Horse Eden Eventing Game
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MakeEm Fancy
11:01:03 Ally 💜
You got this Glacier
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:26 Arctic Katz
Not sure how realistic it is, but I will try working on it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:51 Arctic Katz
My goal is to attempt to get some more 100 stall barns by the end of December
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:59 Ally 💜
I think that will be my goal next month
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:46 Ally 💜
I need at least 4 more 100 stall barns
Sunni
10:48:05 Sunni bunny
Ally we will have more gelding's this RO haha.
I might need a second barn.
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:01 Ally 💜
Im slowly decluttering lol but majority of what I have is geldings XD
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:44 Arctic Katz
Interesting
MakeEm Fancy
10:37:39 Ally 💜
I have 9 open stalls 🥴 oops
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:48 Arctic Katz
Going to reorganise my barns again, based on the bravery ratings
Snitches' Stitches
10:18:55 Snitch
Same wild. I have like 30 horses I need to FR that I'd like money for and then horses to bravery test
Glacier Bay Cove
10:05:49 Arctic Katz
Same, so I can plant hay, for my horses
Glacier Bay Cove
10:04:36 Arctic Katz
And have breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:06 Arctic Katz
After RO, I will have more horses to bravery test
Sunni
09:36:46 Sunni bunny
Same wild.
Wild_Potatoes
09:35:51 
I wish RO would hurry up and get here
Sunni
09:33:53 Sunni bunny
Cove I'll be good until RO.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:33:40 Bird
@Glacier, lol,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:33:18 Arctic Katz
Mine are organised for right now,unless I end up capturing more horses
Sunni
09:32:22 Sunni bunny
I got my barns organized, haha took a while.

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MakeEm Fancy
11:01:03 Ally 💜
You got this Glacier
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:26 Arctic Katz
Not sure how realistic it is, but I will try working on it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:51 Arctic Katz
My goal is to attempt to get some more 100 stall barns by the end of December
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:59 Ally 💜
I think that will be my goal next month
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:46 Ally 💜
I need at least 4 more 100 stall barns
Sunni
10:48:05 Sunni bunny
Ally we will have more gelding's this RO haha.
I might need a second barn.
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:01 Ally 💜
Im slowly decluttering lol but majority of what I have is geldings XD
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:44 Arctic Katz
Interesting
MakeEm Fancy
10:37:39 Ally 💜
I have 9 open stalls 🥴 oops
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:48 Arctic Katz
Going to reorganise my barns again, based on the bravery ratings
Snitches' Stitches
10:18:55 Snitch
Same wild. I have like 30 horses I need to FR that I'd like money for and then horses to bravery test
Glacier Bay Cove
10:05:49 Arctic Katz
Same, so I can plant hay, for my horses
Glacier Bay Cove
10:04:36 Arctic Katz
And have breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:06 Arctic Katz
After RO, I will have more horses to bravery test
Sunni
09:36:46 Sunni bunny
Same wild.
Wild_Potatoes
09:35:51 
I wish RO would hurry up and get here
Sunni
09:33:53 Sunni bunny
Cove I'll be good until RO.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:33:40 Bird
@Glacier, lol,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:33:18 Arctic Katz
Mine are organised for right now,unless I end up capturing more horses
Sunni
09:32:22 Sunni bunny
I got my barns organized, haha took a while.

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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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