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I'm extremely proud and fond of this piece Looking for some feedback, so I can continue to grow |
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Hi! I absolutely adore your style! The lighting, especially the pink light on the shoulder/front leg, is just delicious 🤤 Some small improvements i see could be made are the direction of the hair- the tail is blowing forward like there's a strong wind, while the mane is blown back by the horse's movement. You could either have the mane blown forward to match the tail, or have the tail match the movement of the horse and mane. You could sort of wrap it around the hind leg kind of like youve got now but make it still flowing back like the mane is. The mane and tail i feel are lacking some darker shadows to match the lighting. The underside of the mane and much of the tail would be in shadow, and I would maybe add a soft rimlight especially on the forelock and the side of the tail facing the pink light? And also carry that pink light further down the foreleg to the hoof ^^ You've already got everything down really well, and i think just a few little adjustments could help elevate the piece further<3 |
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Thank you so much ♡ Something I do definitely struggle with is hair 😭
KPH Equestrian said:
Hi! I absolutely adore your style! The lighting, especially the pink light on the shoulder/front leg, is just delicious 🤤 Some small improvements i see could be made are the direction of the hair- the tail is blowing forward like there's a strong wind, while the mane is blown back by the horse's movement. You could either have the mane blown forward to match the tail, or have the tail match the movement of the horse and mane. You could sort of wrap it around the hind leg kind of like youve got now but make it still flowing back like the mane is. The mane and tail i feel are lacking some darker shadows to match the lighting. The underside of the mane and much of the tail would be in shadow, and I would maybe add a soft rimlight especially on the forelock and the side of the tail facing the pink light? And also carry that pink light further down the foreleg to the hoof ^^ You've already got everything down really well, and i think just a few little adjustments could help elevate the piece further<3
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Windy with Flurries
