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Crystal Pine Creek
01:25:16 ~Lexia, KNN breeder~
BM
He is! 😍
Crystal Pine Creek
01:22:59 ~Lexia, KNN breeder~
We're getting our first rain in over a month!!! It's bucketing down!!
Broken Meadows
01:15:12 Fire | BM
-HEE Click-
He's cute
Étoile Ranch
12:29:27 
Oh now my other horse is also superb bravery....
Étoile Ranch
12:28:35 
For some reason my foal has superb bravery???? Huh
Étoile Ranch
12:25:15 
I finally got a black and white horse :P horse.php?id=42461354
The Joker
12:19:26 Ari <3
I hope you get better soon, Echo!
Black Dragon Stable
12:03:48 BDS / Black / Stormy
My accountant is frothing. I just bought some WW girls for some new blood in my lines. lol
Honey
12:02:54 
Obsessed with this filly -HEE Click- <3
Crescent Estate
11:49:54 River / Crescent
My only keeper from yesterday -HEE Click-
Amethyst Ranch
11:47:42 Echo <3
Thank you DD! <3
Dash and Duchess
11:38:34 DD | ~Squizard~
Get better soon echo!
Amethyst Ranch
11:38:06 Echo <3
Thank you Ari. I'm hoping whatever is wrong with me isn't too serious 😅 I just want to feel better again lol
Fantasy Horses
11:31:55 Fantasticy | Fanta
I got way too many S4 horses yesterday >-<
The Joker
11:27:55 Ari <3
Oh no >,< I hope it's nothing too serious
Amethyst Ranch
11:21:45 Echo <3
Ari
Doing okay, just in a lot of pain with my head 😅
The Joker
11:19:17 Ari <3
Ignore the 9 😂
The Joker
11:19:07 Ari <3
9
Oh no! I hope that everyone is ok
Amethyst Ranch
11:15:39 Echo <3
At A&E 😅 long ass wait times 😅
The Joker
11:10:58 Ari <3
What's up, Echo?

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Crystal Pine Creek
01:25:16 ~Lexia, KNN breeder~
BM
He is! 😍
Crystal Pine Creek
01:22:59 ~Lexia, KNN breeder~
We're getting our first rain in over a month!!! It's bucketing down!!
Broken Meadows
01:15:12 Fire | BM
-HEE Click-
He's cute
Étoile Ranch
12:29:27 
Oh now my other horse is also superb bravery....
Étoile Ranch
12:28:35 
For some reason my foal has superb bravery???? Huh
Étoile Ranch
12:25:15 
I finally got a black and white horse :P horse.php?id=42461354
The Joker
12:19:26 Ari <3
I hope you get better soon, Echo!
Black Dragon Stable
12:03:48 BDS / Black / Stormy
My accountant is frothing. I just bought some WW girls for some new blood in my lines. lol
Honey
12:02:54 
Obsessed with this filly -HEE Click- <3
Crescent Estate
11:49:54 River / Crescent
My only keeper from yesterday -HEE Click-
Amethyst Ranch
11:47:42 Echo <3
Thank you DD! <3
Dash and Duchess
11:38:34 DD | ~Squizard~
Get better soon echo!
Amethyst Ranch
11:38:06 Echo <3
Thank you Ari. I'm hoping whatever is wrong with me isn't too serious 😅 I just want to feel better again lol
Fantasy Horses
11:31:55 Fantasticy | Fanta
I got way too many S4 horses yesterday >-<
The Joker
11:27:55 Ari <3
Oh no >,< I hope it's nothing too serious
Amethyst Ranch
11:21:45 Echo <3
Ari
Doing okay, just in a lot of pain with my head 😅
The Joker
11:19:17 Ari <3
Ignore the 9 😂
The Joker
11:19:07 Ari <3
9
Oh no! I hope that everyone is ok
Amethyst Ranch
11:15:39 Echo <3
At A&E 😅 long ass wait times 😅
The Joker
11:10:58 Ari <3
What's up, Echo?

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Critique on Latest Piece December 30, 2018 07:27 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/vLtNgVT/Roan-on-cliff.jpg

Just made this and looking for opinions on strong points & weak points. Maybe some suggestions on how to make a more realistic look?
Perhaps a price?

Quality is so bad now that I look at it.. Sorry about it looking blurry. Didn't look like that in PS.

Edited at December 30, 2018 07:28 PM by Keeper of the Lost
Critique on Latest Piece December 31, 2018 10:39 AM

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The biggest weakness I can see is the lack of shadows. Regardless of how cloudy a day is, there's going to be a bit of shadow under the horse. He also ought to have a bit of shade on his hooves and legs where they're going into the grass. From here, his hair looks nice, but the lack of shadows makes it so he doesn't really fit into the background. I would also recommend playing with the colors a bit to match him into the background better.
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 12:45 AM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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Very helpful, thank you. :)

This is my newest piece, where I used advice from people.
https://i.ibb.co/Y225XTV/Purple-Sky.jpg
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:04 PM

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This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D

Edited at January 1, 2019 01:04 PM by Trinity Equine
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:31 PM


Tranquility
 
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Trinity Equine said:
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D


^^

I also think you hooves could use a little more grounding work. (if you know what I mean)
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 03:51 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/CH94GKx/Purple-Sky-edit-FINAL.jpg

I like this.. Thanks for the tips!

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