Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 198   Season: Winter   
$: 0
Forecast: Windy with Flurries
Forecast:
Wed 10:17pm  
Stables Online:  112 
Chatbox
Judgement Hall
10:16:34 Night
Oh my god, I finally unlocked the freaking swamp in explore
KG3den's Stable
10:13:24 3den
How is everyone? I can't remember the last time I logged in.
Morning Glory Farms
10:10:51 Terici/Dino/Trish
ariiiiiii did you look at the discord at all? check out all my hard work? lol
Axon Acres
09:51:48 Sav pt 2
Ooo, do show the capture day goodies. I'm alright, busy as hell with school, but getting back into some research projects which I am excited about :D
The Joker
09:50:48 Ari <3
Same Bri XD

Hiya Sav! I'm gooddd, had a good run on capture day :P how about you? How are you?
Axon Acres
09:45:14 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I still don't know how you happened
ShiningStar Stables
09:45:11 Chey / Star
Thanks! Every so often my gelding makers throw me a cute filly that gets spared from the free range xD
Judgement Hall
09:42:32 Night
What a cutie you got there, Chey
~Savy~
09:41:41 Sav
Ari <3 How's it goin?
ShiningStar Stables
09:36:34 Chey / Star
She's cute! Useless, but cute lol
-HEE Click-
Wyllow Creek
09:35:57 Bri
that's*
Wyllow Creek
09:35:41 Bri
Yesss, that one of my favorites I've done. I still haven't actually finished BG3
The Joker
09:34:43 Ari <3
I loveee your arts, my Astarion inspired one is still one of my favourites <3
Wyllow Creek
09:34:09 Bri
Excited to start doing art again too! c:

I got a couple in the works already.
The Joker
09:30:31 Ari <3
Love it Bri XD

Thank you Fern! Unknown did a great job with it
Stone Haven Farm
09:30:20 Court
22 isn't too bad. I finally lost one at 25 not that long ago :P
Fernweh QH
09:29:39 Fern | Kinz
Ari, I love your palette!
Wyllow Creek
09:29:33 Bri
The odds were definitely not in their favor
Stone Haven Farm
09:29:06 Court
Ari XD
The Joker
09:29:02 Ari <3
Your barns turned into the hunger games 😆

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests

Embark on a Quest.

Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Judgement Hall
10:16:34 Night
Oh my god, I finally unlocked the freaking swamp in explore
KG3den's Stable
10:13:24 3den
How is everyone? I can't remember the last time I logged in.
Morning Glory Farms
10:10:51 Terici/Dino/Trish
ariiiiiii did you look at the discord at all? check out all my hard work? lol
Axon Acres
09:51:48 Sav pt 2
Ooo, do show the capture day goodies. I'm alright, busy as hell with school, but getting back into some research projects which I am excited about :D
The Joker
09:50:48 Ari <3
Same Bri XD

Hiya Sav! I'm gooddd, had a good run on capture day :P how about you? How are you?
Axon Acres
09:45:14 Sav pt 2
-HEE Click-
I still don't know how you happened
ShiningStar Stables
09:45:11 Chey / Star
Thanks! Every so often my gelding makers throw me a cute filly that gets spared from the free range xD
Judgement Hall
09:42:32 Night
What a cutie you got there, Chey
~Savy~
09:41:41 Sav
Ari <3 How's it goin?
ShiningStar Stables
09:36:34 Chey / Star
She's cute! Useless, but cute lol
-HEE Click-
Wyllow Creek
09:35:57 Bri
that's*
Wyllow Creek
09:35:41 Bri
Yesss, that one of my favorites I've done. I still haven't actually finished BG3
The Joker
09:34:43 Ari <3
I loveee your arts, my Astarion inspired one is still one of my favourites <3
Wyllow Creek
09:34:09 Bri
Excited to start doing art again too! c:

I got a couple in the works already.
The Joker
09:30:31 Ari <3
Love it Bri XD

Thank you Fern! Unknown did a great job with it
Stone Haven Farm
09:30:20 Court
22 isn't too bad. I finally lost one at 25 not that long ago :P
Fernweh QH
09:29:39 Fern | Kinz
Ari, I love your palette!
Wyllow Creek
09:29:33 Bri
The odds were definitely not in their favor
Stone Haven Farm
09:29:06 Court
Ari XD
The Joker
09:29:02 Ari <3
Your barns turned into the hunger games 😆

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1    2 

I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 10:50 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216847
Give Award
https://s22.postimg.cc/4413ye2c1/Black_White_Chestnut_Horse_Stable_Avi-_HEE.png
Anything i can add to make it pop at all? Suggest anything you think would be Cute/Awesome/Amazing!

Edited at August 18, 2018 10:51 PM by ~Running Free~
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:26 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216873
Give Award
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:29 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216875
Give Award


RavenHale said:
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.

It is, sorta. Like separate horses kinda
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:43 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216880
Give Award
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:44 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216882
Give Award


RavenHale said:
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.

It is higher up,and the back legs are stretched out but i am sleepy, i could be seeing thing as well *Yawns*
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:46 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
Posts: 4186
#216883
Give Award
Are you looking for constructive critiques?
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:54 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216886
Give Award
Just anything that could really help future pieces, stuff i did wrong, etc.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 12:37 AM


Idle Lane Farms
 
Posts: 4186
#216904
Give Award
This is a cute idea! Although there are a few things I noticed. The edges of the horses are rough, the horses are out of proportion, the horses could be matched to the BG a bit more, and the credits could be smaller but less fuzzy. If you'd like tips on how to fix these issue just message me :)
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 08:36 AM


WildWillow
 
Posts: 2190
#216937
Give Award
Hi Running!

This piece is quite cute! I really like the concept and I love the contrasting colors of the horses' stock. It definitely makes each one stand out from the background.
Although, I do have a few critiques that I feel could help your art a lot.

First of all, it appears that you simply cut the horses out and pasted them onto a background. I would recommend looking up some horse prep tutorials on DeviantArt or see if there are any available on here in the forums. I feel that horse prep could help your work a lot.

Second, the horses don't look like they belong in the background. I would definitely work on highlights and shadows. In this piece, it appears the light source is coming from the top left hand corner. Parts of the horse facing this direction would be lighter than the sides not in the direct light. The stock images you chose don't have the same light source as the background. Working with highlights and shadows would fix this. :) Also, I'm not sure what program you are using but try to mess around with some of the Auto-Color, Auto-Contrast, and Auto-White Balance features. When I was starting out with art, these helped me make my horse seem as though it is really in the background.

Third, the manes and tails are really awkward and unnatural looking. They seem blocky and do not flow. When working with manes and tails really try out different tools and brushed. And definitely watch or view some tutorials! Tutorials as well as studying natural horse manes help a ton! Manes aren't blocky so be sure to make some fly aways and strands of different lengths.

I hope this helps! Please mail me if you have any questions or if you would like any future tips! :)

Thanks!
Willow
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 10:07 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#216969
Give Award
Ok thank you so much guys! Now i can see a;ll of that now because i am actually looking for it <3 All the tips and stuff will really help future pieces, like the light parts for example. I am testing out a different art site, so i can probably find a small brush. Thank Y'all!

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1    2 

Refresh