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NightClan
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This girl still has an embryo up for grabs for 199! Just pm me for pricing or shoot me an offer!
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Mirkwood
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Two black tobiano SH&ISH stallions for sale, 500 ebs each
Rosebud Ranch
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Rosebud Ranch
10:09:22 
EEE+ ISH and SHs for sale!
SS Warmbloods
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200+ WBs for sale! All rated and bravery tested! Great breeding stock for sale with lots of color! Message me to negotiate any price!

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Mirkwood
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Searching for an avi for sale, pm me
Double S Estates
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KNNs for sale!

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Slow Stream Stables
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Looking for a gorgeous sport pony? I'v got you! I have a gorgeous sport pony mare for sale! She is the last one for sale of the bundle! Young, gorgeous, and spotless this mare could be your show pony, broods mare, or pasture pet! Drop on down by my stable and take a look at this gorgeous mare! I also have foals soon Available if your interested in any of those (Labeled). My stable number is "399523" if you have any questions, concerns, or price arrangments!
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10:00:15 Insydious
Over 300 Xs for sale cheap! High ratings! Gorgeous colors! Bravery tested! I am taking offers and willing to make bulk deals on anything for sale! Feel free to message me! They will all be free ranged on rollover so get them cheap now before they are gone!

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Moonhaven Stables
09:50:13 Estelle
Horses in my sale barn are on clearance! All are 600 ens and under! Offers accepted on some horses as well! All are rated and have color!

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NightClan
10:10:20 Night
This girl still has an embryo up for grabs for 199! Just pm me for pricing or shoot me an offer!
-HEE Click-

I also need this girl gone so send me an offer for her!
-HEE Click-
Mirkwood
10:09:50 
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Two black tobiano SH&ISH stallions for sale, 500 ebs each
Rosebud Ranch
10:09:43 
Oops! Forgot the link
-HEE Click-
Rosebud Ranch
10:09:22 
EEE+ ISH and SHs for sale!
SS Warmbloods
10:06:26 
200+ WBs for sale! All rated and bravery tested! Great breeding stock for sale with lots of color! Message me to negotiate any price!

-HEE Click-
Mirkwood
10:05:52 
Searching for an avi for sale, pm me
Double S Estates
10:02:57 Syd
KNNs for sale!

-HEE Click-
Slow Stream Stables
10:02:30 
Looking for a gorgeous sport pony? I'v got you! I have a gorgeous sport pony mare for sale! She is the last one for sale of the bundle! Young, gorgeous, and spotless this mare could be your show pony, broods mare, or pasture pet! Drop on down by my stable and take a look at this gorgeous mare! I also have foals soon Available if your interested in any of those (Labeled). My stable number is "399523" if you have any questions, concerns, or price arrangments!
§ Stablez
10:00:15 Insydious
Over 300 Xs for sale cheap! High ratings! Gorgeous colors! Bravery tested! I am taking offers and willing to make bulk deals on anything for sale! Feel free to message me! They will all be free ranged on rollover so get them cheap now before they are gone!

-HEE Click-
Moonhaven Stables
09:50:13 Estelle
Horses in my sale barn are on clearance! All are 600 ens and under! Offers accepted on some horses as well! All are rated and have color!

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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