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Thornwood Manor

02:10:10

-HEE Click- +XC

And -HEE Click- +XC or D? Thoughts?

01:42:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Versa
Are you ok?

01:40:18

My accountant had a heart attack... whoops.

01:36:13 Versa

A transformer on a pole just exploded and it woke me up. That sound is horrifying!

01:33:41 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivory
Name ideas
Potato chip
Aslan (From the movie and books of Narnia)

01:33:12

Thorn
That's so cute :0 I'll do that.

Thornwood Manor

01:32:23

He should be Fries because of his sires name, and his dam could be Frenchie (Potato, Frenchie, and Fries)

01:27:08

Wolf
Yep! I love him, name ideas?

01:24:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ivory
Lol and he didn't bump his sire down either so that's good!

01:24:12

I'll*

01:24:04

Wolf
Yep! I'm definitely keep him, I also love my tobi's ^^

01:23:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Wow! I'm impressed that S was able to come up to a E!

01:22:09

-HEE Click- You're cutee.

01:18:16 ✨ Sassy

No problems! Hope she throws you something shiny <33

01:17:46

Sassy
I got one, thank you though <3

01:16:31 ✨ Sassy

I can send you a atraw from my former AALB stallion for free, I just don't know how to change the breeding requirements ):

01:11:56

Riverchase
Thank you, just can't find a WWW stallion with the right minimum breeding rating.

Riverchase Castle

01:10:12

Ooo, i love the rabicano

12:58:41

That made up for a horrid capture day.

12:58:26

Holy Crap. -HEE Click-

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Thornwood Manor

02:10:10

-HEE Click- +XC

And -HEE Click- +XC or D? Thoughts?

01:42:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Versa
Are you ok?

01:40:18

My accountant had a heart attack... whoops.

01:36:13 Versa

A transformer on a pole just exploded and it woke me up. That sound is horrifying!

01:33:41 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivory
Name ideas
Potato chip
Aslan (From the movie and books of Narnia)

01:33:12

Thorn
That's so cute :0 I'll do that.

Thornwood Manor

01:32:23

He should be Fries because of his sires name, and his dam could be Frenchie (Potato, Frenchie, and Fries)

01:27:08

Wolf
Yep! I love him, name ideas?

01:24:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ivory
Lol and he didn't bump his sire down either so that's good!

01:24:12

I'll*

01:24:04

Wolf
Yep! I'm definitely keep him, I also love my tobi's ^^

01:23:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Wow! I'm impressed that S was able to come up to a E!

01:22:09

-HEE Click- You're cutee.

01:18:16 ✨ Sassy

No problems! Hope she throws you something shiny <33

01:17:46

Sassy
I got one, thank you though <3

01:16:31 ✨ Sassy

I can send you a atraw from my former AALB stallion for free, I just don't know how to change the breeding requirements ):

01:11:56

Riverchase
Thank you, just can't find a WWW stallion with the right minimum breeding rating.

Riverchase Castle

01:10:12

Ooo, i love the rabicano

12:58:41

That made up for a horrid capture day.

12:58:26

Holy Crap. -HEE Click-

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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