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Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
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I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
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Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD
Meraki Manor
12:36:36 Aki <3
Angel

Dang she’s cute. I adore champagnes.
~Savy~
12:34:39 Sav
I tried to reroll into a golden bay, but I couldn't quite get there
Ravenwood Farm
12:34:11 Raven
I love her name Angel
Artemis Ridge
12:32:43 Howl
Aww Sav, I'd snatch him xD
Angels angels
12:32:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Shes like the only homo sabino I have but she is too cute to reroll
~Savy~
12:31:11 Sav
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Took me a couple for this dude :P
Shady Tree Farm
12:30:30 Shady (RRR Side)
I had rerolls to burn so I figured I might as well xD
Angels angels
12:29:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was going to say isn't that one of them xD
Shady Tree Farm
12:29:09 Shady (RRR Side)
I take that back xD Lucky 14 lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:28:52 Shady (RRR Side)
13 rerolls in and I still haven't gotten one of the new sabinos x)
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Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
-HEE Click-
I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD
Meraki Manor
12:36:36 Aki <3
Angel

Dang she’s cute. I adore champagnes.
~Savy~
12:34:39 Sav
I tried to reroll into a golden bay, but I couldn't quite get there
Ravenwood Farm
12:34:11 Raven
I love her name Angel
Artemis Ridge
12:32:43 Howl
Aww Sav, I'd snatch him xD
Angels angels
12:32:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Shes like the only homo sabino I have but she is too cute to reroll
~Savy~
12:31:11 Sav
-HEE Click-
Took me a couple for this dude :P
Shady Tree Farm
12:30:30 Shady (RRR Side)
I had rerolls to burn so I figured I might as well xD
Angels angels
12:29:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was going to say isn't that one of them xD
Shady Tree Farm
12:29:09 Shady (RRR Side)
I take that back xD Lucky 14 lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:28:52 Shady (RRR Side)
13 rerolls in and I still haven't gotten one of the new sabinos x)
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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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