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Transformers Acres

11:59:08 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Fanta

Maybe, it's completely possible.

11:58:08 Fantasticy | Fanta

Geek
I think you shared that one before I remember it lol

11:57:30 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
me all the time:

Transformers Acres

11:57:25 Geek, Greek Yogurt

When I see the names of lovers engraved on a tree, I don’t find it cute or romantic. I find it weird how many people take knives with them on dates.

11:57:13 Bug | Flea | KPH

aqua
*bug
and two words in one post is fine last I checked?

11:56:59 Rusty

jester
I'm confused :')

Crescent Estate

11:56:36 River / Crescent

The feeling you get when you finish a manip >>>

11:56:33 Bug | Flea | KPH

oh lmao xD

11:56:29 Fantasticy | Fanta

oopsie me bad

11:56:15

Pugs in the rug please don't use capitalization

11:55:48 Fantasticy | Fanta

KPH
no, "MIGHTY EAGLE"

11:55:21 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
but shes my MIGHTY EAGLE

11:55:11 Bug | Flea | KPH

fantsa
the egg throwing thing? xD

Oasis Ridge Farms

11:52:23 Dandy

The literally dying laughing emoji would come in handy right noe

11:52:02 Rusty

jester
she does look more like a hawk though lmao

11:51:58 Fantasticy | Fanta

KPH
took me a second to get that but now I'm dying

Transformers Acres

11:51:38 Geek, Greek Yogurt

My grandfather said my generation relies too much on the latest technology. So I unplugged his life support.

11:51:34 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
nah that's my MIGHTY EAGLE

11:51:11 Fantasticy | Fanta

It's a great use of my time

11:51:08 Rusty

ah yes burnt toast the mini hawk who likes laying her eggs in the hay xD

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Transformers Acres

11:59:08 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Fanta

Maybe, it's completely possible.

11:58:08 Fantasticy | Fanta

Geek
I think you shared that one before I remember it lol

11:57:30 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
me all the time:

Transformers Acres

11:57:25 Geek, Greek Yogurt

When I see the names of lovers engraved on a tree, I don’t find it cute or romantic. I find it weird how many people take knives with them on dates.

11:57:13 Bug | Flea | KPH

aqua
*bug
and two words in one post is fine last I checked?

11:56:59 Rusty

jester
I'm confused :')

Crescent Estate

11:56:36 River / Crescent

The feeling you get when you finish a manip >>>

11:56:33 Bug | Flea | KPH

oh lmao xD

11:56:29 Fantasticy | Fanta

oopsie me bad

11:56:15

Pugs in the rug please don't use capitalization

11:55:48 Fantasticy | Fanta

KPH
no, "MIGHTY EAGLE"

11:55:21 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
but shes my MIGHTY EAGLE

11:55:11 Bug | Flea | KPH

fantsa
the egg throwing thing? xD

Oasis Ridge Farms

11:52:23 Dandy

The literally dying laughing emoji would come in handy right noe

11:52:02 Rusty

jester
she does look more like a hawk though lmao

11:51:58 Fantasticy | Fanta

KPH
took me a second to get that but now I'm dying

Transformers Acres

11:51:38 Geek, Greek Yogurt

My grandfather said my generation relies too much on the latest technology. So I unplugged his life support.

11:51:34 Bug | Flea | KPH

rusty
nah that's my MIGHTY EAGLE

11:51:11 Fantasticy | Fanta

It's a great use of my time

11:51:08 Rusty

ah yes burnt toast the mini hawk who likes laying her eggs in the hay xD

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June 22, 2018 05:17 PM

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Edited at May 1, 2019 02:51 PM by Equity Falls

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June 22, 2018 05:20 PM

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The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

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June 22, 2018 05:24 PM

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BT21 Stables said:
The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

What on the back is rough? So I know what to edit :) the withers? The back? The loin? The croupe?

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June 22, 2018 05:28 PM

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This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

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June 22, 2018 05:36 PM

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Celestial Estates said:
This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

I plan on adding one in the top left :D and thanks! I don't use the burn tool unless it's on the color layer, but I have ways >:3

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June 22, 2018 05:40 PM

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It will be amazing if you add in a flashy blue eye!

Beautiful work by the way

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June 22, 2018 06:09 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....

and try again. :P<3

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June 22, 2018 07:13 PM

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....
and try again. :P<3

Deal! Lol kidding <3 Thanks Jelly-Oh

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