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Deep Ocean
05:40:21 ♘Tosk
Welp. Could be worse
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Tiluu
05:39:30 Honey
Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!
Tiluu
05:39:11 Honey
Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him
Windy Hollow Farms
05:37:58 Windy
wow Capp that splash filly!
Breadcrumbs
05:37:05 
also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D
Breadcrumbs
05:36:47 
This one, Honey
-HEE Click-
Tiluu
05:36:13 Honey
No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD
Cappuccino
05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp
Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD
Breadcrumbs
05:34:38 
the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?
Breadcrumbs
05:34:10 
Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D
Lunoa
05:32:01 Honey
Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!
Cappuccino
05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp
Holy crap!! -HEE Click-
Lunoa
05:30:45 Honey
-HEE Click-
Yay
Amethyst Ranch
05:30:29 Echo <3
So annoyed that im behind on training xD
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Cappuccino
05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!
Windy Hollow Farms
05:28:59 Windy
ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-
Portrait Paints Stud
05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting
Same wk 4s
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
05:28:25 
He deserves a name, shiny as he is.
Breadcrumbs
05:28:05 
Happy that he went all up xD
Cappuccino
05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp
Rabi!! *.*

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Deep Ocean
05:40:21 ♘Tosk
Welp. Could be worse
-HEE Click-
Tiluu
05:39:30 Honey
Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!
Tiluu
05:39:11 Honey
Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him
Windy Hollow Farms
05:37:58 Windy
wow Capp that splash filly!
Breadcrumbs
05:37:05 
also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D
Breadcrumbs
05:36:47 
This one, Honey
-HEE Click-
Tiluu
05:36:13 Honey
No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD
Cappuccino
05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp
Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD
Breadcrumbs
05:34:38 
the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?
Breadcrumbs
05:34:10 
Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D
Lunoa
05:32:01 Honey
Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!
Cappuccino
05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp
Holy crap!! -HEE Click-
Lunoa
05:30:45 Honey
-HEE Click-
Yay
Amethyst Ranch
05:30:29 Echo <3
So annoyed that im behind on training xD
-HEE Click-
Cappuccino
05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!
Windy Hollow Farms
05:28:59 Windy
ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-
Portrait Paints Stud
05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting
Same wk 4s
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
05:28:25 
He deserves a name, shiny as he is.
Breadcrumbs
05:28:05 
Happy that he went all up xD
Cappuccino
05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp
Rabi!! *.*

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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