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04:44:03 Hannah
PRICE REDUCED Beautiful WWW ISH Mare for sale! I am only selling because I need the funds! She has never been prioritized and has full potential.
-HEE Click-

Lots of horses for sale!
-PPPs, 1/1s, and more, only 400ebs!

-HEE Click-

1/9 WWW Freshie Thread
-HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
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TB embryo auction. Includes WWW producing champagne tobiano TBLB mare

-HEE Click-

TB brood thread for 196! Lots of fun colors available including Dun, Rabicano, Tobiano, Apricot producers and more!
Darkwood
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Dark Magic
Art Auction
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KPH Equestrian
04:14:40 Jake From State Farm
wrong link lmao
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KPH Equestrian
04:12:59 Jake From State Farm
WWW ISH freshie straw thread!
-HEE Click-
Kaldwin Stud
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LB SD Stud auction, all have hit their breed leaderboards. X, TB, and WB
Buried Origins Ridge
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SHLB and color Embryos available. Pm to claim
Haylo
03:53:19 elisa ✦
Tons of mares up for breeding.CHEAP! prices start at only $100!
-HEE Click-
MC Ace
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Taking offers on these EWW mares and more. Some unbred.

-HEE Click-
Peachy
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Looking to get back into art and am needing some practice - PM for a free piece! -Click-

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
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Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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