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Rubygem

06:56:13 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

OOoooooo

Tamarack Mountain

06:55:19 Opal

it is not like WP breeding here

Tamarack Mountain

06:54:38 Opal

oops misread that,the other person in that case

Tamarack Mountain

06:53:36 Opal

you keep it

Peaches Equestrian

06:49:16

just a question but if someone is using your broodmare, do you or the other person keep the foal?

Embervale Acres

06:34:51 Solar Phoenix

You can go back to look at those, I know it just gets annoying to have to look at that unread list XD

Minerva

06:32:51 Min

I've got some accountant gifts hidden in there too lol but I will do. Just a ballache to have to do all the time

Embervale Acres

06:30:26 Solar Phoenix

If those are the only ones still unread, just select all and mark as read to clear them lol

Minerva

06:24:49 Min

Bugger, might have to see if theres a forum post about that then. Im up to 40 now haha

Embervale Acres

06:17:41 Solar Phoenix

Ooo, hello little one
-HEE Click-

Amityville Manor

05:53:24 Lo

I didn't see it there either, Capp

05:52:48 Irish Capp

Unless its under toggles then I don't think so

Amityville Manor

05:52:30 Lo

Not thick at all. I can't find the option either. Unless I'm thick too lol.

Minerva

05:50:44 Min

Is there no option to stop receiving crafting alerts or am I just thick? Got 37 in my inbox at the minute that I could do without haha

05:42:42 Colorful Capp

Ok I'll take it -HEE Click-

Dark Shadows Estate

04:20:46 Bazz

Would you look at that - I've been playing on this account for 5 years haha

04:13:05 | Eve

Let me just slide on over there haha. Thank you <3

04:02:01

@Eve
Here's a suggestion for that:
-HEE Click-

04:00:00 | Eve

I wish we could have two clubs :’(

TheLandOfFishAndFish

03:50:36 Fish

So the better rated capture chance is only on Thursday right?

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Rubygem

06:56:13 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

OOoooooo

Tamarack Mountain

06:55:19 Opal

it is not like WP breeding here

Tamarack Mountain

06:54:38 Opal

oops misread that,the other person in that case

Tamarack Mountain

06:53:36 Opal

you keep it

Peaches Equestrian

06:49:16

just a question but if someone is using your broodmare, do you or the other person keep the foal?

Embervale Acres

06:34:51 Solar Phoenix

You can go back to look at those, I know it just gets annoying to have to look at that unread list XD

Minerva

06:32:51 Min

I've got some accountant gifts hidden in there too lol but I will do. Just a ballache to have to do all the time

Embervale Acres

06:30:26 Solar Phoenix

If those are the only ones still unread, just select all and mark as read to clear them lol

Minerva

06:24:49 Min

Bugger, might have to see if theres a forum post about that then. Im up to 40 now haha

Embervale Acres

06:17:41 Solar Phoenix

Ooo, hello little one
-HEE Click-

Amityville Manor

05:53:24 Lo

I didn't see it there either, Capp

05:52:48 Irish Capp

Unless its under toggles then I don't think so

Amityville Manor

05:52:30 Lo

Not thick at all. I can't find the option either. Unless I'm thick too lol.

Minerva

05:50:44 Min

Is there no option to stop receiving crafting alerts or am I just thick? Got 37 in my inbox at the minute that I could do without haha

05:42:42 Colorful Capp

Ok I'll take it -HEE Click-

Dark Shadows Estate

04:20:46 Bazz

Would you look at that - I've been playing on this account for 5 years haha

04:13:05 | Eve

Let me just slide on over there haha. Thank you <3

04:02:01

@Eve
Here's a suggestion for that:
-HEE Click-

04:00:00 | Eve

I wish we could have two clubs :’(

TheLandOfFishAndFish

03:50:36 Fish

So the better rated capture chance is only on Thursday right?

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Critique? And advice?

March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!

Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses

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March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

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March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD

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March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isnt really standing out and its super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

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March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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