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Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary
Circle Star RIDs
05:40:14 Granny C
Humor - ok, guess I don't get why it would be a tiny bit terrifying then - no matter
Distorted Humor
05:38:23 
lol no it’s not terrifying in that I don’t think any of us will we’re all old enough for it not to affect us
The Barefoot Barn
05:36:35 Blakley
May someone with extra time check out my barn and PM me to tell me what I’m doing wrong with breeding and why I keep getting such low ratings?
Circle Star RIDs
05:36:07 Granny C
Humor - think they'll have nightmares from watching it ?

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Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary
Circle Star RIDs
05:40:14 Granny C
Humor - ok, guess I don't get why it would be a tiny bit terrifying then - no matter
Distorted Humor
05:38:23 
lol no it’s not terrifying in that I don’t think any of us will we’re all old enough for it not to affect us
The Barefoot Barn
05:36:35 Blakley
May someone with extra time check out my barn and PM me to tell me what I’m doing wrong with breeding and why I keep getting such low ratings?
Circle Star RIDs
05:36:07 Granny C
Humor - think they'll have nightmares from watching it ?

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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM

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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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