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I'd save a little more before buying a new barn
fire
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pm me that last one
fire
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bye
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love it
fire
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thanks
if i have 114867 eb should i buy a new barn or not .how much would be left
Aura Show Horses
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My horse's name is Stargazer...
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12:48:44 Pea/Aura
Awww! I love that name!
fire
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tinkerbell
Aura Show Horses
12:47:50 Pea/Aura
Cute!! What's her name?
fire
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yay shes full of sass and a shetland stuborn
Aura Show Horses
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You have a mare?
fire
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it was asome she even was swimming
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Soo fun lol
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Geez! Beach sounds soon fun!
fire
12:38:53 
both and went to the beach
Aura Show Horses
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No problem!
fire
12:38:28 
one sec ill be back just have to give my horses water
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12:38:25 Pea/Aura
Fire
Sounds fun Riding! Do you jump or just ride around.
fire
12:37:23 
great just went back to school and it sucks have been ridding my horse every day bare back

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Aura Show Horses
12:51:41 Pea/Aura
Bye
Thanks!
Aura Show Horses
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14k left
I'd save a little more before buying a new barn
fire
12:51:12 
pm me that last one
fire
12:50:58 
bye
fire
12:50:06 
love it
fire
12:49:54 
thanks
if i have 114867 eb should i buy a new barn or not .how much would be left
Aura Show Horses
12:49:32 Pea/Aura
My horse's name is Stargazer...
Aura Show Horses
12:48:44 Pea/Aura
Awww! I love that name!
fire
12:48:12 
tinkerbell
Aura Show Horses
12:47:50 Pea/Aura
Cute!! What's her name?
fire
12:47:00 
yay shes full of sass and a shetland stuborn
Aura Show Horses
12:46:13 Pea/Aura
You have a mare?
fire
12:45:17 
it was asome she even was swimming
Aura Show Horses
12:39:38 Pea/Aura
Soo fun lol
Aura Show Horses
12:39:22 Pea/Aura
Geez! Beach sounds soon fun!
fire
12:38:53 
both and went to the beach
Aura Show Horses
12:38:52 Pea/Aura
No problem!
fire
12:38:28 
one sec ill be back just have to give my horses water
Aura Show Horses
12:38:25 Pea/Aura
Fire
Sounds fun Riding! Do you jump or just ride around.
fire
12:37:23 
great just went back to school and it sucks have been ridding my horse every day bare back

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I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 10:50 PM

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https://s22.postimg.cc/4413ye2c1/Black_White_Chestnut_Horse_Stable_Avi-_HEE.png
Anything i can add to make it pop at all? Suggest anything you think would be Cute/Awesome/Amazing!

Edited at August 18, 2018 10:51 PM by ~Running Free~
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:26 PM

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The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:29 PM

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RavenHale said:
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.

It is, sorta. Like separate horses kinda
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:43 PM

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The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:44 PM

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RavenHale said:
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.

It is higher up,and the back legs are stretched out but i am sleepy, i could be seeing thing as well *Yawns*
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:46 PM


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Are you looking for constructive critiques?
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:54 PM

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Just anything that could really help future pieces, stuff i did wrong, etc.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 12:37 AM


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This is a cute idea! Although there are a few things I noticed. The edges of the horses are rough, the horses are out of proportion, the horses could be matched to the BG a bit more, and the credits could be smaller but less fuzzy. If you'd like tips on how to fix these issue just message me :)
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 08:36 AM


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Hi Running!

This piece is quite cute! I really like the concept and I love the contrasting colors of the horses' stock. It definitely makes each one stand out from the background.
Although, I do have a few critiques that I feel could help your art a lot.

First of all, it appears that you simply cut the horses out and pasted them onto a background. I would recommend looking up some horse prep tutorials on DeviantArt or see if there are any available on here in the forums. I feel that horse prep could help your work a lot.

Second, the horses don't look like they belong in the background. I would definitely work on highlights and shadows. In this piece, it appears the light source is coming from the top left hand corner. Parts of the horse facing this direction would be lighter than the sides not in the direct light. The stock images you chose don't have the same light source as the background. Working with highlights and shadows would fix this. :) Also, I'm not sure what program you are using but try to mess around with some of the Auto-Color, Auto-Contrast, and Auto-White Balance features. When I was starting out with art, these helped me make my horse seem as though it is really in the background.

Third, the manes and tails are really awkward and unnatural looking. They seem blocky and do not flow. When working with manes and tails really try out different tools and brushed. And definitely watch or view some tutorials! Tutorials as well as studying natural horse manes help a ton! Manes aren't blocky so be sure to make some fly aways and strands of different lengths.

I hope this helps! Please mail me if you have any questions or if you would like any future tips! :)

Thanks!
Willow
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 10:07 AM

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Ok thank you so much guys! Now i can see a;ll of that now because i am actually looking for it <3 All the tips and stuff will really help future pieces, like the light parts for example. I am testing out a different art site, so i can probably find a small brush. Thank Y'all!

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