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MakeEm Fancy
08:31:39 Ally 💜
Aba and Sparta do that. I think Lyle just got excited to see me and that was his reaction. I had just let them out of their run and he gets super excited
Marvel Manor
08:31:22 
Okay
Transformers Acres
08:30:33 Geek, Eek
Marvel Manor

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Glacier Bay Cove
08:30:05 Arctic Katz
Lily does it, when she wants to be given attention and pets
Glacier Bay Cove
08:29:01 Arctic Katz
Oh
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:01 Ally 💜
Caught
MakeEm Fancy
08:28:37 Ally 💜
He launched himself into the air and slammed the side of his body into my stomach 🤣 He often does it with the other dogs. It didnt hurt that bad thankfully just got me off guard
Marvel Manor
08:28:34 
What is a HEWG show?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:26:34 Arctic Katz
Oh no, Ally. Being head butted by a cat is much better
MakeEm Fancy
08:23:17 Ally 💜
Definitely dont recommend getting body slammed by your dog 🙃
The Hunters Army
08:19:36 Hunter
-HEE Click-

First foal on after couple months. Cute.
starmutt
08:01:06 marsh 🌈
Wolf
summer break started <3 <3 i have a summer job so a bit busy but art is on the roll again so I'm doing well!! what about you? :D your art improved so much since I last checked :3
Blue Diamond
07:56:46 Bluey
Em
Immpressive!
Insignia Elites
07:56:17 Em
Im really hoping this foal will be my first futurity in the money win xD -HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
07:55:59 Bluey
I'm back after submitting my fricken STACK of new OC's
Wisteria Run Farm
07:55:21 Solar/Ria
This girl is pretty :)
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
07:51:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Marsh
Lol your good! How have you been? It's been a while!
Boulder Creek
07:48:37 
Ugh,
Third unknown brave 50 moves capture.

The force is strong with this batch.
starmutt
07:48:03 marsh 🌈
Wolf
hiii i'm hopping between WP and HEE sorry for vanishing on ya xD
LonghornRanch
07:42:46 
Lol I do to! I'm curious as to what her genetics will look like

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MakeEm Fancy
08:31:39 Ally 💜
Aba and Sparta do that. I think Lyle just got excited to see me and that was his reaction. I had just let them out of their run and he gets super excited
Marvel Manor
08:31:22 
Okay
Transformers Acres
08:30:33 Geek, Eek
Marvel Manor

Horse Eden World Games
Glacier Bay Cove
08:30:05 Arctic Katz
Lily does it, when she wants to be given attention and pets
Glacier Bay Cove
08:29:01 Arctic Katz
Oh
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:01 Ally 💜
Caught
MakeEm Fancy
08:28:37 Ally 💜
He launched himself into the air and slammed the side of his body into my stomach 🤣 He often does it with the other dogs. It didnt hurt that bad thankfully just got me off guard
Marvel Manor
08:28:34 
What is a HEWG show?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:26:34 Arctic Katz
Oh no, Ally. Being head butted by a cat is much better
MakeEm Fancy
08:23:17 Ally 💜
Definitely dont recommend getting body slammed by your dog 🙃
The Hunters Army
08:19:36 Hunter
-HEE Click-

First foal on after couple months. Cute.
starmutt
08:01:06 marsh 🌈
Wolf
summer break started <3 <3 i have a summer job so a bit busy but art is on the roll again so I'm doing well!! what about you? :D your art improved so much since I last checked :3
Blue Diamond
07:56:46 Bluey
Em
Immpressive!
Insignia Elites
07:56:17 Em
Im really hoping this foal will be my first futurity in the money win xD -HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
07:55:59 Bluey
I'm back after submitting my fricken STACK of new OC's
Wisteria Run Farm
07:55:21 Solar/Ria
This girl is pretty :)
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
07:51:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Marsh
Lol your good! How have you been? It's been a while!
Boulder Creek
07:48:37 
Ugh,
Third unknown brave 50 moves capture.

The force is strong with this batch.
starmutt
07:48:03 marsh 🌈
Wolf
hiii i'm hopping between WP and HEE sorry for vanishing on ya xD
LonghornRanch
07:42:46 
Lol I do to! I'm curious as to what her genetics will look like

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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