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Sunni
11:09:14 Sunni bunny
Bluey it sucks and am so depressed right now.
I had another interview but they haven't called are emailed me.
Angels angels
11:07:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
Embervale Acres
11:06:30 Solar Phoenix
You're working with yarn, so by cat logic you must be playing with them like a good human XD
Blue Diamond
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Angel
He's just trying to help lol
Angels angels
11:05:13 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Trying to crochet and my cat won't stop trying to get my yarn!
Blue Diamond
11:04:42 Bluey
Oh, yeah. Need to track all my ro foals lol
The Joker
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Ooh her too -HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
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Sunni
Oof. That sucks
The Joker
11:02:10 Ari <3
Yesss
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Embervale Acres
10:57:32 Solar Phoenix
Okay sir!
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Sunni
10:56:42 Sunni bunny
They filled all of their job positions.... Uhg.
Why can't someone just throw me a bone and let me work
Acacia Riding Center
10:45:48 
<3
Niallator Acres
10:45:48 Ivy - Niallator side
thanks a lot acacia!
Niallator Acres
10:45:02 Ivy - Niallator side
aahhh she's mine -HEE Click-
Niallator Acres
10:39:32 Ivy - Niallator side
acacia

i just PMed you
Acacia Riding Center
10:38:34 
Ivy
If you want her I wouldnt mind! I try to keep only high ratings.
KPH Equestrian
10:37:43 Rapcoon | Jester
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Yayyy
Rose Acres
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Angel
Definitely, he doesn't deserve them no more lol
Niallator Acres
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Acacia

*steals*
Angels angels
10:36:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Snipy snip

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Sunni
11:09:14 Sunni bunny
Bluey it sucks and am so depressed right now.
I had another interview but they haven't called are emailed me.
Angels angels
11:07:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
Embervale Acres
11:06:30 Solar Phoenix
You're working with yarn, so by cat logic you must be playing with them like a good human XD
Blue Diamond
11:05:41 Bluey
Angel
He's just trying to help lol
Angels angels
11:05:13 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Trying to crochet and my cat won't stop trying to get my yarn!
Blue Diamond
11:04:42 Bluey
Oh, yeah. Need to track all my ro foals lol
The Joker
11:04:07 Ari <3
Ooh her too -HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
11:04:01 Bluey
Sunni
Oof. That sucks
The Joker
11:02:10 Ari <3
Yesss
-HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
10:57:32 Solar Phoenix
Okay sir!
-HEE Click-
Sunni
10:56:42 Sunni bunny
They filled all of their job positions.... Uhg.
Why can't someone just throw me a bone and let me work
Acacia Riding Center
10:45:48 
<3
Niallator Acres
10:45:48 Ivy - Niallator side
thanks a lot acacia!
Niallator Acres
10:45:02 Ivy - Niallator side
aahhh she's mine -HEE Click-
Niallator Acres
10:39:32 Ivy - Niallator side
acacia

i just PMed you
Acacia Riding Center
10:38:34 
Ivy
If you want her I wouldnt mind! I try to keep only high ratings.
KPH Equestrian
10:37:43 Rapcoon | Jester
-HEE Click-
Yayyy
Rose Acres
10:37:28 
Angel
Definitely, he doesn't deserve them no more lol
Niallator Acres
10:37:20 Ivy - Niallator side
Acacia

*steals*
Angels angels
10:36:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Snipy snip

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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