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What can I do to improve them? All critiques are welcome, I just want to get better so I can get more customers in my shop.
https://i.postimg.cc/5yfWCZtb/5-C8795-F6-0610-4714-92-CC-46776136-A7-A9.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/gkQdMtSq/5-F02-C9-F8-85-C3-40-E7-848-B-139787-E494-FB.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/SK7hxSyD/7-C77-D415-8-B22-4-D13-98-E2-8-D3-A95578-D14.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/MG8wwM8n/DBD1-BF17-82-A9-4-C83-BBB2-D931-E600-D8-D2.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/W1ZVxmxR/F4-B6-E8-E9-5-C76-4958-9065-756-DE389-A366.jpg |
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On the top one it looks like the horse is cantering on air while falling. Maybe there is a way to fix that. And there looks to be glowing outlines on pieces two, four, and five. Edited at August 20, 2019 08:47 PM by Red Dollar Eventing |
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Red Dollar Eventing said:
On the top one it looks like the horse is cantering on air while falling. Maybe there is a way to fix that.
HeÂ’s running from a barn fire. |
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I know, but it looks like he is running on air. |
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IÂ’ve seen your shop, youÂ’re over priced as youÂ’re in Tier one when you should be in Tier 2. IÂ’d add shadows, remove outlines and have the hooves look like theyÂ’re meant to be there Edited at August 20, 2019 08:50 PM by Raindrop Ridge |
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maybe try and fix the saturation, colouring and shadowing/shading of the horses to fit the background? it would make it look a little smoother. but apart from that these look great!
the third one looks the best in my opinion as it looks like its there and not photoshopped in |
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Your tails are very stiff and are almost too straight. I would use a softer brush while painting, making sure to add movement to each hair. |
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I think it would help if you softened your outlines just a smudge. I think the last horses hair could be a bit more realistic. You could also smudge your horses just a touch to soften their coats up a bit. :) It looks amazing! I especially love the 2nd to last. Great job! |
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Celestial Estates said:
Your tails are very stiff and are almost too straight. I would use a softer brush while painting, making sure to add movement to each hair.
^^ Also perhaps practice on patterns a little more, they feel a tad bit unnatural. Perhaps try less exposure and saturation? |
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Diamanté said:
Celestial Estates said:
Your tails are very stiff and are almost too straight. I would use a softer brush while painting, making sure to add movement to each hair.
^^ Also perhaps practice on patterns a little more, they feel a tad bit unnatural. Perhaps try less exposure and saturation?
^ That I can agree on, IÂ’m still working on my patterns. |
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