Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 200   Season: Summer   
$: 0
Forecast: Morning Rain, with Cooling Temps Later
Forecast:
Sun 12:06am  
Stables Online:  89 
Chatbox
Vanguard Stables
12:00:04 River | Van
-Click-
Vanguard Stables
11:58:58 River | Van
Ooh are we talking about our horses?
Boulder Creek
11:58:45 
Spring Fling - so obvious, how did I miss that!

ooooo Daffodil Dash that's cute

Now to decide between the two

....and get totally distracted by the five things happening at the same time in the same space
ghost light stables
11:55:41 Toaster rapcoon
Speaking of shinner, the mole rat is back under saddle after six months of stall rest!
-Click-
fire
11:54:12 
-HEE Click-
ghost light stables
11:53:28 Toaster rapcoon
Furn
Twinkie! She actually looks happy in halter classes :0 shinner glares down the judges lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:51:10 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
Twinks was such a good mare this past show, didn't have any twinkletoe moments which is shocking xD
-Click-
Wolfs Ire
11:49:49 Fawn
I want to plant some more this year because I love them so much <3
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:43:58 Gladius
same fawn!!! I actually have a kind of hilarious two-picture series...snow around noonish, completely cleared less than 6 hours later...the second one has some daffodils in them (I thought about it for the first but in the car. snowing. so xD)
Glacier Bay Cove
11:42:56 Glacier Kittens
I can’t wait for my daylilies to bloom
All Breeds
11:40:51 Fawn
My daffodils are starting to pop up so that's the flower I think of when it comes to spring :)
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:39:35 Gladius
oooh that's a nice one fawn!
Blue Moon Farm
11:39:15 
Lilacs, Tulips, and Hyacinth are all early spring flowers
All Breeds
11:39:05 Fawn
The Daffodil Dash
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:39:03 Gladius
Boulder - Crisp Crocus Cup?
MC Ace
11:38:02 McFossil
Spring Fling
Boulder Creek
11:37:14 
I need something reminiscent of spring to call a show / race
Like - The Lavendar Cup (already used)
I was thinking something using crocus because it's the first sign of spring for me. But it's a weird word.

Something that has the air of The First Race of the Season. Fresh, inviting.
Nightingales Ridge
11:31:06 𔓘 Issy
Golly! Well done
MC Ace
11:24:42 McFossil
Dang thats wild, but congrats
Coruscant Farm
11:21:00 
wow, today's been 10 years since I started playing this game. where does time go, that's crazy haha.

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests

Embark on a Quest.

Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Vanguard Stables
12:00:04 River | Van
-Click-
Vanguard Stables
11:58:58 River | Van
Ooh are we talking about our horses?
Boulder Creek
11:58:45 
Spring Fling - so obvious, how did I miss that!

ooooo Daffodil Dash that's cute

Now to decide between the two

....and get totally distracted by the five things happening at the same time in the same space
ghost light stables
11:55:41 Toaster rapcoon
Speaking of shinner, the mole rat is back under saddle after six months of stall rest!
-Click-
fire
11:54:12 
-HEE Click-
ghost light stables
11:53:28 Toaster rapcoon
Furn
Twinkie! She actually looks happy in halter classes :0 shinner glares down the judges lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:51:10 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
Twinks was such a good mare this past show, didn't have any twinkletoe moments which is shocking xD
-Click-
Wolfs Ire
11:49:49 Fawn
I want to plant some more this year because I love them so much <3
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:43:58 Gladius
same fawn!!! I actually have a kind of hilarious two-picture series...snow around noonish, completely cleared less than 6 hours later...the second one has some daffodils in them (I thought about it for the first but in the car. snowing. so xD)
Glacier Bay Cove
11:42:56 Glacier Kittens
I can’t wait for my daylilies to bloom
All Breeds
11:40:51 Fawn
My daffodils are starting to pop up so that's the flower I think of when it comes to spring :)
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:39:35 Gladius
oooh that's a nice one fawn!
Blue Moon Farm
11:39:15 
Lilacs, Tulips, and Hyacinth are all early spring flowers
All Breeds
11:39:05 Fawn
The Daffodil Dash
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:39:03 Gladius
Boulder - Crisp Crocus Cup?
MC Ace
11:38:02 McFossil
Spring Fling
Boulder Creek
11:37:14 
I need something reminiscent of spring to call a show / race
Like - The Lavendar Cup (already used)
I was thinking something using crocus because it's the first sign of spring for me. But it's a weird word.

Something that has the air of The First Race of the Season. Fresh, inviting.
Nightingales Ridge
11:31:06 𔓘 Issy
Golly! Well done
MC Ace
11:24:42 McFossil
Dang thats wild, but congrats
Coruscant Farm
11:21:00 
wow, today's been 10 years since I started playing this game. where does time go, that's crazy haha.

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 4405
#1243509
Give Award
Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
Posts: 167
#1244402
Give Award
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
-
Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 4405
#1244427
Give Award

Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
-
Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
-
Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
Posts: 4238
#1246288
Give Award
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 4405
#1246363
Give Award

Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh