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fire
01:31:22 
issy
fire
01:24:42 
how do you know you created it
fire
01:23:35 
i dont no where the url is
Nightingales Ridge
01:22:04 𔓘 Issy
You're saying you created it but it won't appear when searched ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:21:13 𔓘 Issy
Copy and paste the url
fire
01:20:09 
? how
Nightingales Ridge
01:19:55 𔓘 Issy
Can you link it
fire
01:18:45 
do know why its not showing
Nightingales Ridge
01:17:11 𔓘 Issy
Rude he threw you those ratings
fire
01:16:43 
KHA
Nightingales Ridge
01:16:41 𔓘 Issy
Bingus how beautiful!
Nightingales Ridge
01:15:46 𔓘 Issy
What did you name it
fire
01:15:00 
and fun times for newbies
Winterfall
01:14:44 →Winter
also thanks Issy!
Winterfall
01:14:32 →Winter
Bingus, that horse looks so pretty!! I love its colors
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:27 𔓘 Issy
Oh
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:24 𔓘 Issy
Fire what's your club for
fire
01:14:11 
breeding
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:05 𔓘 Issy
Winter it is premium
Nightingales Ridge
01:13:47 𔓘 Issy
What's the club for??

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fire
01:31:22 
issy
fire
01:24:42 
how do you know you created it
fire
01:23:35 
i dont no where the url is
Nightingales Ridge
01:22:04 𔓘 Issy
You're saying you created it but it won't appear when searched ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:21:13 𔓘 Issy
Copy and paste the url
fire
01:20:09 
? how
Nightingales Ridge
01:19:55 𔓘 Issy
Can you link it
fire
01:18:45 
do know why its not showing
Nightingales Ridge
01:17:11 𔓘 Issy
Rude he threw you those ratings
fire
01:16:43 
KHA
Nightingales Ridge
01:16:41 𔓘 Issy
Bingus how beautiful!
Nightingales Ridge
01:15:46 𔓘 Issy
What did you name it
fire
01:15:00 
and fun times for newbies
Winterfall
01:14:44 →Winter
also thanks Issy!
Winterfall
01:14:32 →Winter
Bingus, that horse looks so pretty!! I love its colors
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:27 𔓘 Issy
Oh
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:24 𔓘 Issy
Fire what's your club for
fire
01:14:11 
breeding
Nightingales Ridge
01:14:05 𔓘 Issy
Winter it is premium
Nightingales Ridge
01:13:47 𔓘 Issy
What's the club for??

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Palette criticism April 15, 2024 06:21 PM


Darkside Dreams
 
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Art credit to the amazing Amethyst, palette by me.
This is a personal piece, made by myself, for myself using art I've paid for. Not a collab, not a sales piece.
Hello! As the title says, I'm looking for some constructive criticism on my palette. This is a piece I've made for myself and where I personally think it's beautiful, I would like another set of eyes to see what I don't.
It can be viewed on my page, and the screenshots below highlight things like the forums and games page.

Note: My screenshots hide my cursor, so the red dots indicate where my cursor is resting, to highlight the hover effects:)

I'd like to hear anything you have to say, but please remain kind and constructive. Thank you!

Palette criticism April 16, 2024 06:25 AM


Tranquility
 
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For me personally, I'd want a lighter text color so I could read the text easier lol. But, I also have terrible eyesight. But I love this palette!! <3
Palette criticism April 16, 2024 08:32 AM


Darkside Dreams
 
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Tranquility said:
For me personally, I'd want a lighter text color so I could read the text easier lol. But, I also have terrible eyesight. But I love this palette!! <3


Thank you! I thought the same, but I thought white text might be worse than the black. I also have awful eyesight and this palette doesn't make me want to yeet my eyeballs lol
Palette criticism April 23, 2024 10:34 AM


KPH Equestrian
 
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what about a light gray instead of black or white? :3
Palette criticism April 24, 2024 10:52 PM


Golden Crest
 
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I design palettes and have a shop ~ (these are just my opinions <3)


What I draw to straight away is the page background being to transparent. I would also make the font colour lighter, including the nav bar etc. In the nav bar drop down, see how the box "Search Horses" overlaps the "Search" word? I would personally put a small space between the two. Same with the chat boxes, I would put a small space to seperate them. It just gives a neater look, I personally think. I personally don't like the overall font (nav bar is good) only because it makes the numbers all wonky, it's always been my pet peeve haha.

margin-bottom: 8px;
the above code ^ helps put a space between

Again, these are my personal opinions
Your palette looks brilliant and you should be proud with the outcome!

♡♡


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