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Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
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I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
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Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD
Meraki Manor
12:36:36 Aki <3
Angel

Dang she’s cute. I adore champagnes.
~Savy~
12:34:39 Sav
I tried to reroll into a golden bay, but I couldn't quite get there
Ravenwood Farm
12:34:11 Raven
I love her name Angel
Artemis Ridge
12:32:43 Howl
Aww Sav, I'd snatch him xD
Angels angels
12:32:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Shes like the only homo sabino I have but she is too cute to reroll
~Savy~
12:31:11 Sav
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Took me a couple for this dude :P
Shady Tree Farm
12:30:30 Shady (RRR Side)
I had rerolls to burn so I figured I might as well xD
Angels angels
12:29:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was going to say isn't that one of them xD
Shady Tree Farm
12:29:09 Shady (RRR Side)
I take that back xD Lucky 14 lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:28:52 Shady (RRR Side)
13 rerolls in and I still haven't gotten one of the new sabinos x)
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Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I never hated SbSb except the all white ones but I just don't want it in my breeding stock
Glacier Bay Cove
12:45:18 Glacier Kittens
I am, Aki
Guinness Hollow
12:41:33 Dimmed | RID
Okay I hate SbSb slightly less now
Meraki Manor
12:40:45 Aki <3
Anyone a fan of Medicine Hats? I forget that I like them until I come across one lol
Angels angels
12:39:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Badger face is so cute
~Savy~
12:39:31 Sav
-HEE Click-
I have this cutie too, love a little badger face
Meraki Manor
12:39:04 Aki <3
Debating on rerolling her when I restock. -HEE Click-
Not my favorite Tobi.
French y/n
12:37:42 Frenchie
Finally rated more horse
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:37:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The splash covers most of the sabino lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:37:04 Shady (RRR Side)
She is, Angel! That's one of the "old" Sbsb patterns I don't mind too much xD
Meraki Manor
12:36:36 Aki <3
Angel

Dang she’s cute. I adore champagnes.
~Savy~
12:34:39 Sav
I tried to reroll into a golden bay, but I couldn't quite get there
Ravenwood Farm
12:34:11 Raven
I love her name Angel
Artemis Ridge
12:32:43 Howl
Aww Sav, I'd snatch him xD
Angels angels
12:32:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Shes like the only homo sabino I have but she is too cute to reroll
~Savy~
12:31:11 Sav
-HEE Click-
Took me a couple for this dude :P
Shady Tree Farm
12:30:30 Shady (RRR Side)
I had rerolls to burn so I figured I might as well xD
Angels angels
12:29:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was going to say isn't that one of them xD
Shady Tree Farm
12:29:09 Shady (RRR Side)
I take that back xD Lucky 14 lol
Shady Tree Farm
12:28:52 Shady (RRR Side)
13 rerolls in and I still haven't gotten one of the new sabinos x)
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Art critique May 13, 2019 04:59 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I have not been doing art vervy long but I would love some help on how to make it better! Tear these pieces apart but please do this in a nice way and do not be rude.
https://postimg.cc/gallery/328v6n6nu/ ⬅ here are my examples

Edited at May 26, 2020 11:32 PM by Lambo Farms
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:26 PM

Former Stable
 
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Nice start, but your horses need to be way bigger. Maybe don't smudge the horse as much. Fix the lighting a bit. I see on one of the images you outlined the whole horse. Only outline a few sides of the horse where the sun is reflecting. Unless its really bright. Maybe fix the eyes a bit?
Other than that your onto a really nice start!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:28 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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I use Ibis Paint X so, some pointers :P

Start out with a 500x500 blank piece. Choose your background to fit (you don't have to use the whole background, you can just make it bigger and use a certain piece)

Then, take your horse and import it into a totally new page. Work on it there, the colors, mane and tail, eyes, etc. Because you can see all the details that way.

When you get it how you like, make the background transparent and save as a PNG. Then import it onto your background picture, and play with the contrast/brightness until the horse looks like it belongs there, and don't forget the shadow!

Other pointers, make your horses a little bigger for the avatars so the background doesn't swallow the horse :3

I hope this helps!!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:29 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Hollaway said:
Nice start, but your horses need to be way bigger. Maybe don't smudge the horse as much. Fix the lighting a bit. I see on one of the images you outlined the whole horse. Only outline a few sides of the horse where the sun is reflecting. Unless its really bright. Maybe fix the eyes a bit?
Other than that your onto a really nice start!


Thank you for your help!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:30 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
I use Ibis Paint X so, some pointers :P

Start out with a 500x500 blank piece. Choose your background to fit (you don't have to use the whole background, you can just make it bigger and use a certain piece)

Then, take your horse and import it into a totally new page. Work on it there, the colors, mane and tail, eyes, etc. Because you can see all the details that way.

When you get it how you like, make the background transparent and save as a PNG. Then import it onto your background picture, and play with the contrast/brightness until the horse looks like it belongs there, and don't forget the shadow!

Other pointers, make your horses a little bigger for the avatars so the background doesn't swallow the horse :3

I hope this helps!!


Thank you! I will use all of your tips
Art critique May 14, 2019 06:58 AM


Angels angels
 
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I agree with Crystal
Thats what I do as well
And you may need to add some color to the horse to make the lighting match but not to much

One thing I would say for sure is you need to practice with shadows and lights, best thing to do is make a new layer as a clipping mask on the horse and color in black where the shadows should be then you can blur and smudge them to fit in and mess with the opacity until it fits in

Its all about practice ;) also of course you know you can always pm me if you have questions
Art critique May 14, 2019 07:01 AM


Angels angels
 
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Oh another thing once you pick your BG or horse stock whichever first you want to find the other that will fit together, such as if you find a horse stock first you want to find a BG with the same camera angle somewhat of the same light source direction and most important make sure there is a space in the BG the horse can be put that looks natural, such as a trail etc. And vise versa if you find the BG first
Art critique May 14, 2019 07:01 AM


Lambo Farms
 
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Angel's angels said:
I agree with Crystal
Thats what I do as well
And you may need to add some color to the horse to make the lighting match but not to much

One thing I would say for sure is you need to practice with shadows and lights, best thing to do is make a new layer as a clipping mask on the horse and color in black where the shadows should be then you can blur and smudge them to fit in and mess with the opacity until it fits in

Its all about practice ;) also of course you know you can always pm me if you have questions


thank you <3

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