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Minerva
05:20:57 Min
She is just phenomenal Tosk im obsessed
Willow Wood Stable
05:17:26 Lo 🌙
Bravery isn't looking too bad in my new captures! Only have one Sub so far. Still have a bunch to rate though.
Nightingales Ridge
05:10:48 Issy
Mornin
Willow Wood Stable
05:10:22 Lo 🌙
Morning all
Golden Crest
05:03:02 | Eve
Damn I didn’t realise how many EEE TBs I had lol
Ravenwood Farm
04:53:32 
What a sweetie she is😍
Breadcrumbs
04:51:58 
This one
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Breadcrumbs
04:51:21 
I got a www-w last RO
Minerva
04:50:00 Min
Prismatic got the only W4 of yesterday and Im very jealous haha. Thats my ultimate goal for a capture day horse
Breadcrumbs
04:48:23 
That's the other
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
04:47:59 
Oh wow, congrats! I'm definitely not jealous at all xD
Breadcrumbs
04:47:29 
She's prlprl too
Nightingales Ridge
04:45:00 Issy
Oof you got a www warmblood with elite bravery to boot 😍
Breadcrumbs
04:44:41 
www rid and www wub
ZequineZ
04:44:09 ZEZ - ZZ
God damn we went crazy 0.o
Ravenwood Farm
04:43:46 
Ooooh nice Breadcrumbs, what breed?
Nightingales Ridge
04:43:07 Issy
Wowwww
Ravenwood Farm
04:41:55 
Oh wow they really did :0
Breadcrumbs
04:41:50 
I got two www mares
Nightingales Ridge
04:40:47 Issy
Wow team south ate huh

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Minerva
05:20:57 Min
She is just phenomenal Tosk im obsessed
Willow Wood Stable
05:17:26 Lo 🌙
Bravery isn't looking too bad in my new captures! Only have one Sub so far. Still have a bunch to rate though.
Nightingales Ridge
05:10:48 Issy
Mornin
Willow Wood Stable
05:10:22 Lo 🌙
Morning all
Golden Crest
05:03:02 | Eve
Damn I didn’t realise how many EEE TBs I had lol
Ravenwood Farm
04:53:32 
What a sweetie she is😍
Breadcrumbs
04:51:58 
This one
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:51:21 
I got a www-w last RO
Minerva
04:50:00 Min
Prismatic got the only W4 of yesterday and Im very jealous haha. Thats my ultimate goal for a capture day horse
Breadcrumbs
04:48:23 
That's the other
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
04:47:59 
Oh wow, congrats! I'm definitely not jealous at all xD
Breadcrumbs
04:47:29 
She's prlprl too
Nightingales Ridge
04:45:00 Issy
Oof you got a www warmblood with elite bravery to boot 😍
Breadcrumbs
04:44:41 
www rid and www wub
ZequineZ
04:44:09 ZEZ - ZZ
God damn we went crazy 0.o
Ravenwood Farm
04:43:46 
Ooooh nice Breadcrumbs, what breed?
Nightingales Ridge
04:43:07 Issy
Wowwww
Ravenwood Farm
04:41:55 
Oh wow they really did :0
Breadcrumbs
04:41:50 
I got two www mares
Nightingales Ridge
04:40:47 Issy
Wow team south ate huh

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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