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Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary
Circle Star RIDs
05:40:14 Granny C
Humor - ok, guess I don't get why it would be a tiny bit terrifying then - no matter
Distorted Humor
05:38:23 
lol no it’s not terrifying in that I don’t think any of us will we’re all old enough for it not to affect us
The Barefoot Barn
05:36:35 Blakley
May someone with extra time check out my barn and PM me to tell me what I’m doing wrong with breeding and why I keep getting such low ratings?
Circle Star RIDs
05:36:07 Granny C
Humor - think they'll have nightmares from watching it ?

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Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary
Circle Star RIDs
05:40:14 Granny C
Humor - ok, guess I don't get why it would be a tiny bit terrifying then - no matter
Distorted Humor
05:38:23 
lol no it’s not terrifying in that I don’t think any of us will we’re all old enough for it not to affect us
The Barefoot Barn
05:36:35 Blakley
May someone with extra time check out my barn and PM me to tell me what I’m doing wrong with breeding and why I keep getting such low ratings?
Circle Star RIDs
05:36:07 Granny C
Humor - think they'll have nightmares from watching it ?

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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