Horse Eden : Critique and Worth

Year: 200 Season: Summer

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Vanguard Stables

12:00:04 River | Van

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Vanguard Stables

11:58:58 River | Van

Ooh are we talking about our horses?

Boulder Creek

11:58:45

Spring Fling - so obvious, how did I miss that!

ooooo Daffodil Dash that's cute

Now to decide between the two

....and get totally distracted by the five things happening at the same time in the same space

ghost light stables

11:55:41 Toaster rapcoon

Speaking of shinner, the mole rat is back under saddle after six months of stall rest!
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fire

11:54:12

-HEE Click-

ghost light stables

11:53:28 Toaster rapcoon

Furn
Twinkie! She actually looks happy in halter classes :0 shinner glares down the judges lol

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:51:10 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih

Twinks was such a good mare this past show, didn't have any twinkletoe moments which is shocking xD
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Wolfs Ire

11:49:49 Fawn

I want to plant some more this year because I love them so much <3

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:43:58 Gladius

same fawn!!! I actually have a kind of hilarious two-picture series...snow around noonish, completely cleared less than 6 hours later...the second one has some daffodils in them (I thought about it for the first but in the car. snowing. so xD)

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:56 Glacier Kittens

I can’t wait for my daylilies to bloom

All Breeds

11:40:51 Fawn

My daffodils are starting to pop up so that's the flower I think of when it comes to spring :)

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:39:35 Gladius

oooh that's a nice one fawn!

Blue Moon Farm

11:39:15

Lilacs, Tulips, and Hyacinth are all early spring flowers

All Breeds

11:39:05 Fawn

The Daffodil Dash

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:39:03 Gladius

Boulder - Crisp Crocus Cup?

MC Ace

11:38:02 McFossil

Spring Fling

Boulder Creek

11:37:14

I need something reminiscent of spring to call a show / race
Like - The Lavendar Cup (already used)
I was thinking something using crocus because it's the first sign of spring for me. But it's a weird word.

Something that has the air of The First Race of the Season. Fresh, inviting.

Nightingales Ridge

11:31:06 𔓘 Issy

Golly! Well done

MC Ace

11:24:42 McFossil

Dang thats wild, but congrats

Coruscant Farm

11:21:00

wow, today's been 10 years since I started playing this game. where does time go, that's crazy haha.

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Vanguard Stables

12:00:04 River | Van

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Vanguard Stables

11:58:58 River | Van

Ooh are we talking about our horses?

Boulder Creek

11:58:45

ghost light stables

11:55:41 Toaster rapcoon

Speaking of shinner, the mole rat is back under saddle after six months of stall rest!
-Click-

fire

11:54:12

-HEE Click-

ghost light stables

11:53:28 Toaster rapcoon

Furn
Twinkie! She actually looks happy in halter classes :0 shinner glares down the judges lol

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:51:10 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih

Twinks was such a good mare this past show, didn't have any twinkletoe moments which is shocking xD
-Click-

Wolfs Ire

11:49:49 Fawn

I want to plant some more this year because I love them so much <3

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:43:58 Gladius

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:56 Glacier Kittens

I can’t wait for my daylilies to bloom

All Breeds

11:40:51 Fawn

My daffodils are starting to pop up so that's the flower I think of when it comes to spring :)

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:39:35 Gladius

oooh that's a nice one fawn!

Blue Moon Farm

11:39:15

Lilacs, Tulips, and Hyacinth are all early spring flowers

All Breeds

11:39:05 Fawn

The Daffodil Dash

Gaelic Gladiacres

11:39:03 Gladius

Boulder - Crisp Crocus Cup?

MC Ace

11:38:02 McFossil

Spring Fling

Boulder Creek

11:37:14

Nightingales Ridge

11:31:06 𔓘 Issy

Golly! Well done

MC Ace

11:24:42 McFossil

Dang thats wild, but congrats

Coruscant Farm

11:21:00

wow, today's been 10 years since I started playing this game. where does time go, that's crazy haha.

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Critique and Worth

December 4, 2017 07:03 PM

Rosesong Stables

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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?

Critique and Worth

December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)

Critique and Worth

December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though

Critique and Worth

December 4, 2017 10:53 PM

Rosesong Stables

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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well

Critique and Worth

December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.

I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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