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full moon
08:31:05 usagi
my fillies are taking over the barn
Aura Show Horses
08:30:49 Aura /Pea
-HEE Click- OMG the RID I captured! 😱
Circle Star RIDs
08:30:42 Granny C
Oh, forgot the mail is wako at the moment
Painted Perfection
08:30:39 Luna
Usagi...what are you telling me yes for?
Stormsong Manor
08:30:14 Ven
I wouldn't let someone else cut up my work but other artists might not mind it. You just have to ask
Painted Perfection
08:30:10 Luna
If you have permission from the artist no its not. But if you dont then yes
Jericho Stables
08:30:07 
Shi, not against the rules per se. But it is in bad taste to the artist. Ask them to make cuts.
full moon
08:29:48 usagi
Luna yes
Stormsong Manor
08:29:46 Ven
Permission is key
Shiecka
08:29:31 Shi
is it against the rules to make art cuts yourself of a piece you have bought from someone else? with permission and all credits of course.
full moon
08:29:27 usagi
I cant see the PM circle star
Stormsong Manor
08:29:21 Ven
SH, ISH and PON can have all pinto and appaloosa patterns
Painted Perfection
08:29:17 Luna
Is what rhetorical?
Nightingales Ridge
08:28:33 𔓘 Issy
Is that rhetorical
Stormsong Manor
08:28:19 Ven
You can't capture TB, KNN or AA tobianos
Aura Show Horses
08:28:04 Aura /Pea
Jeri
Lol
full moon
08:27:46 usagi
but not a sabino
Painted Perfection
08:27:44 Luna
Unfortunately there isnt anything they could give me to get them to disolve. Unlike a kidney stone. So I have to just let my body lass them naturally and if something happens I get to have emergency surgery to remove my gallbladder completely
Stormsong Manor
08:27:39 Ven
It comes up with the same frequency as other patterns
full moon
08:27:33 usagi
so I can catch a tobiano?

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full moon
08:31:05 usagi
my fillies are taking over the barn
Aura Show Horses
08:30:49 Aura /Pea
-HEE Click- OMG the RID I captured! 😱
Circle Star RIDs
08:30:42 Granny C
Oh, forgot the mail is wako at the moment
Painted Perfection
08:30:39 Luna
Usagi...what are you telling me yes for?
Stormsong Manor
08:30:14 Ven
I wouldn't let someone else cut up my work but other artists might not mind it. You just have to ask
Painted Perfection
08:30:10 Luna
If you have permission from the artist no its not. But if you dont then yes
Jericho Stables
08:30:07 
Shi, not against the rules per se. But it is in bad taste to the artist. Ask them to make cuts.
full moon
08:29:48 usagi
Luna yes
Stormsong Manor
08:29:46 Ven
Permission is key
Shiecka
08:29:31 Shi
is it against the rules to make art cuts yourself of a piece you have bought from someone else? with permission and all credits of course.
full moon
08:29:27 usagi
I cant see the PM circle star
Stormsong Manor
08:29:21 Ven
SH, ISH and PON can have all pinto and appaloosa patterns
Painted Perfection
08:29:17 Luna
Is what rhetorical?
Nightingales Ridge
08:28:33 𔓘 Issy
Is that rhetorical
Stormsong Manor
08:28:19 Ven
You can't capture TB, KNN or AA tobianos
Aura Show Horses
08:28:04 Aura /Pea
Jeri
Lol
full moon
08:27:46 usagi
but not a sabino
Painted Perfection
08:27:44 Luna
Unfortunately there isnt anything they could give me to get them to disolve. Unlike a kidney stone. So I have to just let my body lass them naturally and if something happens I get to have emergency surgery to remove my gallbladder completely
Stormsong Manor
08:27:39 Ven
It comes up with the same frequency as other patterns
full moon
08:27:33 usagi
so I can catch a tobiano?

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In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:42 AM


Solasta Farms
 
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Hi friends, I just recently tried photo manipulation for the first time and would like to know what everyone thinks! I do notice some minor technical mistakes that were ignored because I was too tired (lol.) I would love some advice on coat recoloring and manes/tails especially!
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Just for context, the head and neck belonged to a bay horse and the body belonged to a grey. They were spliced together and recolored!

Edited at August 19, 2020 12:44 AM by Rose-Moor Stables
In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 09:01 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.

In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:29 PM


Solasta Farms
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:

I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.



Thank you so much for this lovely advice! I definitely see what you're saying!

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