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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k. Willing to lower his price. He has produced multiple EWE's and EEE's.

I have a couple EWE and EEE RIDs for 70k and 15k. Will take offers on them too.
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
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This auction is EEE and higher, lots of SH and a EWE pony mare.
A lot of these EEE foals have some nice colors to them.
Bioshock Manor
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Elysium Opalus
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Mass rating , bravery, color, and KNN sale
EEE+ studs in other folders
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Stock up on shiny brave knabbies for future explore events!
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Blossom123
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Storm Wtr Creek Farm
07:40:47 SWC
-HEE Click- Debating what I want to do. So this is your time! Make me offers I cant refuse on ANY of my personal herd! All top of the line TB's and most proven LB producers.
Wild Hills Stables
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anyone selling upgrades i will buy at your price please pm me
Skyrim
06:38:56 Wynter/Ghostly
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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k. Willing to lower his price. He has produced multiple EWE's and EEE's.

I have a couple EWE and EEE RIDs for 70k and 15k. Will take offers on them too.
Horse Haven Stables
06:35:50 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Cozmic Elite
06:22:18 Z
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Stable set contest
900k+ <3
Sunni
06:22:04 Sunni bunny
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This auction is EEE and higher, lots of SH and a EWE pony mare.
A lot of these EEE foals have some nice colors to them.
Bioshock Manor
06:21:34 Storm
Year upgrades or 50 reroll packs. Pm to claim
Elysium Opalus
06:14:58 free palestine
Mass rating , bravery, color, and KNN sale
EEE+ studs in other folders
CHEAP
-HEE Click-
Stock up on shiny brave knabbies for future explore events!
Dash and Duchess
05:47:44 T1 Artist, W+ seller
Looking for a Tesoro straw extremely desperately!!

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


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