep could help your work a lot.

Second, the horses don't look like they belong in the background. I would definitely work on highlights and shadows. In this piece, it appears the light source is coming from the top left hand corner. Parts of the horse facing this direction would be lighter than the sides not in the direct light. The stock images you chose don't have the same light source as the background. Working with highlights and shadows would fix this. :) Also, I'm not sure what program you are using but try to mess around with some of the Auto-Color, Auto-Contrast, and Auto-White Balance features. When I was starting out with art, these helped me make my horse seem as though it is really in the background.

Third, the manes and tails are really awkward and unnatural looking. They seem blocky and do not flow. When working with manes and tails really try out different tools and brushed. And definitely watch or view some tutorials! Tutorials as well as studying natural horse manes help a ton! Manes aren't blocky so be sure to make some fly aways and strands of different lengths.

I hope this helps! Please mail me if you have any questions or if you would like any future tips! :)

Thanks!
Willow
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 10:07 AM

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Ok thank you so much guys! Now i can see a;ll of that now because i am actually looking for it <3 All the tips and stuff will really help future pieces, like the light parts for example. I am testing out a different art site, so i can probably find a small brush. Thank Y'all!

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