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KPH Equestrian
11:11:52 Rapcoon | Jester
oh no :( hopefully these ones'll be okay ^^;
Mythological
11:03:14 Crowley
Flea
Lol we lost the first clutch of eggs so he go tied up there
KPH Equestrian
11:01:43 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
aww, good boy! Dixie's been on the same job actually xD
Mythological
11:01:12 Crowley
Flea
Right now he is guarding newly hatched chicks!
Red Horizon Ranch
11:00:17 Red
Oh that looks really nice Glacier
KPH Equestrian
10:57:13 Rapcoon | Jester
wow mythy! He may give dixie a run for her money xD
Mythological
10:55:14 Crowley
Flea
And he taught himself that lol
KPH Equestrian
10:53:58 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
ooh clever boy!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:53:47 Arctic Katz
Just about to attempt to start working on a harder art project
Mythological
10:49:24 Crowley
Flea
You should meet Ranger! He knows how to get rid of rabbits with out leaving the property!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:49:04 Arctic Katz
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Mossy Lane Stables
10:48:35 
Those are adorable Marsh!
starmutt
10:47:42 marsh 🌈
drawing these is becoming my morning routine xD
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KPH Equestrian
10:46:55 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
mm true. though I've not met another dog so versatile and quick to learn lol
Mythological
10:44:17 Crowley
Flea
Ony aussies rival them.
KPH Equestrian
10:42:40 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
awww<3 they're the best!
Mythological
10:41:50 Crowley
Just her in general! I grew up with a border collie!
KPH Equestrian
10:40:31 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
what, the second pic of her? xD
Mythological
10:39:49 Crowley
Flea
The Border collie mix >.>
Pegasus Lane
10:39:34 Peggy (or) Peg
I second riding her to find it!
She needs to take responsibility 😂😂

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KPH Equestrian
11:11:52 Rapcoon | Jester
oh no :( hopefully these ones'll be okay ^^;
Mythological
11:03:14 Crowley
Flea
Lol we lost the first clutch of eggs so he go tied up there
KPH Equestrian
11:01:43 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
aww, good boy! Dixie's been on the same job actually xD
Mythological
11:01:12 Crowley
Flea
Right now he is guarding newly hatched chicks!
Red Horizon Ranch
11:00:17 Red
Oh that looks really nice Glacier
KPH Equestrian
10:57:13 Rapcoon | Jester
wow mythy! He may give dixie a run for her money xD
Mythological
10:55:14 Crowley
Flea
And he taught himself that lol
KPH Equestrian
10:53:58 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
ooh clever boy!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:53:47 Arctic Katz
Just about to attempt to start working on a harder art project
Mythological
10:49:24 Crowley
Flea
You should meet Ranger! He knows how to get rid of rabbits with out leaving the property!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:49:04 Arctic Katz
-Click-
Mossy Lane Stables
10:48:35 
Those are adorable Marsh!
starmutt
10:47:42 marsh 🌈
drawing these is becoming my morning routine xD
-Click-
KPH Equestrian
10:46:55 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
mm true. though I've not met another dog so versatile and quick to learn lol
Mythological
10:44:17 Crowley
Flea
Ony aussies rival them.
KPH Equestrian
10:42:40 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
awww<3 they're the best!
Mythological
10:41:50 Crowley
Just her in general! I grew up with a border collie!
KPH Equestrian
10:40:31 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
what, the second pic of her? xD
Mythological
10:39:49 Crowley
Flea
The Border collie mix >.>
Pegasus Lane
10:39:34 Peggy (or) Peg
I second riding her to find it!
She needs to take responsibility 😂😂

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First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 10:56 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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<div style="text-align: center;">Hey guys, this is my first manip and I would like some constructive criticism please.
<div style="text-align: center;">Don't worry about being to harsh, I want to know the truth.
<div style="text-align: center;">This was all done in GIMP.
Credits on image.

https://i.imgur.com/WNlMmyI.png?1
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:01 AM


Mediterranean
 
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Where did the background come from? You'll need to credit it.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:02 AM

Former Stable
 
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Honestly I don't think it's all that bad, it's pretty good but a shadow and some more shading to really blend the horse with the background would make it even better. And this is just personal preference but maybe a theme that would go better with the name cause when I saw "Monster" that kinda slapped me in the face xD
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:02 AM


Wolfcreek
 
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You could make the horse a tad bit bigger, and draw out the tail more. Some stray hair always make it look more realistic. Also try to match the lights, Your horse has backlight but it's still bright on the side where supposed to be shadows. Otherwise for a first manip it looks great.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:07 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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Mediterranean said:
Where did the background come from? You'll need to credit it.

<div style="text-align: center;">I honestly don't remember So I'm not going to use it here or anywhere else. I understand the crediting rules, but for the life of me I can't remember where I found that background. I do know it's a stock image though.
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:08 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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The Noisy Fam. said:
Honestly I don't think it's all that bad, it's pretty good but a shadow and some more shading to really blend the horse with the background would make it even better. And this is just personal preference but maybe a theme that would go better with the name cause when I saw "Monster" that kinda slapped me in the face xD

<div style="text-align: center;">I know, I just used a name of one of my horses. Obviously something spooky would go better for a horse named monster.

Thank you for the feedback!
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 11:09 AM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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Wolfcreek said:
You could make the horse a tad bit bigger, and draw out the tail more. Some stray hair always make it look more realistic. Also try to match the lights, Your horse has backlight but it's still bright on the side where supposed to be shadows. Otherwise for a first manip it looks great.



<div align="center">Great advice! I'm still learning all the tricks in GIMP.

Edited at November 10, 2018 11:13 AM by Reptar
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 01:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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That background is of me, its my own made picture
https://www.deviantart.com/lasrosasnegras/art/Untitled-771655404


You may use it but has to be credited as per my rules :D


The picture looks good so far, well done

Edited at November 10, 2018 01:16 PM by Las Rosas Negras
First Manip (Critique) November 10, 2018 01:15 PM


Raven Oak Stables
 
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Las Rosas Negras said:
That background is of me, its my own made picture
https://www.deviantart.com/lasrosasnegras/art/Untitled-771655404


You may use it but has to be credited as per my rules :D


<div style="text-align: center;">Thank you! It was driving me crazy!! I appreciate it :] Adding Credits to image now.
First Manip (Critique) November 15, 2018 04:02 PM


Weeping Willow Acres
 
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Nice. All my manips turn out looking like walking blobs.

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