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lass
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3 yr old WWW mare for sale $800k
Red Hill Hollow
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Raindrop Ridge
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Free WWW SH Freshie Straws for 201!
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RFS Thoroughbreds
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Sorting through your barns and realized, you completely forgot about that one mare this RO? No worries, Valor is up for stud! 50k per cover, straws available!
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QualitySH
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3 WWW stallions for sale if you want all 3 I'll take 1 mil for the lot
Crossroad Sports
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Couple off SH mares unbred EEP-WEE under 10k.
Gem
10:27:10 Tier 1 Artist
T1 Art auction! Pegasus YHH :D
Ends tomorrow 😱
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Art giveaway #3!! Ends March 15 <3
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Also, I have an art contest! Looking for OCs, 1.5 mil in prizes :D
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7 Bar 6 Ranch
10:05:41 RRR (Jo)
Had to thin out my herd of main mares - there are now some very nice horses in my sales barn! EEE-WWW
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Escott Estate
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Want her gone. EWE PON filly. Price negotiable -HEE Click-
fire
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lass
01:25:59 Captain America
-HEE Click-
3 yr old WWW mare for sale $800k
Red Hill Hollow
01:23:14 Red, Hollow
-HEE Click-
Help would be very appreciated <3
Raindrop Ridge
12:08:28 Rainy
Free WWW SH Freshie Straws for 201!
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:44:40 TB'S / T3 Artist
Sorting through your barns and realized, you completely forgot about that one mare this RO? No worries, Valor is up for stud! 50k per cover, straws available!
-HEE Click-
QualitySH
11:14:02 
-HEE Click-
3 WWW stallions for sale if you want all 3 I'll take 1 mil for the lot
Crossroad Sports
10:33:45 Cross SA
-HEE Click-
Couple off SH mares unbred EEP-WEE under 10k.
Gem
10:27:10 Tier 1 Artist
T1 Art auction! Pegasus YHH :D
Ends tomorrow 😱
-HEE Click-

Art giveaway #3!! Ends March 15 <3
-HEE Click-

Also, I have an art contest! Looking for OCs, 1.5 mil in prizes :D
-HEE Click-
7 Bar 6 Ranch
10:05:41 RRR (Jo)
Had to thin out my herd of main mares - there are now some very nice horses in my sales barn! EEE-WWW
-HEE Click-
Escott Estate
10:05:36 ~Del~
Want her gone. EWE PON filly. Price negotiable -HEE Click-
fire
10:04:41 
-HEE Click- straws avalable

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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