Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Aura Show Horses
11:17:59 Aura /Pea
Lol
I have to judge XC at an eventing trials
:P
All Breeds
11:17:26 Fawn
Yep. Schools will block a lot of sites like that AL.
ChewyHorse
11:17:01 Wild
yep...
Ranch Lands Training
11:16:18 Lilly/PON Addict
The girl that makes the schedule at work has a daughter leaving for a volunteer trip tomorrow. Tonight would be her last night with her. She texted (at 10) asking if anyone would take her evening shift so she can spend time with her daughter before she leaves. Like girl, you make the schedule? And you have known about your daughter leaving for months now
ArcticLights
11:16:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
School blocks Discord?
ChewyHorse
11:15:18 Wild
welp I can never because school blocks that site so your doing better that me Aura
Aura Show Horses
11:10:59 Aura /Pea
I can't make trivia again😭
Ugh
WildWind
11:06:08 Wild
ok yeah that's what I thought
Silver Melody Acres
11:05:57 Solar - KNNs
It's random
Alpine Acres
11:05:29 Lily
Wild
completely random
Minerva
11:05:28 Min
Random chance, but there is a *slight* boost to the chances if one or both parents are brindle as well I believe
WildWind
11:04:22 Wild
*a
WildWind
11:04:09 Wild
what's the best wat to breed for s brindle? I'd it random or...?
Minerva
11:03:54 Min
Very easily done lol. I've got all my accounts colour coded now to try and stop myself xD
Circle Star RIDs
11:02:06 Granny C
I've bought horses on the wrong account a time or two. Happens when you have multiple accounts
Minerva
11:01:05 Min
As if it starts absolutely hammering it down the moment I leave the house to do the ponies... And then I find my rugs have blown off the hay bale I'm not using yet and it's got wet
Aura Show Horses
10:56:21 Aura /Pea
White
Lol
Sometimes you accidently buy really expensive horses πŸ˜”
Whitewolf
10:55:39 
Sums up my birthday about right though 🀦‍♀️
Whitewolf
10:54:59 
Definitely did not make my day. Never enjoy most likely having to take a big loss lol
Aura Show Horses
10:53:56 Aura /Pea
White
Omg
I've done that too πŸ˜‚πŸ˜±

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Aura Show Horses
11:17:59 Aura /Pea
Lol
I have to judge XC at an eventing trials
:P
All Breeds
11:17:26 Fawn
Yep. Schools will block a lot of sites like that AL.
ChewyHorse
11:17:01 Wild
yep...
Ranch Lands Training
11:16:18 Lilly/PON Addict
The girl that makes the schedule at work has a daughter leaving for a volunteer trip tomorrow. Tonight would be her last night with her. She texted (at 10) asking if anyone would take her evening shift so she can spend time with her daughter before she leaves. Like girl, you make the schedule? And you have known about your daughter leaving for months now
ArcticLights
11:16:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
School blocks Discord?
ChewyHorse
11:15:18 Wild
welp I can never because school blocks that site so your doing better that me Aura
Aura Show Horses
11:10:59 Aura /Pea
I can't make trivia again😭
Ugh
WildWind
11:06:08 Wild
ok yeah that's what I thought
Silver Melody Acres
11:05:57 Solar - KNNs
It's random
Alpine Acres
11:05:29 Lily
Wild
completely random
Minerva
11:05:28 Min
Random chance, but there is a *slight* boost to the chances if one or both parents are brindle as well I believe
WildWind
11:04:22 Wild
*a
WildWind
11:04:09 Wild
what's the best wat to breed for s brindle? I'd it random or...?
Minerva
11:03:54 Min
Very easily done lol. I've got all my accounts colour coded now to try and stop myself xD
Circle Star RIDs
11:02:06 Granny C
I've bought horses on the wrong account a time or two. Happens when you have multiple accounts
Minerva
11:01:05 Min
As if it starts absolutely hammering it down the moment I leave the house to do the ponies... And then I find my rugs have blown off the hay bale I'm not using yet and it's got wet
Aura Show Horses
10:56:21 Aura /Pea
White
Lol
Sometimes you accidently buy really expensive horses πŸ˜”
Whitewolf
10:55:39 
Sums up my birthday about right though 🀦‍♀️
Whitewolf
10:54:59 
Definitely did not make my day. Never enjoy most likely having to take a big loss lol
Aura Show Horses
10:53:56 Aura /Pea
White
Omg
I've done that too πŸ˜‚πŸ˜±

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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