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Angels angels
09:16:30 Will Buy Brindles!!
Hello everyone! I just wanted to say I will buy any and all brindles and chimeras you capture tomorrow! Don't free them just send them to me for 2-5k! (Will pay more for color or higher rated)
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I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 10:50 PM

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https://s22.postimg.cc/4413ye2c1/Black_White_Chestnut_Horse_Stable_Avi-_HEE.png
Anything i can add to make it pop at all? Suggest anything you think would be Cute/Awesome/Amazing!

Edited at August 18, 2018 10:51 PM by ~Running Free~
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:26 PM

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The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:29 PM

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RavenHale said:
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.

It is, sorta. Like separate horses kinda
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:43 PM

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The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:44 PM

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RavenHale said:
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.

It is higher up,and the back legs are stretched out but i am sleepy, i could be seeing thing as well *Yawns*
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:46 PM


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Are you looking for constructive critiques?
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:54 PM

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Just anything that could really help future pieces, stuff i did wrong, etc.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 12:37 AM


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This is a cute idea! Although there are a few things I noticed. The edges of the horses are rough, the horses are out of proportion, the horses could be matched to the BG a bit more, and the credits could be smaller but less fuzzy. If you'd like tips on how to fix these issue just message me :)
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 08:36 AM


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Hi Running!

This piece is quite cute! I really like the concept and I love the contrasting colors of the horses' stock. It definitely makes each one stand out from the background.
Although, I do have a few critiques that I feel could help your art a lot.

First of all, it appears that you simply cut the horses out and pasted them onto a background. I would recommend looking up some horse prep tutorials on DeviantArt or see if there are any available on here in the forums. I feel that horse prep could help your work a lot.

Second, the horses don't look like they belong in the background. I would definitely work on highlights and shadows. In this piece, it appears the light source is coming from the top left hand corner. Parts of the horse facing this direction would be lighter than the sides not in the direct light. The stock images you chose don't have the same light source as the background. Working with highlights and shadows would fix this. :) Also, I'm not sure what program you are using but try to mess around with some of the Auto-Color, Auto-Contrast, and Auto-White Balance features. When I was starting out with art, these helped me make my horse seem as though it is really in the background.

Third, the manes and tails are really awkward and unnatural looking. They seem blocky and do not flow. When working with manes and tails really try out different tools and brushed. And definitely watch or view some tutorials! Tutorials as well as studying natural horse manes help a ton! Manes aren't blocky so be sure to make some fly aways and strands of different lengths.

I hope this helps! Please mail me if you have any questions or if you would like any future tips! :)

Thanks!
Willow
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 10:07 AM

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Ok thank you so much guys! Now i can see a;ll of that now because i am actually looking for it <3 All the tips and stuff will really help future pieces, like the light parts for example. I am testing out a different art site, so i can probably find a small brush. Thank Y'all!

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