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MakeEm Fancy
11:01:03 Ally 💜
You got this Glacier
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:26 Arctic Katz
Not sure how realistic it is, but I will try working on it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:51 Arctic Katz
My goal is to attempt to get some more 100 stall barns by the end of December
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:59 Ally 💜
I think that will be my goal next month
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:46 Ally 💜
I need at least 4 more 100 stall barns
Sunni
10:48:05 Sunni bunny
Ally we will have more gelding's this RO haha.
I might need a second barn.
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:01 Ally 💜
Im slowly decluttering lol but majority of what I have is geldings XD
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:44 Arctic Katz
Interesting
MakeEm Fancy
10:37:39 Ally 💜
I have 9 open stalls 🥴 oops
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:48 Arctic Katz
Going to reorganise my barns again, based on the bravery ratings
Snitches' Stitches
10:18:55 Snitch
Same wild. I have like 30 horses I need to FR that I'd like money for and then horses to bravery test
Glacier Bay Cove
10:05:49 Arctic Katz
Same, so I can plant hay, for my horses
Glacier Bay Cove
10:04:36 Arctic Katz
And have breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:06 Arctic Katz
After RO, I will have more horses to bravery test
Sunni
09:36:46 Sunni bunny
Same wild.
Wild_Potatoes
09:35:51 
I wish RO would hurry up and get here
Sunni
09:33:53 Sunni bunny
Cove I'll be good until RO.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:33:40 Bird
@Glacier, lol,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:33:18 Arctic Katz
Mine are organised for right now,unless I end up capturing more horses
Sunni
09:32:22 Sunni bunny
I got my barns organized, haha took a while.

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MakeEm Fancy
11:01:03 Ally 💜
You got this Glacier
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:26 Arctic Katz
Not sure how realistic it is, but I will try working on it
Glacier Bay Cove
10:57:51 Arctic Katz
My goal is to attempt to get some more 100 stall barns by the end of December
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:59 Ally 💜
I think that will be my goal next month
MakeEm Fancy
10:48:46 Ally 💜
I need at least 4 more 100 stall barns
Sunni
10:48:05 Sunni bunny
Ally we will have more gelding's this RO haha.
I might need a second barn.
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:01 Ally 💜
Im slowly decluttering lol but majority of what I have is geldings XD
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:44 Arctic Katz
Interesting
MakeEm Fancy
10:37:39 Ally 💜
I have 9 open stalls 🥴 oops
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:48 Arctic Katz
Going to reorganise my barns again, based on the bravery ratings
Snitches' Stitches
10:18:55 Snitch
Same wild. I have like 30 horses I need to FR that I'd like money for and then horses to bravery test
Glacier Bay Cove
10:05:49 Arctic Katz
Same, so I can plant hay, for my horses
Glacier Bay Cove
10:04:36 Arctic Katz
And have breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:06 Arctic Katz
After RO, I will have more horses to bravery test
Sunni
09:36:46 Sunni bunny
Same wild.
Wild_Potatoes
09:35:51 
I wish RO would hurry up and get here
Sunni
09:33:53 Sunni bunny
Cove I'll be good until RO.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:33:40 Bird
@Glacier, lol,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:33:18 Arctic Katz
Mine are organised for right now,unless I end up capturing more horses
Sunni
09:32:22 Sunni bunny
I got my barns organized, haha took a while.

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:26 PM

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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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