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PRICE REDUCED Beautiful WWW ISH Mare for sale! I am only selling because I need the funds! She has never been prioritized and has full potential.
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Lots of horses for sale!
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1/9 WWW Freshie Thread
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TB embryo auction. Includes WWW producing champagne tobiano TBLB mare

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TB brood thread for 196! Lots of fun colors available including Dun, Rabicano, Tobiano, Apricot producers and more!
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Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 22, 2024 05:06 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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It's hard to believe it's been 8 months since I did my first manip. It's an addiction, I swear. I've finally gotten to a point where I'm pretty happy with my last two pieces which means it's time to let other people rip them apart XD
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Seriously though, please do give some critique and be as nitpicky as possible! I want to improve >:)
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Both images are clicky so you can zoom in on the details.. canvas size is very variable since I just go with whatever the background is :P
Edit: Looks like there will be a CCC (mini-rumble) coming up! I would love some input on what tier to sign up for :>

Edited at October 22, 2024 05:48 PM by Bignus Bognus
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 22, 2024 05:11 PM


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Also - what kind of art do you want to see from me next? I would love some ideas <3
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 23, 2024 01:07 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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I could barely find anything XD but the way the hair lays especially on the freisan, looks a little funky when it hits the ground, maybe work on the flow on the ground?
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:04 PM


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Dash and Duchess said:
I could barely find anything XD but the way the hair lays especially on the freisan, looks a little funky when it hits the ground, maybe work on the flow on the ground?


Thank you!! I see what you mean... I think I was too focused on trying to get it all in frame lol. I'll try looking at some references for next time <3
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:13 PM


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For rumble, T1 gets pretty competitive, so I would say you would 100% rock T2! I do agree with what dash said above. You can always add some multiply layers and go with the flow of the hair strands to imitate a fold in the tail! Everything else looks pretty damn good! Same with the feathers on the feet! :D I still struggle with that personally. 🤣
But everything else is absolutely stunning! Your lighting is gorgeous, your soft body prep is amazing! I love!!
Edit to add, your grounding work is also absolutely stunning. 😍 I am obsessed!

Edited at October 24, 2024 12:15 PM by Foggy Forest Stables
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:35 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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Foggy Forest Stables said:
For rumble, T1 gets pretty competitive, so I would say you would 100% rock T2! I do agree with what dash said above. You can always add some multiply layers and go with the flow of the hair strands to imitate a fold in the tail! Everything else looks pretty damn good! Same with the feathers on the feet! :D I still struggle with that personally. 🤣
But everything else is absolutely stunning! Your lighting is gorgeous, your soft body prep is amazing! I love!!
Edit to add, your grounding work is also absolutely stunning. 😍 I am obsessed!


Thank you Foggy 🥺 those are my favourite parts to do so I'm glad that is coming through <333
Will do for T2!! And yeah, definitely gonna work on hair. Something super long for my next WIP perhaps 👀
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 27, 2024 07:05 PM


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Okay, short update... I tried adjusting the tail & feathers on the friesian just with the mesh transform tool and some multiply layers like Foggy suggested (plus fiddled with the shadows from the leaves)... I know it's still not perfect but it is an improvement, no? :D
I think I've got the "I wanna keep it" outta me so it'll be up for auction shortly <3

Edited at October 27, 2024 07:06 PM by Bignus Bognus

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