Horse Eden : Critique Me Please!

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Irish Fields

07:04:32 Fawn

Tosk, I'm tracking this girl and curious to see her training for Wk 7/8
-HEE Click-

Irish Fields

07:03:15 Fawn

Ooooooh

Pon Brats

07:02:33

Speaking of which, Fawns, do you want to try your luck on shiny pons?

-HEE Click-
She has no date yet.

Pon Brats

07:01:32

Let's see if Granola matches her

Irish Fields

07:00:57 Fawn

Well fuck a duck then 💀

Pon Brats

07:00:27

That would be my side account, Fawns xD

Irish Fields

06:59:39 Fawn

Find a short shiny boy xD

Pon Brats

06:59:31

Oh wait.. I am already sending her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Shine it is

Pon Brats

06:59:05

But Pon 🥹

Irish Fields

06:58:42 Fawn

Go for shine

Pon Brats

06:58:08

Should I risk it and send her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Or go for shine?

astral_angel

06:56:09

ohh my bad sorry!

Irish Fields

06:55:41 Fawn

The only chat speak you can use is OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL

Irish Fields

06:54:48 Fawn

Please don't use chat speak :)

astral_angel

06:53:59

im good! ngl its a bit confusing but ill figure it out eventually!

Tamarack Mountain

06:52:31 Opal

Hello astral

All Breeds

06:52:08 Fawn

Morning Astral, I'm doing well. How are you?

All Breeds

06:51:46 Fawn

Oh dear Tosk xD

astral_angel

06:50:59

hiiii!!! im neww how is everyonee?

Toskana

06:50:36 ♞ Tosk

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Irish Fields

07:04:32 Fawn

Tosk, I'm tracking this girl and curious to see her training for Wk 7/8
-HEE Click-

Irish Fields

07:03:15 Fawn

Ooooooh

Pon Brats

07:02:33

Speaking of which, Fawns, do you want to try your luck on shiny pons?

-HEE Click-
She has no date yet.

Pon Brats

07:01:32

Let's see if Granola matches her

Irish Fields

07:00:57 Fawn

Well fuck a duck then 💀

Pon Brats

07:00:27

That would be my side account, Fawns xD

Irish Fields

06:59:39 Fawn

Find a short shiny boy xD

Pon Brats

06:59:31

Oh wait.. I am already sending her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Shine it is

Pon Brats

06:59:05

But Pon 🥹

Irish Fields

06:58:42 Fawn

Go for shine

Pon Brats

06:58:08

Should I risk it and send her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Or go for shine?

astral_angel

06:56:09

ohh my bad sorry!

Irish Fields

06:55:41 Fawn

The only chat speak you can use is OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL

Irish Fields

06:54:48 Fawn

Please don't use chat speak :)

astral_angel

06:53:59

im good! ngl its a bit confusing but ill figure it out eventually!

Tamarack Mountain

06:52:31 Opal

Hello astral

All Breeds

06:52:08 Fawn

Morning Astral, I'm doing well. How are you?

All Breeds

06:51:46 Fawn

Oh dear Tosk xD

astral_angel

06:50:59

hiiii!!! im neww how is everyonee?

Toskana

06:50:36 ♞ Tosk

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Critique Me Please!

October 9, 2019 02:27 PM

Bridle Rock

Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!

Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty

Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour

A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:56 PM

Sagebrush

Posts: 4637
#463399
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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