Horse Eden : Critique

Year: 198 Season: Winter

$: 0

Forecast:

Sunny

Forecast:

Thu 11:35am

Stables Online: 137

Moonhaven Stables

11:33:10 Estelle

-HEE Click-

All horses are currently on sale in my sale barn! All rated and colorful!

Moonpaw Magic

11:26:37 Diva's pawsickles

EWW WB colt just 63k
-HEE Click-

Artemis Ridge

11:19:41 T2 Arts

-HEE Click-
Free straws are being given to EWW+ combo mares!
Two WWW SH Colts for testing Yr 199. Two per stable

All Breeds

11:18:42 Fawn

Geldings up for auction starting at 12 PM gametime! Variety of colors and breeds and all are PEE+ Starting price is only 900 ebs!
-HEE Click-

123 I don't know

11:18:27 123/Screamin Eagle

-HEE Click-
Height+ Medallion for 40000 ebs!

Gentle Touch Acres

11:12:13

-HEE Click-

mass SH/ISH clear out! all starting out at 500ebs! took a break and now im back but going with SP now so need these guys gone!

Lemon Farms

10:45:01 Lemon - Alien

Looking to buy Stallions that resemble the horse linked below. Breed doesn't matter but I'd prefer Warmblood, ISH, or Anglo Arabian and NO Sport Horse/Pony. Message me with the links and price
-HEE Click-

Blood Rose Meadows

10:43:13 Skvll_

EEE Appendix Quarter Mare up for offers!
-HEE Click-

winteria

10:32:05

-HEE Click-

Barn clean out! All horses up for offers. I am very reasonable and open for cheap prices.

All EEE+, many EEW and EWW mares and stallions, and many unbred! PM me!

NightClan

10:10:20 Night

This girl still has an embryo up for grabs for 199! Just pm me for pricing or shoot me an offer!
-HEE Click-

I also need this girl gone so send me an offer for her!
-HEE Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Rules Hide
You are in: Sales
View Main Chat

Embark on a Quest.

Moonhaven Stables

11:33:10 Estelle

-HEE Click-

All horses are currently on sale in my sale barn! All rated and colorful!

Moonpaw Magic

11:26:37 Diva's pawsickles

EWW WB colt just 63k
-HEE Click-

Artemis Ridge

11:19:41 T2 Arts

-HEE Click-
Free straws are being given to EWW+ combo mares!
Two WWW SH Colts for testing Yr 199. Two per stable

All Breeds

11:18:42 Fawn

Geldings up for auction starting at 12 PM gametime! Variety of colors and breeds and all are PEE+ Starting price is only 900 ebs!
-HEE Click-

123 I don't know

11:18:27 123/Screamin Eagle

-HEE Click-
Height+ Medallion for 40000 ebs!

Gentle Touch Acres

11:12:13

-HEE Click-

mass SH/ISH clear out! all starting out at 500ebs! took a break and now im back but going with SP now so need these guys gone!

Lemon Farms

10:45:01 Lemon - Alien

Blood Rose Meadows

10:43:13 Skvll_

EEE Appendix Quarter Mare up for offers!
-HEE Click-

winteria

10:32:05

-HEE Click-

Barn clean out! All horses up for offers. I am very reasonable and open for cheap prices.

All EEE+, many EEW and EWW mares and stallions, and many unbred! PM me!

NightClan

10:10:20 Night

This girl still has an embryo up for grabs for 199! Just pm me for pricing or shoot me an offer!
-HEE Click-

I also need this girl gone so send me an offer for her!
-HEE Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Refresh

Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help

Critique

March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

Zephyr Elites

Posts: 4157
#339696
Give Award

Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

Critique

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#339707
Give Award

Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

Critique

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#340137
Give Award

For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

Critique

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#342049
Give Award

I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

Critique

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#345984
Give Award

Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help

Refresh