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I would some critique on this piece below please, feel free to go wild on me xD 
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I just wanted to say before you read my critique, that as long as your happy with your art you should continue to do it the way you always do. Everyone has different styles and taking critiques might take away from your personal style or push you to be a perfectionist. You know I'm a huge fan of your art, I own many pieces. Please don't take my critique as something you must do.
The only thing I personally see is the mane is a bit stiff. The horse is moving forward so the hair wouldn't all be falling forward. There would be some movement in the other direction with longer strands. My guess is you did the tail free hand and then you copy pasted one section of the mane. I have no problem with copy pasting, I do it myself sometimes. But I think adding some variation in flow so that it doesn't seem hairsprayed into place would really make the mane POP. Fly aways are important to me. Longer stray hairs at the end of the strands. I find it makes the hair appear a bit more natural. I also always like to keep the mane and tail about the same length. But that might be just my preference, since my signature style is wild, cascading hair. I'm in love with the itty bitty teeth and tongue.
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The Lone Star said: I just wanted to say before you read my critique, that as long as your happy with your art you should continue to do it the way you always do. Everyone has different styles and taking critiques might take away from your personal style or push you to be a perfectionist. You know I'm a huge fan of your art, I own many pieces. Please don't take my critique as something you must do.
The only thing I personally see is the mane is a bit stiff. The horse is moving forward so the hair wouldn't all be falling forward. There would be some movement in the other direction with longer strands. My guess is you did the tail free hand and then you copy pasted one section of the mane. I have no problem with copy pasting, I do it myself sometimes. But I think adding some variation in flow so that it doesn't seem hairsprayed into place would really make the mane POP. Fly aways are important to me. Longer stray hairs at the end of the strands. I find it makes the hair appear a bit more natural. I also always like to keep the mane and tail about the same length. But that might be just my preference, since my signature style is wild, cascading hair. I'm in love with the itty bitty teeth and tongue.
Thank you <3 I actually never copy and paste any hair haha so my style must be so set in stone (for lack of better words) xD I do struggle with hair so much. I do feel like my tails are better than my manes and forelocks almost all the time lol
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