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RFS Thoroughbreds
05:13:07 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
glacier
yep that's the basic plan lol
-Starlight Haven-
05:12:45 Shark/Kai/Moon
Snow
Oof, I hope you get a PON then, but hey if you don't like it, I'll steal it hehe
Glacier Bay Cove
05:11:57 Glacier Kittens
New plan, I will just show my horses until they drop dead, in the show ring
-Starlight Haven-
05:11:54 Shark/Kai/Moon
Snow
Lol, good luck with that.
Gemstone Stable
05:11:15 Snow❆Gem
Why are you a SH? I was hoping for a PON. :( WWW pretty SH doesn't quite excite me as it should...

-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:05:27 Snow❆Gem
I just got an ad for Ivybrook Academy. For kids 18 months and older. O.o

Chill out Google, I'm single. lol
Elysium Opalus
05:03:45 anti gen ai
The capture party bonus did go on until noon friday (?)but
No time stamp besides date 😭
Elysium Opalus
05:01:54 anti gen ai
Oh yeah she was bunched with the rest of the capture haul how could I tell unless I know how to read 😂
Silver Melody Acres
04:59:46 Solar - KNNs
congrats! but she just got caught on Friday lol
Elysium Opalus
04:56:13 anti gen ai
Hey WHAT
-HEE Click-
This girl was probably impatiently waiting since last capture party to be rated to tell me she was WWW 💀😭
~Savy~
04:48:34 Sav
-HEE Click-
New Sabino unlocked… but do I go for a golden bay >.>
Circle Star RIDs
04:31:20 Granny C
Oak - sounds yummy
Oakmoss Stud
04:25:59 Oak
Granny, we make it in the slow cooker (crock pot if you're American, I think?), make the thickest, most indulgent hot chocolate, pour an absurd amount of Bailey's in it, top it with a tonne of spray cream. It's SO good.
The Lone Star
04:23:33 
I had a cream Diseronno that I'm sure went bad somehow. I had my friend over and we put some in our coffee. When we both had a drink of it, we both ended up projectile vomiting within seconds of each other.
The Lone Star
04:21:20 
Come on, Denise. Out of my 400 horses, you're telling me only 13 are ready to show? Somethings not jiving.
Circle Star RIDs
04:18:59 Granny C
oh I love Bailey's Irish creme, on the rocks.
Never had their chocolate though
Oakmoss Stud
04:07:50 Oak
Bailey's hot chocolate is the highlight of the whole christmas period *-*
Golden Rose
04:06:14 Rose
I am thoroughly enjoying mine at the moment haha, I am such a hot chocolate girly :3
Circle Star RIDs
04:06:07 Granny C
How do I get the 'card' view in my barns to go away and stay away ?
Fire_Rescue
04:05:09 Rescue/ Rookie/ Rumi
Eve, why are you going to shut down the dragon game?

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RFS Thoroughbreds
05:13:07 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
glacier
yep that's the basic plan lol
-Starlight Haven-
05:12:45 Shark/Kai/Moon
Snow
Oof, I hope you get a PON then, but hey if you don't like it, I'll steal it hehe
Glacier Bay Cove
05:11:57 Glacier Kittens
New plan, I will just show my horses until they drop dead, in the show ring
-Starlight Haven-
05:11:54 Shark/Kai/Moon
Snow
Lol, good luck with that.
Gemstone Stable
05:11:15 Snow❆Gem
Why are you a SH? I was hoping for a PON. :( WWW pretty SH doesn't quite excite me as it should...

-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:05:27 Snow❆Gem
I just got an ad for Ivybrook Academy. For kids 18 months and older. O.o

Chill out Google, I'm single. lol
Elysium Opalus
05:03:45 anti gen ai
The capture party bonus did go on until noon friday (?)but
No time stamp besides date 😭
Elysium Opalus
05:01:54 anti gen ai
Oh yeah she was bunched with the rest of the capture haul how could I tell unless I know how to read 😂
Silver Melody Acres
04:59:46 Solar - KNNs
congrats! but she just got caught on Friday lol
Elysium Opalus
04:56:13 anti gen ai
Hey WHAT
-HEE Click-
This girl was probably impatiently waiting since last capture party to be rated to tell me she was WWW 💀😭
~Savy~
04:48:34 Sav
-HEE Click-
New Sabino unlocked… but do I go for a golden bay >.>
Circle Star RIDs
04:31:20 Granny C
Oak - sounds yummy
Oakmoss Stud
04:25:59 Oak
Granny, we make it in the slow cooker (crock pot if you're American, I think?), make the thickest, most indulgent hot chocolate, pour an absurd amount of Bailey's in it, top it with a tonne of spray cream. It's SO good.
The Lone Star
04:23:33 
I had a cream Diseronno that I'm sure went bad somehow. I had my friend over and we put some in our coffee. When we both had a drink of it, we both ended up projectile vomiting within seconds of each other.
The Lone Star
04:21:20 
Come on, Denise. Out of my 400 horses, you're telling me only 13 are ready to show? Somethings not jiving.
Circle Star RIDs
04:18:59 Granny C
oh I love Bailey's Irish creme, on the rocks.
Never had their chocolate though
Oakmoss Stud
04:07:50 Oak
Bailey's hot chocolate is the highlight of the whole christmas period *-*
Golden Rose
04:06:14 Rose
I am thoroughly enjoying mine at the moment haha, I am such a hot chocolate girly :3
Circle Star RIDs
04:06:07 Granny C
How do I get the 'card' view in my barns to go away and stay away ?
Fire_Rescue
04:05:09 Rescue/ Rookie/ Rumi
Eve, why are you going to shut down the dragon game?

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 4368
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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