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Prismatic
06:14:36 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Frey
The Disney companion?
Prismatic
06:13:49 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Tennant's Doctor had the best personality, I think.
Gallifrey Falls
06:13:48 Frey"Allons-y
She is the first season of the Disney companion. Season 2 got a different companion.
Gem Queens Estate
06:13:15 Snow❆Gem
I have to go now. I might be by on in 2-2 1/2 hours. ;P

Have a good night everyone!
Gallifrey Falls
06:12:43 Frey"Allons-y
Gem
The 9th doctor might have revived the show but Tennant gave it a new life lol
Prismatic
06:12:28 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Frey
Is that the newest one? I've only watched a few episodes of the newest Doctor
Gallifrey Falls
06:11:50 Frey"Allons-y
Prism
Same for Tennant though Ruby Sunday is my current favorite companion.
Gem Queens Estate
06:11:03 Snow❆Gem
@myth

I agree, all the others are trying to be like him! LMAO
Prismatic
06:10:42 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
He's who I think of by default when I think of Doctor Who, but I also think that the Amy/Rory arc with Matt Smith's doctor were some of the best episodes in the show
Gallifrey Falls
06:10:30 Frey"Allons-y
-Click-
Gem Queens Estate
06:10:15 Snow❆Gem
Yay! Apricot quest done. BUT another SH! O.o

-HEE Click-
Gallifrey Falls
06:09:40 Frey"Allons-y
He IS the Doctor lol
Gem Queens Estate
06:09:37 Snow❆Gem
@myth
@prism

Oh! lol That's it! It kept me up last night for a bit. ;P

@myth

OK, and I seeeee. :D
Prismatic
06:09:07 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I love David Tennant's Doctor <3
Gallifrey Falls
06:07:57 Frey"Allons-y
"Allons-y"!!!
Mythological
06:07:07 Crowley
Gem
Nah it's about a dream lol She's about the same at the moment. Found out how to get her to take her medication willingly xD
Prismatic
06:06:50 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Gem

You didn't ask me, but the Dr. Who saying is "Allons y"
Angels angels
06:06:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
No you can't
Mythological
06:06:02 Crowley
Em
I doubt it.
Gem Queens Estate
06:05:47 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Puppy? And hows the sick Yorkie?

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Prismatic
06:14:36 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Frey
The Disney companion?
Prismatic
06:13:49 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Tennant's Doctor had the best personality, I think.
Gallifrey Falls
06:13:48 Frey"Allons-y
She is the first season of the Disney companion. Season 2 got a different companion.
Gem Queens Estate
06:13:15 Snow❆Gem
I have to go now. I might be by on in 2-2 1/2 hours. ;P

Have a good night everyone!
Gallifrey Falls
06:12:43 Frey"Allons-y
Gem
The 9th doctor might have revived the show but Tennant gave it a new life lol
Prismatic
06:12:28 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Frey
Is that the newest one? I've only watched a few episodes of the newest Doctor
Gallifrey Falls
06:11:50 Frey"Allons-y
Prism
Same for Tennant though Ruby Sunday is my current favorite companion.
Gem Queens Estate
06:11:03 Snow❆Gem
@myth

I agree, all the others are trying to be like him! LMAO
Prismatic
06:10:42 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
He's who I think of by default when I think of Doctor Who, but I also think that the Amy/Rory arc with Matt Smith's doctor were some of the best episodes in the show
Gallifrey Falls
06:10:30 Frey"Allons-y
-Click-
Gem Queens Estate
06:10:15 Snow❆Gem
Yay! Apricot quest done. BUT another SH! O.o

-HEE Click-
Gallifrey Falls
06:09:40 Frey"Allons-y
He IS the Doctor lol
Gem Queens Estate
06:09:37 Snow❆Gem
@myth
@prism

Oh! lol That's it! It kept me up last night for a bit. ;P

@myth

OK, and I seeeee. :D
Prismatic
06:09:07 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I love David Tennant's Doctor <3
Gallifrey Falls
06:07:57 Frey"Allons-y
"Allons-y"!!!
Mythological
06:07:07 Crowley
Gem
Nah it's about a dream lol She's about the same at the moment. Found out how to get her to take her medication willingly xD
Prismatic
06:06:50 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
@Gem

You didn't ask me, but the Dr. Who saying is "Allons y"
Angels angels
06:06:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
No you can't
Mythological
06:06:02 Crowley
Em
I doubt it.
Gem Queens Estate
06:05:47 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Puppy? And hows the sick Yorkie?

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Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 08:30 AM


desert palms
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/vZfHwMWX/Screen-Shot-2018-10-15-at-7-34-00-PM.jpg
I made this manipulation yesterday, and I've been working on improving/finding my style lately. What are some things I could work on and improve, and what would you say is a good starting price for an avatar like this? -M

Edited at October 16, 2018 08:30 AM by desert palms
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 08:36 AM


Sweet Sugar Acres
 
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That's beautiful!
Maybe 10k-20k?
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 10:54 AM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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gonna have to disagree
this piece is outstanding!
he amonts of detail have bene put into this
100k-250k ^^

in memory of sugar said:
That's beautiful!
Maybe 10k-20k?



Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 11:26 AM


WildWillow
 
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If this were my piece, I would charge 30k.
There are a few things I can notice that if it were my piece I would change.
You definitely need to work on having the lighting on the horse blend into the background. For example, on the horse's belly and legs there is a yellowy-green tinge. Either from a stain on the stock horse or reflection from grass. Since the horse is in water, the reflection should be blue.
The lighting coming from the left side of the background is yellow yet the highlights on the horse are blue. The white blur around the horse also does not make sense on the backside of the horse since the light is coming from the left side.
The mane and tail look good. Although, it does look like you forgot to cut out part of the original stock horse's background between the back leg and the tail. From what I can see, it looks like there is brown behind the tail. I am unsure exactly what this is, but it does look like the stock horse's background.
The horse is walking through the water so there should be ripples or splashes in the water. In the reflection, the hooves should not be visible since the hooves are under the water. I do think lowering the opacity on the reflection could help as well.
The last thing I think you could change and it would increase the price of your work is working on horse prep. The lines on the horse's barrel needs to be smoothed out. It looks very rigid and looks like you smudged down. In other places, the smudging looks inconsistent. At the bottom of the horse's barrel, it looks like it wasn't smoothly cut out. Take your time - it may seem like it takes forever but it really makes a difference! If the stock horse's barrel was actually formed like that, it is okay to "sculpt" the horse or trim down a bit farther to make it look smooth. I do this a lot in some of my pieces!


Overall your piece is very stunning and I love the idea for it! The grey horse definitely the perfect color for this background. :) I can't wait to see some of your pieces in the future and how you improve.
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 05:49 PM


desert palms
 
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WildWillow said:
If this were my piece, I would charge 30k.
There are a few things I can notice that if it were my piece I would change.
You definitely need to work on having the lighting on the horse blend into the background. For example, on the horse's belly and legs there is a yellowy-green tinge. Either from a stain on the stock horse or reflection from grass. Since the horse is in water, the reflection should be blue.
The lighting coming from the left side of the background is yellow yet the highlights on the horse are blue. The white blur around the horse also does not make sense on the backside of the horse since the light is coming from the left side.
The mane and tail look good. Although, it does look like you forgot to cut out part of the original stock horse's background between the back leg and the tail. From what I can see, it looks like there is brown behind the tail. I am unsure exactly what this is, but it does look like the stock horse's background.
The horse is walking through the water so there should be ripples or splashes in the water. In the reflection, the hooves should not be visible since the hooves are under the water. I do think lowering the opacity on the reflection could help as well.
The last thing I think you could change and it would increase the price of your work is working on horse prep. The lines on the horse's barrel needs to be smoothed out. It looks very rigid and looks like you smudged down. In other places, the smudging looks inconsistent. At the bottom of the horse's barrel, it looks like it wasn't smoothly cut out. Take your time - it may seem like it takes forever but it really makes a difference! If the stock horse's barrel was actually formed like that, it is okay to "sculpt" the horse or trim down a bit farther to make it look smooth. I do this a lot in some of my pieces!


Overall your piece is very stunning and I love the idea for it! The grey horse definitely the perfect color for this background. :) I can't wait to see some of your pieces in the future and how you improve.


Thank you! I will definitely try to fix some of those things

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