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Leopard appy PON gelding for sale!
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01:47:21 Tier 1 Artist
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Port Royal Equines
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Handmade Irish Cob painting at auction!

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Retired ABLB straws. Aramis, Blood Moon, and Kaner.

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EEE+ for brood. 4k!
Bluegrass Racing
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Auction ends Wednesday evening. Y195 - TB/X + 1 SH and 1 EEE Pon filly. PPP to EEE, all genders, mostly EE fillies. Couple of EEE Colts.
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MakeEm Fancy
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EWW combo mare clearout
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Haylo
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Tons of mares up for breeding.CHEAP! prices start at only $100!
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The Joker
12:16:27 Ari <3
Embryo auction to only WWW SH apricot mare in game!
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Shiny broods to rare colours, EWW combos up to LB and ABLBs with tons of patterns and shine!
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Retired ABLB Stolas straw auction!
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Watercolored
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Beautiful PEP ISH 1/14 for sale! $1k

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Alpine Acres
02:26:18 Lily ~ I/SH
Leopard appy PON gelding for sale!
-HEE Click-
Gem
01:47:21 Tier 1 Artist
Art giveaway! :D
Open to everyone <3
-HEE Click-

New to RIDs or looking to start a program? This is your sign to get into them! Check out my RID giveaway!!
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
01:44:59 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Handmade Irish Cob painting at auction!

-HEE Click-
Retired ABLB straws. Aramis, Blood Moon, and Kaner.

-HEE Click-
EEE+ for brood. 4k!
Bluegrass Racing
01:42:17 Blue
Auction ends Wednesday evening. Y195 - TB/X + 1 SH and 1 EEE Pon filly. PPP to EEE, all genders, mostly EE fillies. Couple of EEE Colts.
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
01:16:46 Ally 💜
EWW combo mare clearout
-HEE Click-
Haylo
12:52:33 elisa ✦
Tons of mares up for breeding.CHEAP! prices start at only $100!
-HEE Click-
Darkwood
12:23:00 The Seeker
Dark Magic
-HEE Click-
Eagles Peak
12:18:46 
ABLB Studs Have LC Left (watch to win free straws): -HEE Click-

SH Broods (EEE,WEE): -HEE Click-

NEW Sport Horse Club, Growing Fast!: -HEE Click-

Dressage & Jumping Shows (2900ebs entry): -HEE Click-
The Joker
12:16:27 Ari <3
Embryo auction to only WWW SH apricot mare in game!
-HEE Click-

Shiny broods to rare colours, EWW combos up to LB and ABLBs with tons of patterns and shine!
-HEE Click-

Retired ABLB Stolas straw auction!
-HEE Click-
Watercolored
12:08:56 WC
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Beautiful PEP ISH 1/14 for sale! $1k

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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