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03:39:21 Ally
what happens if you reroll a brindle?
Nightingales Ridge
03:38:37 𔓘 Issy
I like her bum spots
Nightingales Ridge
03:38:20 𔓘 Issy
Al *.* I hope she's good to you
Nightingales Ridge
03:37:44 𔓘 Issy
Sunni...are you yet to experience a ginger nut?
ArcticLights
03:37:11 Ceci / (Call me) AL
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Be good or else...
Nightingales Ridge
03:36:47 𔓘 Issy
LOL yes biscuit segregation
Sunni
03:36:43 Sunni bunny
Ginger nut biscuits sounds actually good.
Nightingales Ridge
03:36:20 𔓘 Issy
Yes nervous and exciting
Minerva
03:36:01 Min
I like the odd ginger nut! Can't put them into the biscuit tub with the rest though or everything will be a ginger nut
Nightingales Ridge
03:35:12 𔓘 Issy
Who's a ginger nut biscuit fan? I find people love them or hate then
I found dairy free ones I've been pounding back after a dip in the coffee
Sunni
03:34:53 Sunni bunny
Issy I am excited for Monday I am officially learning machinery.
Also the HEE luck rolls on more geldings.
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Alpine Acres
03:34:08 Lily
I'm so nervous for tomorrow >.>
Nightingales Ridge
03:33:44 𔓘 Issy
I shall pray to HEE God's to be good
Nightingales Ridge
03:33:17 𔓘 Issy
Mondaysssss looming yayy
Sunni
03:32:21 Sunni bunny
Thank you, he is gonna be a new flashy gelding haha.
Hopefully my luck keeps rolling.
Nightingales Ridge
03:31:53 𔓘 Issy
I'm afraid she might get yeeted one day is she's knot up to snuff
Nightingales Ridge
03:30:30 𔓘 Issy
Nice! Love that sabino
Minerva
03:29:58 Min
Oooh pretty Sunni!

Yesss Issy xD
Sunni
03:29:03 Sunni bunny
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God that coat!
Hopefully it still looks good when he is older.
Hopefully I keep getting food foals.
Astray
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03:39:21 Ally
what happens if you reroll a brindle?
Nightingales Ridge
03:38:37 𔓘 Issy
I like her bum spots
Nightingales Ridge
03:38:20 𔓘 Issy
Al *.* I hope she's good to you
Nightingales Ridge
03:37:44 𔓘 Issy
Sunni...are you yet to experience a ginger nut?
ArcticLights
03:37:11 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

Be good or else...
Nightingales Ridge
03:36:47 𔓘 Issy
LOL yes biscuit segregation
Sunni
03:36:43 Sunni bunny
Ginger nut biscuits sounds actually good.
Nightingales Ridge
03:36:20 𔓘 Issy
Yes nervous and exciting
Minerva
03:36:01 Min
I like the odd ginger nut! Can't put them into the biscuit tub with the rest though or everything will be a ginger nut
Nightingales Ridge
03:35:12 𔓘 Issy
Who's a ginger nut biscuit fan? I find people love them or hate then
I found dairy free ones I've been pounding back after a dip in the coffee
Sunni
03:34:53 Sunni bunny
Issy I am excited for Monday I am officially learning machinery.
Also the HEE luck rolls on more geldings.
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
03:34:08 Lily
I'm so nervous for tomorrow >.>
Nightingales Ridge
03:33:44 𔓘 Issy
I shall pray to HEE God's to be good
Nightingales Ridge
03:33:17 𔓘 Issy
Mondaysssss looming yayy
Sunni
03:32:21 Sunni bunny
Thank you, he is gonna be a new flashy gelding haha.
Hopefully my luck keeps rolling.
Nightingales Ridge
03:31:53 𔓘 Issy
I'm afraid she might get yeeted one day is she's knot up to snuff
Nightingales Ridge
03:30:30 𔓘 Issy
Nice! Love that sabino
Minerva
03:29:58 Min
Oooh pretty Sunni!

Yesss Issy xD
Sunni
03:29:03 Sunni bunny
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God that coat!
Hopefully it still looks good when he is older.
Hopefully I keep getting food foals.
Astray
03:28:55 Stay |
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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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