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Aura Show Horses

12:25:42 Pea/Aura

Hi chat!

Guard Horseman Gang

12:25:25 GHG

I had to scroll down too lol

Guard Horseman Gang

12:25:11 GHG

that is fantastic after river said they got conditioner in their eye

Phantom Echoes

12:20:57 Win | Mar

Cali
What did Boulder say??

Calela Eventing

12:20:06 Cali

Almost had a stroke when I read Boulders message ands had to scroll down to realise

Boulder Creek

11:31:05

That is fantastic!

River

11:31:02 ♡ River

I got conditioner in my eye and I couldn't open it for like 20 minutes-

Greenheart Stables

11:26:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Lucky
This guy is my platonic soul mate, my family considers him family, everyone was distraught when we cut ties. It was over teenager shit but we swapped apologizes

Lucky Ranch

11:24:00 luhckeigh

YAY green thats amazing!! im so happy its the best when you find your way back to people

Greenheart Stables

11:21:23 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

I finally got a life win, reconnected with a friend that from a messy situation we lost contact.
We friends again!

Boulder Creek

11:15:39

I have so much to do by the end of the month and I am procrastinating projects.
This week has been so stressful.

SheriDrawz

10:49:52 Sheri / Cassi

glacier, I'm keeping him shocked tigress because its ironic how i said "watch him be a colt" and he proceeded to be a colt-

Glacier Bay Cove

10:37:55 Glacier Kittens

You could change his name to Tiger Shock, Sheri

PoloStables

10:23:43 MightyMo

Lucky

Thank you so much!! He's prolly one of my favorites that I've bred

SheriDrawz

10:23:26 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- was NOT expecting that from that Dam-

Phantom Echoes

10:22:33 Win | Mar

Alright.. Time to look for an artist lol Again..

Lucky Ranch

10:22:21 luhckeigh

he gorgeous mo

PoloStables

10:18:00 MightyMo

Look at this cutie -HEE Click-

SheriDrawz

10:16:55 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- names him shocked tigress, ends up being a man... oops!

Lucky Ranch

10:14:09 luhckeigh

i just had the most beautiful pineapple

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Aura Show Horses

12:25:42 Pea/Aura

Hi chat!

Guard Horseman Gang

12:25:25 GHG

I had to scroll down too lol

Guard Horseman Gang

12:25:11 GHG

that is fantastic after river said they got conditioner in their eye

Phantom Echoes

12:20:57 Win | Mar

Cali
What did Boulder say??

Calela Eventing

12:20:06 Cali

Almost had a stroke when I read Boulders message ands had to scroll down to realise

Boulder Creek

11:31:05

That is fantastic!

River

11:31:02 ♡ River

I got conditioner in my eye and I couldn't open it for like 20 minutes-

Greenheart Stables

11:26:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Lucky
This guy is my platonic soul mate, my family considers him family, everyone was distraught when we cut ties. It was over teenager shit but we swapped apologizes

Lucky Ranch

11:24:00 luhckeigh

YAY green thats amazing!! im so happy its the best when you find your way back to people

Greenheart Stables

11:21:23 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

I finally got a life win, reconnected with a friend that from a messy situation we lost contact.
We friends again!

Boulder Creek

11:15:39

I have so much to do by the end of the month and I am procrastinating projects.
This week has been so stressful.

SheriDrawz

10:49:52 Sheri / Cassi

glacier, I'm keeping him shocked tigress because its ironic how i said "watch him be a colt" and he proceeded to be a colt-

Glacier Bay Cove

10:37:55 Glacier Kittens

You could change his name to Tiger Shock, Sheri

PoloStables

10:23:43 MightyMo

Lucky

Thank you so much!! He's prolly one of my favorites that I've bred

SheriDrawz

10:23:26 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- was NOT expecting that from that Dam-

Phantom Echoes

10:22:33 Win | Mar

Alright.. Time to look for an artist lol Again..

Lucky Ranch

10:22:21 luhckeigh

he gorgeous mo

PoloStables

10:18:00 MightyMo

Look at this cutie -HEE Click-

SheriDrawz

10:16:55 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- names him shocked tigress, ends up being a man... oops!

Lucky Ranch

10:14:09 luhckeigh

i just had the most beautiful pineapple

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January 3, 2021 04:12 PM

The Dude Ranch

Posts: 37
#831963
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So I'm just starting out with doing manes and tails and so I messed around and made this this morning, what do you guys think?.

I know I have to work on drawing out the mane (I'm not a very good drawer when it comes to that lol) but what else could I work on.

Also I will be adding credits to it as well

Edited at January 3, 2021 04:12 PM by The Dude Ranch

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January 7, 2021 07:40 AM

Shadow Woods

Posts: 1313
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Not a bad start! Definitely play around with the brush settings to see what you can get. Also, on the tail did you leave a chunk of the hair from the original picture? I can see something behind the hair that you drew. When you can make manes and tails, you should probably make it so that it's not visible. It could use more dimension to the hair, try adding shadows and highlights, that should help!

Edit: add some hair flyaways and breakup some of the patches to make it look more natural

Edited at January 7, 2021 07:42 AM by Shadow Woods

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