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02:28:45

if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them

All Breeds

02:25:52 Fawn

And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀

Wolfs Ire

02:23:45 Fawn

His name suits him so painfully well x.x

Wolfs Ire

02:22:44 Fawn

I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD

Pon Brats

02:22:26

It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:21:39

I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it

Wolfs Ire

02:20:01 Fawn

I did through the mod page ;)

All Breeds

02:19:20 Fawn

I beg your finest of pardons?

Dirty Paws

02:19:16 ♘Tosk

Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?

Dirty Paws

02:18:45 ♘Tosk

And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃

Dirty Paws

02:18:10 ♘Tosk

Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner

All Breeds

02:17:34 Fawn

I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD

Breadcrumbs

02:15:24

Too many accounts xD

All Breeds

02:14:44 Fawn

Tosk xD

Breadcrumbs

02:13:26

Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x

All Breeds

02:05:55 Fawn

Yes I rerolled her earlier

fire

02:03:13

did you re roll

All Breeds

01:56:06 Fawn

Her sire is #1 AALB/#15 ABLB and her dam is #25 AALB

All Breeds

01:54:45 Fawn

I'm hopefully optimistic about her hitting the LB

Winterfall

01:45:19 →Winter

I'm swooning over the ratings XD what I would give for that fawn

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Kk shows

02:28:45

if another stable is getting art of you how do you send it to them

All Breeds

02:25:52 Fawn

And I see you're hiding some pretties on that account 👀

Wolfs Ire

02:23:45 Fawn

His name suits him so painfully well x.x

Wolfs Ire

02:22:44 Fawn

I can't remember the last time I ordered art :/ I made my avatar on this account but usually buy art instead xD

Pon Brats

02:22:26

It's actually the Art for him
-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

02:21:39

I figured it would go through you :D I haven't gotten new artsies in ages, I even forgot where to upload it

Wolfs Ire

02:20:01 Fawn

I did through the mod page ;)

All Breeds

02:19:20 Fawn

I beg your finest of pardons?

Dirty Paws

02:19:16 ♘Tosk

Oh Fawns, did you see the new stable Set Dimmeh made me?

Dirty Paws

02:18:45 ♘Tosk

And why are there so many ppp with a eww+ min breeding rating 🙃

Dirty Paws

02:18:10 ♘Tosk

Exactly that. I just look at the matching broods, not at the name of the owner

All Breeds

02:17:34 Fawn

I FEEL that. The amount of times I've also done it as well. Sometimes I've clicked breed and it says I can't because the accounts are linked and I'm like well damn didn't realize he was mine xD

Breadcrumbs

02:15:24

Too many accounts xD

All Breeds

02:14:44 Fawn

Tosk xD

Breadcrumbs

02:13:26

Oops. Almost bred to a horse on my SD , while questing. Didn't look at the name x.x

All Breeds

02:05:55 Fawn

Yes I rerolled her earlier

fire

02:03:13

did you re roll

All Breeds

01:56:06 Fawn

Her sire is #1 AALB/#15 ABLB and her dam is #25 AALB

All Breeds

01:54:45 Fawn

I'm hopefully optimistic about her hitting the LB

Winterfall

01:45:19 →Winter

I'm swooning over the ratings XD what I would give for that fawn

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2686
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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