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Ravenwood Farm
12:44:43 
Reminder that the event shop ends august 1st
Glacier Bay Cove
12:39:06 Arctic Katz
AL, are art galleries a premium feature, or can free accounts also have them. PM me, I have to poof for a while
Glacier Bay Cove
12:37:33 Arctic Katz
Where did the days go
Glacier Bay Cove
12:37:11 Arctic Katz
Scrambling to get ready for RO
Ravenwood Farm
12:35:03 
I still habe to do a second embryo, breed my braves and at least start planning my matches. And I still have a bunch of unbred WEE combos. Procrastination gets real stressful lol
Fantasy Horses
12:34:29 Fantasy | Fanta
bye everyone!
Legacy Leagues
12:34:04 Alyssa ♡
*go
Legacy Leagues
12:32:06 Alyssa ♡
Welp, I hope even the last minute matches works out for everyone. Im ready even if I gotta do to work first lol
ArcticLights
12:31:28 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe your brain wanted trivia? :)
Embervale Acres
12:30:39 Solar Phoenix
ah...but I also have to make sure all my fodder is bred, dang it
Prismatic
12:30:05 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I don't know why I had Thursday in my head for trivia 😅
ArcticLights
12:29:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Trivia only sundays
Lynx Glory
12:28:55 ⛈ whisper/lynx
no problem
Fantasy Horses
12:28:49 Fantasy | Fanta
hey bluey
Fantasy Horses
12:28:45 Fantasy | Fanta
Alyssa
Not really... I guess as ready as I'll ever be
Prismatic
12:28:27 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Thanks Lynx
Lynx Glory
12:28:08 ⛈ whisper/lynx
prism
trivia is every sunday
Embervale Acres
12:28:06 Solar Phoenix
just finished cramming out a plan, so yes XD
Galloping_Gems
12:27:33 Gemstone
Up*
Galloping_Gems
12:27:25 Gemstone
RO needs to hurry it’s ass uo

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Ravenwood Farm
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Reminder that the event shop ends august 1st
Glacier Bay Cove
12:39:06 Arctic Katz
AL, are art galleries a premium feature, or can free accounts also have them. PM me, I have to poof for a while
Glacier Bay Cove
12:37:33 Arctic Katz
Where did the days go
Glacier Bay Cove
12:37:11 Arctic Katz
Scrambling to get ready for RO
Ravenwood Farm
12:35:03 
I still habe to do a second embryo, breed my braves and at least start planning my matches. And I still have a bunch of unbred WEE combos. Procrastination gets real stressful lol
Fantasy Horses
12:34:29 Fantasy | Fanta
bye everyone!
Legacy Leagues
12:34:04 Alyssa ♡
*go
Legacy Leagues
12:32:06 Alyssa ♡
Welp, I hope even the last minute matches works out for everyone. Im ready even if I gotta do to work first lol
ArcticLights
12:31:28 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe your brain wanted trivia? :)
Embervale Acres
12:30:39 Solar Phoenix
ah...but I also have to make sure all my fodder is bred, dang it
Prismatic
12:30:05 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I don't know why I had Thursday in my head for trivia 😅
ArcticLights
12:29:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Trivia only sundays
Lynx Glory
12:28:55 ⛈ whisper/lynx
no problem
Fantasy Horses
12:28:49 Fantasy | Fanta
hey bluey
Fantasy Horses
12:28:45 Fantasy | Fanta
Alyssa
Not really... I guess as ready as I'll ever be
Prismatic
12:28:27 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Thanks Lynx
Lynx Glory
12:28:08 ⛈ whisper/lynx
prism
trivia is every sunday
Embervale Acres
12:28:06 Solar Phoenix
just finished cramming out a plan, so yes XD
Galloping_Gems
12:27:33 Gemstone
Up*
Galloping_Gems
12:27:25 Gemstone
RO needs to hurry it’s ass uo

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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