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MakeEm Fancy
09:27:59 Ally 💜
I have this dude
-HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
09:27:05 Alyssa (Future Vet)
-HEE Click-

Nervous about her <.<
Legacy Leagues
09:21:11 Alyssa (Future Vet)
A lot of wk4s happening tomorrow <.<
Gilded Roses
09:20:01 River / Brody
Lynx
Yep xDD
Lynx Glory
09:01:42 ⛈ whisper/lynx
finally you figured out the friends invite thing bahahaha
Lynx Glory
09:01:33 ⛈ whisper/lynx
river :D
Gilded Roses
08:57:19 River / Brody
Lynxx
Golden Crest
08:46:48 | Eve
I am currently using my old laptop and it has art saved on it <3333
Haloed Legends
08:28:11 AW | Incognito
I'm going to hold out on capturing till January or maybe April. Than I can send him right back to the hospital lol
ZequineZ
08:26:58 ZEZ - ZZ
Mine straight up died on capture day πŸ˜‚
Haloed Legends
08:15:45 AW | Incognito
3 100 stall barns and 300 show horses later and my accountant is beinf rushed to the hospital lol
Glacier Bay Cove
08:06:29 Arctic Katz
In the rumble
Glacier Bay Cove
08:06:10 Arctic Katz
Really can't wait to see what they produce for this round of art projects
SCF Sporting Chance
08:04:26 SCF/Gibbs
heh, heh, heh... (evil laugh)... bring it on artists!!
Pegasus Lane
07:57:45 Peggy (or) Peg
Oh man. The stock is ROUGH this round. Good luck artists πŸ˜…
KPH Equestrian
07:53:59 Rapcoon | Jester
omggg I LOVE this round's theme😍
SCF Sporting Chance
07:46:00 SCF/Gibbs
If anyone is interested in seeing the stock and challenge the Round 3 Semi Finalists for the Artist's Rumble they are up (this is the stock for them). -HEE Click-
Haloed Legends
07:43:44 AW | Incognito
Eury
I didnt think so. I guess i was just curious if having a variety or sticking to just one was better
The Old Gods
07:33:09 Void Malign
Doesn't really matter. It's up to you on how many disciplines you want to do
Fantasy Horses
07:33:03 Fantasy
Okay guys, gotta run. Bye!

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MakeEm Fancy
09:27:59 Ally 💜
I have this dude
-HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
09:27:05 Alyssa (Future Vet)
-HEE Click-

Nervous about her <.<
Legacy Leagues
09:21:11 Alyssa (Future Vet)
A lot of wk4s happening tomorrow <.<
Gilded Roses
09:20:01 River / Brody
Lynx
Yep xDD
Lynx Glory
09:01:42 ⛈ whisper/lynx
finally you figured out the friends invite thing bahahaha
Lynx Glory
09:01:33 ⛈ whisper/lynx
river :D
Gilded Roses
08:57:19 River / Brody
Lynxx
Golden Crest
08:46:48 | Eve
I am currently using my old laptop and it has art saved on it <3333
Haloed Legends
08:28:11 AW | Incognito
I'm going to hold out on capturing till January or maybe April. Than I can send him right back to the hospital lol
ZequineZ
08:26:58 ZEZ - ZZ
Mine straight up died on capture day πŸ˜‚
Haloed Legends
08:15:45 AW | Incognito
3 100 stall barns and 300 show horses later and my accountant is beinf rushed to the hospital lol
Glacier Bay Cove
08:06:29 Arctic Katz
In the rumble
Glacier Bay Cove
08:06:10 Arctic Katz
Really can't wait to see what they produce for this round of art projects
SCF Sporting Chance
08:04:26 SCF/Gibbs
heh, heh, heh... (evil laugh)... bring it on artists!!
Pegasus Lane
07:57:45 Peggy (or) Peg
Oh man. The stock is ROUGH this round. Good luck artists πŸ˜…
KPH Equestrian
07:53:59 Rapcoon | Jester
omggg I LOVE this round's theme😍
SCF Sporting Chance
07:46:00 SCF/Gibbs
If anyone is interested in seeing the stock and challenge the Round 3 Semi Finalists for the Artist's Rumble they are up (this is the stock for them). -HEE Click-
Haloed Legends
07:43:44 AW | Incognito
Eury
I didnt think so. I guess i was just curious if having a variety or sticking to just one was better
The Old Gods
07:33:09 Void Malign
Doesn't really matter. It's up to you on how many disciplines you want to do
Fantasy Horses
07:33:03 Fantasy
Okay guys, gotta run. Bye!

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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