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02:28:45 
if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them
All Breeds
02:25:52 Fawn
And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀
Wolfs Ire
02:23:45 Fawn
His name suits him so painfully well x.x
Wolfs Ire
02:22:44 Fawn
I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD
Pon Brats
02:22:26 
It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-
Pon Brats
02:21:39 
I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it
Wolfs Ire
02:20:01 Fawn
I did through the mod page ;)
All Breeds
02:19:20 Fawn
I beg your finest of pardons?
Dirty Paws
02:19:16 ♘Tosk
Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?
Dirty Paws
02:18:45 ♘Tosk
And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃
Dirty Paws
02:18:10 ♘Tosk
Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner
All Breeds
02:17:34 Fawn
I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD
Breadcrumbs
02:15:24 
Too many accounts xD
All Breeds
02:14:44 Fawn
Tosk xD
Breadcrumbs
02:13:26 
Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x
All Breeds
02:05:55 Fawn
Yes I rerolled her earlier
fire
02:03:13 
did you re roll
All Breeds
01:56:06 Fawn
Her sire is #1 AALB/#15 ABLB and her dam is #25 AALB
All Breeds
01:54:45 Fawn
I'm hopefully optimistic about her hitting the LB
Winterfall
01:45:19 →Winter
I'm swooning over the ratings XD what I would give for that fawn

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Kk shows
02:28:45 
if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them
All Breeds
02:25:52 Fawn
And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀
Wolfs Ire
02:23:45 Fawn
His name suits him so painfully well x.x
Wolfs Ire
02:22:44 Fawn
I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD
Pon Brats
02:22:26 
It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-
Pon Brats
02:21:39 
I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it
Wolfs Ire
02:20:01 Fawn
I did through the mod page ;)
All Breeds
02:19:20 Fawn
I beg your finest of pardons?
Dirty Paws
02:19:16 ♘Tosk
Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?
Dirty Paws
02:18:45 ♘Tosk
And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃
Dirty Paws
02:18:10 ♘Tosk
Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner
All Breeds
02:17:34 Fawn
I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD
Breadcrumbs
02:15:24 
Too many accounts xD
All Breeds
02:14:44 Fawn
Tosk xD
Breadcrumbs
02:13:26 
Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x
All Breeds
02:05:55 Fawn
Yes I rerolled her earlier
fire
02:03:13 
did you re roll
All Breeds
01:56:06 Fawn
Her sire is #1 AALB/#15 ABLB and her dam is #25 AALB
All Breeds
01:54:45 Fawn
I'm hopefully optimistic about her hitting the LB
Winterfall
01:45:19 →Winter
I'm swooning over the ratings XD what I would give for that fawn

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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