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2yo PEE 1/77 Premium bravery mare, 12k
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Pegasus Lane
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Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 04:05 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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So I have no clue what to price my art at...so if you have suggestions on that those could help as well.
I need some critique on my art. Ive been semi stuck lately on art and its been making me sort of depressed.
Recent art pieces:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/f12d/f/2018/187/c/a/deathappearancehorseavi_by_wsl30horselover10-dcghsz1.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/60bd/f/2018/196/f/7/running_free_horse_avi_by_wsl30horselover10-dchbwgy.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/ce47/f/2018/179/1/4/leaning_ladder_chestnut_mare_art_by_wsl30horselover10-dcfofa8.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/758b/f/2018/196/0/d/jello_entry_by_wsl30horselover10-dchceqg.jpg
So those are a few recent pieces and as I said I would like some critique on my art:)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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no idea what to price them at. but i love these. the brindle is my favorite
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:42 PM

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I'd say like 15-25k!
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM

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Jeesh, these are gorgeous! Great work! I like all of them a lot personally <3
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM


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First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:44 PM


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Lol thats good then because I currently have them at 25k:)

Lazy C Ranch said:
I'd say like 15-25k!


Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:45 PM

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1. The spots on this horse look very green and the front left hoof looks like it should be in the flowers, not on top of them

2. Maybe blur the background a bit to put more focus on the horse and make it bigger. Not a lot needs changing with this one, it already looks well put together.

3. Maybe make the glow a little fainter, the spots look a little unnatural but overall very pretty.

4. Personally, I like horses to be on the left or right side, at about 1/3 of the way along a banner, not right in the middle but the horse and the background match well.
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:50 PM


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Arveline Acres said:
First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)


Thank you:)
Although I do think the mane and tails thing could be because I use a mouse but I definitely know what you mean.

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