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So, I use ibisPaint x and I need help with this piece I'm making. I like it for the most point so far, but I know I want/need criticism to help me become better!
This is still a WIP, so it's not finished.
Critique I'm looking specifically: -legs; front leg especially! I had to repaint a lot of this horse because of tack
-hair; does it need more volume? Like thickness? And more highlights? -body prep!
Of course, I'm looking for anything and everything else too! Image is in post below. |
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Hair-the volume is great,and the shape is pretty nice,but ypu need lighter highlights,not just a shape lighter than the base Frong leg-it does loom a bit odd if you zoom in but otherwise its fine Body prep-perfect,i see nothing wrong with it O must point out though:grounding Use the goosegrass brush on the eraser ant erase part of the hooves you feel should be |
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To add to the post of Ladybird regarding grounding, I would add some stronger shadows on the legs where the horse touches the ground, especially because the light comes from behind and the horse has quite a long shadow cast on the grass. This calls for more aggressive shading even on the body of the horse in my opinion. For example, the butt could be less shiny and more dark, and the outline of the back, front left leg and back left leg could have a strong shine. |
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This is has been finished! It's up for auction if interested.
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Morning Drizzle, but Clearing later
