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Angels angels
05:11:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I rearranged my kingsnake enclosure because he likes to mess it up lol, and I really want to do my female kingsnake's too but I don't fancy getting bit
Ravenclaw Livery
05:10:47 Zen's WBs
This guy is fun -HEE Click-
Stone Wall Eventing
05:07:43 Stone
Fillies you hit the jackpot with her!
Silver Lake Stables
05:06:52 *~Lix~*
Congrats!
Stone Wall Eventing
05:06:45 Stone
First WWW bred since restarting!

-HEE Click-
Four Fillies Farm
05:06:00 Fillies
Wow!!!! Lets freaking go!!!

-HEE Click-
Mythological
04:45:29 Tim:2016-2026
Glad I could be useful.
Home Of The Fallen
04:44:58 Mikey
Ooohhh, okay cool!
Thanks
Mythological
04:43:01 Tim:2016-2026
She doesn't have much for color breeding but keep her for the wild bay. It was just added.
Home Of The Fallen
04:42:52 Mikey
Thank goodness 😅

Are they a new colour? Cause I noticed there's a few people wanting a whole bunch
Cinquemani
04:41:32 Emani
Silver wild bay isn't bad at all.
Home Of The Fallen
04:40:26 Mikey
Hiya! I'm newer here, lol
Just wondering if I managed to breed a good Warmblood for my first try at colour breeding?
-HEE Click-
Cataclysm
04:34:33 Maple Syrup ✨
Millie
Hell yeah! He's cute too
Rosemariny
04:31:31 Millie
Oh! My first 1/1! -HEE Click-
Poppy Land
04:29:57 Poppy
Ooo, that would be a nice suggestion.

Or 'remove all retired' and 'remove all selected age'
Nightingales Ridge
04:28:19 𔓘 Issy
Red
I wish there were select boxes you could tick at you scroll down
The Red Herring
04:24:16 Lil' Red
Cleaning up my stallion watch list is a nightmare
Nightingales Ridge
04:23:35 𔓘 Issy
Hey Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
04:11:46 Ruby/Cheshire
Good evening
Nightingales Ridge
04:10:28 𔓘 Issy
Even exhausted they push through because they have little dependents they love <3

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Angels angels
05:11:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I rearranged my kingsnake enclosure because he likes to mess it up lol, and I really want to do my female kingsnake's too but I don't fancy getting bit
Ravenclaw Livery
05:10:47 Zen's WBs
This guy is fun -HEE Click-
Stone Wall Eventing
05:07:43 Stone
Fillies you hit the jackpot with her!
Silver Lake Stables
05:06:52 *~Lix~*
Congrats!
Stone Wall Eventing
05:06:45 Stone
First WWW bred since restarting!

-HEE Click-
Four Fillies Farm
05:06:00 Fillies
Wow!!!! Lets freaking go!!!

-HEE Click-
Mythological
04:45:29 Tim:2016-2026
Glad I could be useful.
Home Of The Fallen
04:44:58 Mikey
Ooohhh, okay cool!
Thanks
Mythological
04:43:01 Tim:2016-2026
She doesn't have much for color breeding but keep her for the wild bay. It was just added.
Home Of The Fallen
04:42:52 Mikey
Thank goodness 😅

Are they a new colour? Cause I noticed there's a few people wanting a whole bunch
Cinquemani
04:41:32 Emani
Silver wild bay isn't bad at all.
Home Of The Fallen
04:40:26 Mikey
Hiya! I'm newer here, lol
Just wondering if I managed to breed a good Warmblood for my first try at colour breeding?
-HEE Click-
Cataclysm
04:34:33 Maple Syrup ✨
Millie
Hell yeah! He's cute too
Rosemariny
04:31:31 Millie
Oh! My first 1/1! -HEE Click-
Poppy Land
04:29:57 Poppy
Ooo, that would be a nice suggestion.

Or 'remove all retired' and 'remove all selected age'
Nightingales Ridge
04:28:19 𔓘 Issy
Red
I wish there were select boxes you could tick at you scroll down
The Red Herring
04:24:16 Lil' Red
Cleaning up my stallion watch list is a nightmare
Nightingales Ridge
04:23:35 𔓘 Issy
Hey Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
04:11:46 Ruby/Cheshire
Good evening
Nightingales Ridge
04:10:28 𔓘 Issy
Even exhausted they push through because they have little dependents they love <3

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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