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PaulienQ

04:03:47

Someone who wants to raid?

Alpine Acres

03:30:35 Lily

Kk
Do you mean if you're making art for someone else? Just PM them with the file links :) you can upload them to gifyu which is really easy to use and allowed on HEE

Nightingales Ridge

03:15:44 𔓘 Issy

Woohoo unlocked Jungle biome

Pon Brats

03:01:48

I can't decide if I want to send her to a pon for the second embryo, or a shiny SH

-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:59:51

A few, but as soon as they are pon.. they dodge all color xD

Kk shows

02:28:45

if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them

All Breeds

02:25:52 Fawn

And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀

Wolfs Ire

02:23:45 Fawn

His name suits him so painfully well x.x

Wolfs Ire

02:22:44 Fawn

I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD

Pon Brats

02:22:26

It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:21:39

I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it

Wolfs Ire

02:20:01 Fawn

I did through the mod page ;)

All Breeds

02:19:20 Fawn

I beg your finest of pardons?

Dirty Paws

02:19:16 ♘Tosk

Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?

Dirty Paws

02:18:45 ♘Tosk

And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃

Dirty Paws

02:18:10 ♘Tosk

Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner

All Breeds

02:17:34 Fawn

I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD

Breadcrumbs

02:15:24

Too many accounts xD

All Breeds

02:14:44 Fawn

Tosk xD

Breadcrumbs

02:13:26

Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x

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PaulienQ

04:03:47

Someone who wants to raid?

Alpine Acres

03:30:35 Lily

Kk
Do you mean if you're making art for someone else? Just PM them with the file links :) you can upload them to gifyu which is really easy to use and allowed on HEE

Nightingales Ridge

03:15:44 𔓘 Issy

Woohoo unlocked Jungle biome

Pon Brats

03:01:48

I can't decide if I want to send her to a pon for the second embryo, or a shiny SH

-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:59:51

A few, but as soon as they are pon.. they dodge all color xD

Kk shows

02:28:45

if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them

All Breeds

02:25:52 Fawn

And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀

Wolfs Ire

02:23:45 Fawn

His name suits him so painfully well x.x

Wolfs Ire

02:22:44 Fawn

I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD

Pon Brats

02:22:26

It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:21:39

I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it

Wolfs Ire

02:20:01 Fawn

I did through the mod page ;)

All Breeds

02:19:20 Fawn

I beg your finest of pardons?

Dirty Paws

02:19:16 ♘Tosk

Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?

Dirty Paws

02:18:45 ♘Tosk

And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃

Dirty Paws

02:18:10 ♘Tosk

Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner

All Breeds

02:17:34 Fawn

I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD

Breadcrumbs

02:15:24

Too many accounts xD

All Breeds

02:14:44 Fawn

Tosk xD

Breadcrumbs

02:13:26

Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

~Savy~

Posts: 1405
#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

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March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

Posts: 5270
#136222
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

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March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

~Savy~

Posts: 1405
#136228
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

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March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#136229
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

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March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

~Savy~

Posts: 1405
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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