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Painted Perfection
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ISO your capture rejects! -HEE Click-

ISO Rusty Bits!
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Judgement Hall
11:00:52 Night
I have an auction going on that ends in a few days. I need the horses gone for space. I got some horses that could make decent show horses or color breeders. Some have no pedigree so it's perfect for anyone wanting to start their own lines.

They all start at 2k each so they're cheap and easy to afford.

-HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
10:15:07 Selling Colour PONs
-HEE Click-

Please buy...most 1k each. Need gone need ebs and space
The Lone Star
10:05:00 
Oh yeah baby:
-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
09:52:58 
-HEE Click-

Brindles
Chimera
Manchado
Sootys
Peacock
Blood Shoulder
Clay Dawn
09:50:42 Will Buy Apricots!!
ISO detergenttt for quest :)
Eagles Peak
09:28:48 
ABLB Studs Have LC Left (watch to win free straws): -HEE Click-

SH Broods (EEE,WEE): -HEE Click-

NEW Sport Horse Club, Growing Fast!: -HEE Click-

Dressage & Jumping Shows (2900ebs entry): -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
09:10:43 Selling Colour PONs
-HEE Click-

Please buy...most 1k each. Need gone need ebs and space
DaisyMeadowEventing
08:36:21 Daisy/ DM♡
196 colorful WWW SH broods
-HEE Click-

196 CcrC Toto SplSpl Lplp WWW SH embryo auction
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196 LpLp freshman straws
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Need gone, open to offers!
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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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