Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Looking Glass Stable
10:21:48 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-
I adore this little filly ♡
River
10:17:30 ♡ River
What patterns do y'all want to see in AA's and SH's?
Judgement Hall
10:16:34 Night
Oh my god, I finally unlocked the freaking swamp in explore
KG3den's Stable
10:13:24 3den
How is everyone? I can't remember the last time I logged in.
Morning Glory Farms
10:10:51 Terici/Dino/Trish
ariiiiiii did you look at the discord at all? check out all my hard work? lol
Axon Acres
09:51:48 Sav pt 2
Ooo, do show the capture day goodies. I'm alright, busy as hell with school, but getting back into some research projects which I am excited about :D
The Joker
09:50:48 Ari <3
Same Bri XD

Hiya Sav! I'm gooddd, had a good run on capture day :P how about you? How are you?
Axon Acres
09:45:14 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I still don't know how you happened
ShiningStar Stables
09:45:11 Chey / Star
Thanks! Every so often my gelding makers throw me a cute filly that gets spared from the free range xD
Judgement Hall
09:42:32 Night
What a cutie you got there, Chey
~Savy~
09:41:41 Sav
Ari <3 How's it goin?
ShiningStar Stables
09:36:34 Chey / Star
She's cute! Useless, but cute lol
-HEE Click-
Wyllow Creek
09:35:57 Bri
that's*
Wyllow Creek
09:35:41 Bri
Yesss, that one of my favorites I've done. I still haven't actually finished BG3
The Joker
09:34:43 Ari <3
I loveee your arts, my Astarion inspired one is still one of my favourites <3
Wyllow Creek
09:34:09 Bri
Excited to start doing art again too! c:

I got a couple in the works already.
The Joker
09:30:31 Ari <3
Love it Bri XD

Thank you Fern! Unknown did a great job with it
Stone Haven Farm
09:30:20 Court
22 isn't too bad. I finally lost one at 25 not that long ago :P
Fernweh QH
09:29:39 Fern | Kinz
Ari, I love your palette!
Wyllow Creek
09:29:33 Bri
The odds were definitely not in their favor

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Looking Glass Stable
10:21:48 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-
I adore this little filly ♡
River
10:17:30 ♡ River
What patterns do y'all want to see in AA's and SH's?
Judgement Hall
10:16:34 Night
Oh my god, I finally unlocked the freaking swamp in explore
KG3den's Stable
10:13:24 3den
How is everyone? I can't remember the last time I logged in.
Morning Glory Farms
10:10:51 Terici/Dino/Trish
ariiiiiii did you look at the discord at all? check out all my hard work? lol
Axon Acres
09:51:48 Sav pt 2
Ooo, do show the capture day goodies. I'm alright, busy as hell with school, but getting back into some research projects which I am excited about :D
The Joker
09:50:48 Ari <3
Same Bri XD

Hiya Sav! I'm gooddd, had a good run on capture day :P how about you? How are you?
Axon Acres
09:45:14 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I still don't know how you happened
ShiningStar Stables
09:45:11 Chey / Star
Thanks! Every so often my gelding makers throw me a cute filly that gets spared from the free range xD
Judgement Hall
09:42:32 Night
What a cutie you got there, Chey
~Savy~
09:41:41 Sav
Ari <3 How's it goin?
ShiningStar Stables
09:36:34 Chey / Star
She's cute! Useless, but cute lol
-HEE Click-
Wyllow Creek
09:35:57 Bri
that's*
Wyllow Creek
09:35:41 Bri
Yesss, that one of my favorites I've done. I still haven't actually finished BG3
The Joker
09:34:43 Ari <3
I loveee your arts, my Astarion inspired one is still one of my favourites <3
Wyllow Creek
09:34:09 Bri
Excited to start doing art again too! c:

I got a couple in the works already.
The Joker
09:30:31 Ari <3
Love it Bri XD

Thank you Fern! Unknown did a great job with it
Stone Haven Farm
09:30:20 Court
22 isn't too bad. I finally lost one at 25 not that long ago :P
Fernweh QH
09:29:39 Fern | Kinz
Ari, I love your palette!
Wyllow Creek
09:29:33 Bri
The odds were definitely not in their favor

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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