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BlackRose
11:24:20 Stella
How is everyone
Angels angels
11:23:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fawn
Oh I love that chimmy
Jericho Stables
11:22:50 
Afternoon folks.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:38 Glacier Katz
*Time to steal some more horses* Lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:59 Glacier Katz
Totally stalking them, Fawn, they are both amazing horses
Willow Wood Stable
11:16:51 Lo 🌙
So pretty, Fawn <3
Minerva
11:16:04 Min
Aww bless her! Ted is much the same- I'm thinking of putting another field shelter in for them in the section they're in now. The hedge is plenty of shelter for them really, but he does his little sad eyes when the weather isn't nice
All Breeds
11:15:53 Fawn
Got a few more lookers
Brindle
-HEE Click-
Chimera
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
11:08:54 Void Malign
Oklahoma, the diva, would be quite happy. She gets offended when she isn't allowed in the "big stall", aka the tractor barn
Minerva
11:07:40 Min
You need to win the lottery and get heated stables for them xD Only responsible thing to do lol
The Old Gods
11:07:37 Void Malign
Though, Oklahoma actually has a good winter coat growing in, so maybe she'll be less dramatic. Rocky is still fairly thin on his winter coat, buuut he has a light turn out coat now if he needs it
The Old Gods
11:06:36 Void Malign
Cold is another story. Oklahoma and Rocky will both have dramatics when it starts getting cold
Minerva
11:05:28 Min
Wish my 2yo did Void... Minnie doesn't give a flying fuck but Ted acts like it's killing him every time lol. Which given that he lived out wild with no rug for his first two years was a bit of a surprise. So now I'm staring at the forecast trying to plan when to put his rainsheet on tomorrow morning
All Breeds
11:04:50 Fawn
Right xD
Snow Angels
11:04:50 Snow / 눈
Lo,
Real T*T
Willow Wood Stable
11:03:50 Lo 🌙
Fawn

Dad hit copy & paste
All Breeds
11:03:15 Fawn
Dayum
-HEE Click-
Willow Wood Stable
11:01:46 Lo 🌙
Ivy,

Hey! Hope you're doing well.

Arctic,

How've you been? I've been away for awhile
All Breeds
11:01:32 Fawn
Thank you Glacier!
The Old Gods
11:01:02 Void Malign
seems that the horses are enjoying the rain. None of them are up

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BlackRose
11:24:20 Stella
How is everyone
Angels angels
11:23:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fawn
Oh I love that chimmy
Jericho Stables
11:22:50 
Afternoon folks.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:38 Glacier Katz
*Time to steal some more horses* Lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:59 Glacier Katz
Totally stalking them, Fawn, they are both amazing horses
Willow Wood Stable
11:16:51 Lo 🌙
So pretty, Fawn <3
Minerva
11:16:04 Min
Aww bless her! Ted is much the same- I'm thinking of putting another field shelter in for them in the section they're in now. The hedge is plenty of shelter for them really, but he does his little sad eyes when the weather isn't nice
All Breeds
11:15:53 Fawn
Got a few more lookers
Brindle
-HEE Click-
Chimera
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
11:08:54 Void Malign
Oklahoma, the diva, would be quite happy. She gets offended when she isn't allowed in the "big stall", aka the tractor barn
Minerva
11:07:40 Min
You need to win the lottery and get heated stables for them xD Only responsible thing to do lol
The Old Gods
11:07:37 Void Malign
Though, Oklahoma actually has a good winter coat growing in, so maybe she'll be less dramatic. Rocky is still fairly thin on his winter coat, buuut he has a light turn out coat now if he needs it
The Old Gods
11:06:36 Void Malign
Cold is another story. Oklahoma and Rocky will both have dramatics when it starts getting cold
Minerva
11:05:28 Min
Wish my 2yo did Void... Minnie doesn't give a flying fuck but Ted acts like it's killing him every time lol. Which given that he lived out wild with no rug for his first two years was a bit of a surprise. So now I'm staring at the forecast trying to plan when to put his rainsheet on tomorrow morning
All Breeds
11:04:50 Fawn
Right xD
Snow Angels
11:04:50 Snow / 눈
Lo,
Real T*T
Willow Wood Stable
11:03:50 Lo 🌙
Fawn

Dad hit copy & paste
All Breeds
11:03:15 Fawn
Dayum
-HEE Click-
Willow Wood Stable
11:01:46 Lo 🌙
Ivy,

Hey! Hope you're doing well.

Arctic,

How've you been? I've been away for awhile
All Breeds
11:01:32 Fawn
Thank you Glacier!
The Old Gods
11:01:02 Void Malign
seems that the horses are enjoying the rain. None of them are up

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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