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Snow Stable
08:10:13 Snow❆Gem
Wild PON EWE roan grullo? O.o I guess he's going into the show string. lol

-HEE Click-
Santana Rising
07:48:36 San
and my WWE - W wild PON girl of course. I have two WWEs of her already, but so far I haven't bred her to a brave WWW, when I really should.
Tamarack Mountain
07:48:19 Opal
I just want to get one as I will be busy RO until later and I would miss all LC
Santana Rising
07:47:07 San
I'm so lazy to stalk straw threads, but I feel I should for my few EWE/EEE - W girl combos. They are always missing out on the AD brave boys and then I have to decide if I want to do a cowardish WWW boy, or a brave boy that might not be as adequate towards their AD rating.
Tamarack Mountain
07:44:18 Opal
oh that makes sense thank you
Santana Rising
07:43:52 San
I'm pretty sure the owner keeps that list and then sends out the straws on RO and you pay to pick them up like a regular straw offer
Tamarack Mountain
07:41:47 Opal
just curious as I have not really bought straws on a forum thread before, do you pay right away or when?
Sweet Valley
07:33:59 Anna/Jewel
Pretty
Cloudy Moon Stables
07:30:30 Cloud; Moon; Jewel
-HEE Click-
Rerolled this gal and she's a peacock
Cappuccino
07:29:21 Heyy it's Capp
Brindle is ALL random luck
Sweet Valley
07:28:39 Anna/Jewel
Like did you do a specific scene like Mountain or Beach or Jungle or Meadow or???
Sweet Valley
07:26:57 Anna/Jewel
How do you manage to catch brindles, Angel? I didn't get ANY brindles with the capture party and I haven't even bred any!
Angels angels
07:17:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Awe thats sad ;-;
He could have been a show boy
Santana Rising
07:16:42 San
that is a very subtle brindle! I got a brindle boy yesterday, but he was PEP from a WWW x EWE cross, so I yeeted him.
Angels angels
07:13:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Ooo cool
Santana Rising
07:10:14 San
sometimes you get lucky, sometimes you will just reroll a horse a bunch of times and still just get the same shade of bay... :(
Santana Rising
07:08:32 San
you can reroll brindles too to get different stripes, but other phenotypes, like sooty, chimera, manchado can roll off (or on if your horse previously didn't have them), so use wisely on those horses.
Santana Rising
07:07:08 San
rerolls change the appearance of the horse they are used on while still maintaining its genetics. So if you have a tobi you can reroll it into a differnt tobi pattern, if you have a light bay you can reroll it into a blood bay, a near leopard into a leopard, etc.
Cloudy Moon Stables
07:05:01 Cloud; Moon; Jewel
Hey a question? What are rerolls for because I got 10 of them from a capture party?
Painted View Ranch
07:04:19 PVR Paint/Painted
Painted View Ranch

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Snow Stable
08:10:13 Snow❆Gem
Wild PON EWE roan grullo? O.o I guess he's going into the show string. lol

-HEE Click-
Santana Rising
07:48:36 San
and my WWE - W wild PON girl of course. I have two WWEs of her already, but so far I haven't bred her to a brave WWW, when I really should.
Tamarack Mountain
07:48:19 Opal
I just want to get one as I will be busy RO until later and I would miss all LC
Santana Rising
07:47:07 San
I'm so lazy to stalk straw threads, but I feel I should for my few EWE/EEE - W girl combos. They are always missing out on the AD brave boys and then I have to decide if I want to do a cowardish WWW boy, or a brave boy that might not be as adequate towards their AD rating.
Tamarack Mountain
07:44:18 Opal
oh that makes sense thank you
Santana Rising
07:43:52 San
I'm pretty sure the owner keeps that list and then sends out the straws on RO and you pay to pick them up like a regular straw offer
Tamarack Mountain
07:41:47 Opal
just curious as I have not really bought straws on a forum thread before, do you pay right away or when?
Sweet Valley
07:33:59 Anna/Jewel
Pretty
Cloudy Moon Stables
07:30:30 Cloud; Moon; Jewel
-HEE Click-
Rerolled this gal and she's a peacock
Cappuccino
07:29:21 Heyy it's Capp
Brindle is ALL random luck
Sweet Valley
07:28:39 Anna/Jewel
Like did you do a specific scene like Mountain or Beach or Jungle or Meadow or???
Sweet Valley
07:26:57 Anna/Jewel
How do you manage to catch brindles, Angel? I didn't get ANY brindles with the capture party and I haven't even bred any!
Angels angels
07:17:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Awe thats sad ;-;
He could have been a show boy
Santana Rising
07:16:42 San
that is a very subtle brindle! I got a brindle boy yesterday, but he was PEP from a WWW x EWE cross, so I yeeted him.
Angels angels
07:13:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Ooo cool
Santana Rising
07:10:14 San
sometimes you get lucky, sometimes you will just reroll a horse a bunch of times and still just get the same shade of bay... :(
Santana Rising
07:08:32 San
you can reroll brindles too to get different stripes, but other phenotypes, like sooty, chimera, manchado can roll off (or on if your horse previously didn't have them), so use wisely on those horses.
Santana Rising
07:07:08 San
rerolls change the appearance of the horse they are used on while still maintaining its genetics. So if you have a tobi you can reroll it into a differnt tobi pattern, if you have a light bay you can reroll it into a blood bay, a near leopard into a leopard, etc.
Cloudy Moon Stables
07:05:01 Cloud; Moon; Jewel
Hey a question? What are rerolls for because I got 10 of them from a capture party?
Painted View Ranch
07:04:19 PVR Paint/Painted
Painted View Ranch

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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