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Imperial Warmbloods
10:32:33 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ WPR
Like this? :)
-HEE Click-
Wild River Run Farm
10:32:32 WRR
Thank you I’ve been scrolling through the search page and I’m not entirely sure what to look for😅
Highglen Ridge
10:31:43 Cali | TBs
Ah okay, let me find you one then. Sorry lol, i'm quite charged up now
Wild River Run Farm
10:30:55 WRR
My phone keeps auto correcting sorry
Wild River Run Farm
10:30:20 WRR
Someone asked for me to do their horse with the dramatic or homo dun look but I’m not super sure what they are talking about so I’m trying to find something hopefully close
Glacier Bay Cove
10:29:30 Glacier Kittens
Do you mean to do some art, WRR
Wild River Run Farm
10:29:25 WRR
Like a dramatic dub look? I’ve seen very few with what I’m looking for but it’s just for art I’m not meaning like I want the horse, just a link to them lol
Highglen Ridge
10:27:41 Cali | TBs
WRR
1, you can't asl for horses in main chat
2, what do you even mean?
LBKL
10:27:04 
How is everyone doing?
Wild River Run Farm
10:26:54 WRR
Can anyone send me a horse or 2 with super dramatic fun factor?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:47 Glacier Kittens
I like it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:24 Glacier Kittens
??
Highglen Ridge
10:07:20 Cali | TBs
Okay, what do we think of the name?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:31 Glacier Kittens
And that gives me ideas for some art projects
Glacier Bay Cove
09:59:55 Glacier Kittens
If I remember correctly, I wanted a chimera unicorn walking out of the woods
Calela Eventing
09:58:05 Cali
Remind me what you wanted😅
QualitySH
09:57:39 
Penta I know and it makes her even more pretty and thanks Cheshire
Glacier Bay Cove
09:57:32 Glacier Kittens
🤔🤔🫠🫠
Calela Eventing
09:56:27 Cali
Katz
*cough* ughm, so yeah actually about that
I may or may not of forgotten to list it and i may or not have forgotten
Glacier Bay Cove
09:55:39 Glacier Kittens
Curious as to how my art is going, Cali

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Imperial Warmbloods
10:32:33 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ WPR
Like this? :)
-HEE Click-
Wild River Run Farm
10:32:32 WRR
Thank you I’ve been scrolling through the search page and I’m not entirely sure what to look for😅
Highglen Ridge
10:31:43 Cali | TBs
Ah okay, let me find you one then. Sorry lol, i'm quite charged up now
Wild River Run Farm
10:30:55 WRR
My phone keeps auto correcting sorry
Wild River Run Farm
10:30:20 WRR
Someone asked for me to do their horse with the dramatic or homo dun look but I’m not super sure what they are talking about so I’m trying to find something hopefully close
Glacier Bay Cove
10:29:30 Glacier Kittens
Do you mean to do some art, WRR
Wild River Run Farm
10:29:25 WRR
Like a dramatic dub look? I’ve seen very few with what I’m looking for but it’s just for art I’m not meaning like I want the horse, just a link to them lol
Highglen Ridge
10:27:41 Cali | TBs
WRR
1, you can't asl for horses in main chat
2, what do you even mean?
LBKL
10:27:04 
How is everyone doing?
Wild River Run Farm
10:26:54 WRR
Can anyone send me a horse or 2 with super dramatic fun factor?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:47 Glacier Kittens
I like it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:24 Glacier Kittens
??
Highglen Ridge
10:07:20 Cali | TBs
Okay, what do we think of the name?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:31 Glacier Kittens
And that gives me ideas for some art projects
Glacier Bay Cove
09:59:55 Glacier Kittens
If I remember correctly, I wanted a chimera unicorn walking out of the woods
Calela Eventing
09:58:05 Cali
Remind me what you wanted😅
QualitySH
09:57:39 
Penta I know and it makes her even more pretty and thanks Cheshire
Glacier Bay Cove
09:57:32 Glacier Kittens
🤔🤔🫠🫠
Calela Eventing
09:56:27 Cali
Katz
*cough* ughm, so yeah actually about that
I may or may not of forgotten to list it and i may or not have forgotten
Glacier Bay Cove
09:55:39 Glacier Kittens
Curious as to how my art is going, Cali

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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