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Angels angels
03:49:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
If it happens again I will find somewhere elss to work
Escott Estate
03:49:30 ~Del~
Exactly!
Angels angels
03:49:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Right now I am just going to do as I am told and let them handle the stuff I am not allowed to do anymore. See how much longer it takes them and what doesn't get done. Let them see I am not the issue.
Versailles
03:48:39 Versa
Realistically, I just don't think some people want others there, was more my point. And will constantly bend and morph rules to try and make you miserable.
Versailles
03:47:45 Versa
Del,
Well, she was whiny in general, too. I was too small to pick up a german shepherd safely and refused, suddenly it was passed off as "refusing work."

Amongst other things.

One time she snapped at me for "snarking" at her when I said, in a polite tone, "alright, I understand" to something she explained.
Escott Estate
03:46:17 ~Del~
Versa,

Thats such an odd reason to fire someone lol
Escott Estate
03:45:45 ~Del~
If thats truly how it is there, then I would start looking for a new position. Working in an environment where you have to constantly second guess yourself is stressful. Not good for the mental :)
Versailles
03:43:19 Versa
My prior internship I got "fired" from. Why? An older lady who was overseeing me and all of my daily activities dropped a can of treats on the floor. She looked really in pain when she bent over to pick them up, so I offered to help.

She looked like I just screamed an insult at her...
Angels angels
03:42:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
But like I said there is always two workers and we do it all together. The main person I work with and do everything with is the Manager, which is the owners second in command
Escott Estate
03:41:54 ~Del~
Sometimes people will explain how to do something one way but actually complete the task another. We dont always completely verbalize our process. There might be some unspoken rules that are at play here that you can only see if you shadow the task. Im sure this is frustrating.
Angels angels
03:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wichypoo
Yep. That is one of the main reasons I left my last job. I worked there for almost 6 years and did everything the same way all those years which is the way I was taught and told by the owner. Then suddenly everything I was doing was wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:40:35 Witchypoo
I hate those kinds of Bosses. What's right one day, is wrong the next.
Angels angels
03:40:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean two workers work every day and we do everything together.
Escott Estate
03:39:44 ~Del~
I would ask to shadow the owner or a coworker again for those tasks. Maybe a step in the task is escaping you and you don’t even realize it.
Transformers Acres
03:39:42 Geek, Eek
Witchypoo

Well, the owner can't have it both ways. They can't train their employees one way, and do the same thing a different way. It's just gonna confuse, and piss off said workers. They get paid to do what they're trained to do.
Angels angels
03:38:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
The way I was trained is the way she says it is supposed to be done. I seriously don't understand
Angels angels
03:37:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
I think so but I don't know. She will say one thing one day then say it is wrong another day. I only do things the way I was told or shown to do but then it is wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:37:23 Witchypoo
You're just a 'worker bee'.
Do what you're told, regardless of how you were trained.
Escott Estate
03:36:11 ~Del~
Is the owner the type is person where they need to do things themselves in order for it to feel like it was done right? The issue could have nothing to do with you personally. Are there other workers there you could ask to see if there is something that you might be missing?
Angels angels
03:35:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
I thought I was. I was doing everything the way I was trained

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Angels angels
03:49:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
If it happens again I will find somewhere elss to work
Escott Estate
03:49:30 ~Del~
Exactly!
Angels angels
03:49:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Right now I am just going to do as I am told and let them handle the stuff I am not allowed to do anymore. See how much longer it takes them and what doesn't get done. Let them see I am not the issue.
Versailles
03:48:39 Versa
Realistically, I just don't think some people want others there, was more my point. And will constantly bend and morph rules to try and make you miserable.
Versailles
03:47:45 Versa
Del,
Well, she was whiny in general, too. I was too small to pick up a german shepherd safely and refused, suddenly it was passed off as "refusing work."

Amongst other things.

One time she snapped at me for "snarking" at her when I said, in a polite tone, "alright, I understand" to something she explained.
Escott Estate
03:46:17 ~Del~
Versa,

Thats such an odd reason to fire someone lol
Escott Estate
03:45:45 ~Del~
If thats truly how it is there, then I would start looking for a new position. Working in an environment where you have to constantly second guess yourself is stressful. Not good for the mental :)
Versailles
03:43:19 Versa
My prior internship I got "fired" from. Why? An older lady who was overseeing me and all of my daily activities dropped a can of treats on the floor. She looked really in pain when she bent over to pick them up, so I offered to help.

She looked like I just screamed an insult at her...
Angels angels
03:42:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
But like I said there is always two workers and we do it all together. The main person I work with and do everything with is the Manager, which is the owners second in command
Escott Estate
03:41:54 ~Del~
Sometimes people will explain how to do something one way but actually complete the task another. We dont always completely verbalize our process. There might be some unspoken rules that are at play here that you can only see if you shadow the task. Im sure this is frustrating.
Angels angels
03:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wichypoo
Yep. That is one of the main reasons I left my last job. I worked there for almost 6 years and did everything the same way all those years which is the way I was taught and told by the owner. Then suddenly everything I was doing was wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:40:35 Witchypoo
I hate those kinds of Bosses. What's right one day, is wrong the next.
Angels angels
03:40:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean two workers work every day and we do everything together.
Escott Estate
03:39:44 ~Del~
I would ask to shadow the owner or a coworker again for those tasks. Maybe a step in the task is escaping you and you don’t even realize it.
Transformers Acres
03:39:42 Geek, Eek
Witchypoo

Well, the owner can't have it both ways. They can't train their employees one way, and do the same thing a different way. It's just gonna confuse, and piss off said workers. They get paid to do what they're trained to do.
Angels angels
03:38:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
The way I was trained is the way she says it is supposed to be done. I seriously don't understand
Angels angels
03:37:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
I think so but I don't know. She will say one thing one day then say it is wrong another day. I only do things the way I was told or shown to do but then it is wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:37:23 Witchypoo
You're just a 'worker bee'.
Do what you're told, regardless of how you were trained.
Escott Estate
03:36:11 ~Del~
Is the owner the type is person where they need to do things themselves in order for it to feel like it was done right? The issue could have nothing to do with you personally. Are there other workers there you could ask to see if there is something that you might be missing?
Angels angels
03:35:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
I thought I was. I was doing everything the way I was trained

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Art Critique c: August 7, 2024 04:45 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Hey everyone!

I am wanting to improve on my art so thoguht I would reach out to the community for some advice. I am looking for some in depth critique on anything and everything.

Some things I am currently trying to improve:
Lighting & hair ~ I also use Ibis Paint x

Feel free to pick the art apart :3 and thank you in advance <3

Here are some recent examples:


Edited at August 7, 2024 04:48 AM by Twin Flames
Art Critique c: August 13, 2024 02:53 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Another recent example :)

Art Critique c: August 17, 2024 09:32 AM


Cherry Creek Ranch
 
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I have no criticism, just came here to say these are AMAZING
Art Critique c: September 1, 2024 10:09 PM


Marigold Ridge
 
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First of all, I gotta say these are absolutely incredible!!! Your composition is on point and I love the horse in a bar!
As for advice, something that stood out to me were the horse's shadows. That sharp kind of shadow is what might happen if the horse were standing on a hard, reflective surface, not in a more nature-y landscape.
To determine where the shadows should lie, look at the surrounding bg and light sources for clues. For example, a horse standing in clear, still water would likely have a more defined shadow, possibly with part of its reflection, but the water would give it a kind of ripple affect. At other times, the shadow might not be more than a smudge, especially if there's very little light. If there is a very strong light source in the piece, the shadows would be longer and more defined, but would still have softer edges. I'd say for most of your examples, the shadow would mainly be a darkened smudge underneath the horse.
Something that might help is to see what your own shadow looks like at various times of the day and in various settings, and then apply it to your art.
Whoo! That was long, but I hope it's helpful!! Your lighting is overall very strong (especially in pieces 3 & 4 which I ADORE!!)
Do tell me if you've got other questions! You're doing awesome <333
Art Critique c: September 5, 2024 09:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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First, I wanna say that I LOVE your body prep and the way you do hair! I think the most important thing is the darker shadows under the belly.
With some of these pieces, the lighting is more(for want of a better word) distilled, so the shadows should be softer. In the first piece(blue one), there's light in the water, which would be illuminating the belly slightly. Try lowering the opacity of your deeper shadow layer a bit and let the horse's detail show through ;)
The next piece(forest one) same thing- there isn't super strong lighting coming from anywhere in prticular, so the shadows will be much softer. Again, play with the opacity of your layers.
I really like the lighting in the blue/green piece(4th one), it matches the background very well<3
The next one, in water, same thing- light reflects off of water and back onto the horse, so not only would the shadows be lighter, there would be some subtle lighting over top of them.
Next one, the bartender, the lighting is spot on! Only thing I could think of is adding a shadow under the cup on his hindquarters, and possibly a reflection on the shiny countertop.

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