Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Gemstone Stable
05:54:59 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh dear! :( Did he suffer long though? Seeing them go downhill and can't do anything about it is the worst. *hugs*
Mythological
05:54:11 Tim:2016-2026
He would have been 10 this June.
Fairytale Paints
05:53:11 Im Elf
Myth
Oh no :(
That's horrible
Mythological
05:52:43 Tim:2016-2026
He started acting off Monday night. (No energy.) He stopped eating. His right back leg stopped working. O think he had a seizure at the end.
Glacier Bay Cove
05:51:31 Glacier Kittens
Sorry, Myth, that’s horrible
Fairytale Paints
05:50:14 Im Elf
Myth
:(
What happened
Mythological
05:50:07 Tim:2016-2026
Safe to say I WILL NOT be getting any more dogs by choice.
Pegasus Lane
05:47:22 Peggy (or) Peg
Aw geez, that's the worst. I'm sorry to hear that!
Mythological
05:46:58 Tim:2016-2026
He's dead.
Glacier Bay Cove
05:46:22 Glacier Kittens
Is he okay now, Myth
Mythological
05:37:39 Tim:2016-2026
Peg
He was sick for a week.
Pegasus Lane
05:32:02 Peggy (or) Peg
Aww, Myth!
What happened to Tim?
All Breeds
05:30:30 Fawn
My eye is twitching right now. Power has gone out again in just over 48 hours
Crescent Estate
05:26:41 River / Crescent
Issy
In her breeding history it says they were all EEE's, I just didn't like them so they went to the FR lol
Nightingales Ridge
05:25:51 𔓘 Issy
Crescent...how does that work if I can't see her foals?
BlackRose
05:24:14 Stella
Thank you!
Stone Wall Eventing
05:23:46 Stone
ooo Stella I love him
Glacier Bay Cove
05:22:29 Glacier Kittens
Do you have an extra tub to put the female kingsnake in, while you rearrange her enclosure, Angels
Crescent Estate
05:22:11 River / Crescent
Since when did I have a horse on the LB as HOTY?
-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
05:20:30 𔓘 Issy
:,(

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Gemstone Stable
05:54:59 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh dear! :( Did he suffer long though? Seeing them go downhill and can't do anything about it is the worst. *hugs*
Mythological
05:54:11 Tim:2016-2026
He would have been 10 this June.
Fairytale Paints
05:53:11 Im Elf
Myth
Oh no :(
That's horrible
Mythological
05:52:43 Tim:2016-2026
He started acting off Monday night. (No energy.) He stopped eating. His right back leg stopped working. O think he had a seizure at the end.
Glacier Bay Cove
05:51:31 Glacier Kittens
Sorry, Myth, that’s horrible
Fairytale Paints
05:50:14 Im Elf
Myth
:(
What happened
Mythological
05:50:07 Tim:2016-2026
Safe to say I WILL NOT be getting any more dogs by choice.
Pegasus Lane
05:47:22 Peggy (or) Peg
Aw geez, that's the worst. I'm sorry to hear that!
Mythological
05:46:58 Tim:2016-2026
He's dead.
Glacier Bay Cove
05:46:22 Glacier Kittens
Is he okay now, Myth
Mythological
05:37:39 Tim:2016-2026
Peg
He was sick for a week.
Pegasus Lane
05:32:02 Peggy (or) Peg
Aww, Myth!
What happened to Tim?
All Breeds
05:30:30 Fawn
My eye is twitching right now. Power has gone out again in just over 48 hours
Crescent Estate
05:26:41 River / Crescent
Issy
In her breeding history it says they were all EEE's, I just didn't like them so they went to the FR lol
Nightingales Ridge
05:25:51 𔓘 Issy
Crescent...how does that work if I can't see her foals?
BlackRose
05:24:14 Stella
Thank you!
Stone Wall Eventing
05:23:46 Stone
ooo Stella I love him
Glacier Bay Cove
05:22:29 Glacier Kittens
Do you have an extra tub to put the female kingsnake in, while you rearrange her enclosure, Angels
Crescent Estate
05:22:11 River / Crescent
Since when did I have a horse on the LB as HOTY?
-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
05:20:30 𔓘 Issy
:,(

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Critique on Latest Piece December 30, 2018 07:27 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/vLtNgVT/Roan-on-cliff.jpg

Just made this and looking for opinions on strong points & weak points. Maybe some suggestions on how to make a more realistic look?
Perhaps a price?

Quality is so bad now that I look at it.. Sorry about it looking blurry. Didn't look like that in PS.

Edited at December 30, 2018 07:28 PM by Keeper of the Lost
Critique on Latest Piece December 31, 2018 10:39 AM

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The biggest weakness I can see is the lack of shadows. Regardless of how cloudy a day is, there's going to be a bit of shadow under the horse. He also ought to have a bit of shade on his hooves and legs where they're going into the grass. From here, his hair looks nice, but the lack of shadows makes it so he doesn't really fit into the background. I would also recommend playing with the colors a bit to match him into the background better.
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 12:45 AM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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Very helpful, thank you. :)

This is my newest piece, where I used advice from people.
https://i.ibb.co/Y225XTV/Purple-Sky.jpg
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:04 PM

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This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D

Edited at January 1, 2019 01:04 PM by Trinity Equine
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:31 PM


Tranquility
 
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Trinity Equine said:
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D


^^

I also think you hooves could use a little more grounding work. (if you know what I mean)
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 03:51 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/CH94GKx/Purple-Sky-edit-FINAL.jpg

I like this.. Thanks for the tips!

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